Originally posted by: sudanindia2014
I wasn't expecting your update before Friday so this was a nice surprise the second nice surprise was the sweet Acknowledgement it meant a lot to me, not because I deserve it or expecting it but because it was a nice gesture and the impression I had about you is that you are a nice person,I love to see goodness in people and nothing make me happier than when they prove me right ..so I thank you for that
This update was so so sweet ..you said the story didn't move forward in this update from my point of view the story took a very big leap and even if it is just one step for me it is the longest and the most important step forward Abhi came to Aroras\s house gained back Rockstar dadi and Sarla ma's trust and letting Pragya know that he want her back this is the most important move for me so I loved this update so much
loved how you described Abhi's thoughts while roaming the streets of Bombay and in the beach and thank you so much for not giving Tanu more than her real value in Abhi's life, feelings and thoughts
this update was emotional but it was not sad for me I sympathized with Abhi for the betrayal he did not deserve from his sister and in his meeting with the Aroras but I did not cry for him this time because he was doing the right thing and going in the right direction so it is time for hope not crying
but this line of Sarla ma made me cry (Bohat dil dukhaiya apne beta. Kya Karu, ek taraf tum mere beta jaise, aur vo meri beti, mere Jaan ka tookra hai vo )
when he entered the room to see her I felt as if I'm inside the story I tiptoed behind him and stand there watching I wanted her to say something in her dreams to give him hope and she did and I wished he will just crawled into the bed and hold her and he did I felt as if I stood there making wishes and you were making them come true .the way you wrote this scene was just amazing you gave them a private world just the two of them holding each other and holding to each other you may think I'm silly girl but for a moment there I felt embarrassed while reading, as if I'm intruding as if I'm invading their Privacy I felt that I have no right to watch such personal and venerable moment ...so well written and thank you so much for letting them spend the night in each others arms they both deserve this comfort .. The end was great the arrogant Rockstar is back ...the way you make him behave since they woke up and every word he said made me feel that everything is going to be alright and he will make it right ..so from now on I can expect happy updates and those are my favorite kind of updates .😊
Hi!!
Awww thank you! You are also sooo incredibly sweet! I absolutely love the way you loose yourself
In my story and give me such a detailed account of your experience while reading it! It makes it worth while writing. The scene with Abhi and Pragya in her bedroom was would you believe the only scene of this entire story that was planned first. Infact the rest of the story has been written and built up for that one moment where she is asleep. It's only taken 9 chapters to get here, but we arrived in the end! And yes from now on there will be som angst, but they will deal
With it together! I'm really happy you could imagine the scene so vividly, as a writer it's sometimes
Difficult to make your audience see what you see in your head. I'm so desperate for some nice romantic moments in the show and hopefully we won't have too long to go now!! I have started to pen the next chapter, but from here on I've no plan for the story, I want them to have an adventure together and off course a big show down! But I guess we will
Have to wait and see :-) thank you again so so much for your lovely comments !! I'll get the next part up as soon as I can
Lots of love
Rix xxx
Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 2
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