-Abhigya OS Forever and Always- [ALTERNATE HAPPY END ON PG 7] - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome Simmy.
Beautifully written.
Such a sad story.
Thank you for the pm dear.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: smala

Awesome Simmy.

Beautifully written.

Such a sad story.

Thank you for the pm dear.



Thanks Radhana! <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
😭😭😭😭😭😭
Simmi, u made me cry...
I just couldn't imagine Pragya die like that..
It was written beautifully...
I loved it and at the same moment hated it (not in d sense that u wrote it bad, but cuz Pragya died)
Poor Aarav and Aditi...I can't even imagine living without my mom..
a wife and a mother"s absence is the most disheartening 😔
Thnx for this emotinal & heartbreaking OS Simmi dear...
But it was nice overall..
Love,
Adah


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Posted: 10 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: -kanishka-

😭
Simmi, u made me cry...
I just couldn't imagine Pragya die like that..
It was written beautifully...
I loved it and at the same moment hated it (not in d sense that u wrote it bad, but cuz Pragya died)
Poor Aarav and Aditi...I can't even imagine living without my mom..
a wife and a mother"s absence is the most disheartening 😔
Thnx for this emotinal & heartbreaking OS Simmi dear...
But it was nice overall..
Love,
Adah





Aww Adah! So sorry about the tears, I've been upset all day cause this OS keeps bugging me, shouldn't have wrote it, too upset! 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
very heartbreaking and touching OS .Though it made me cry i just loved
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
Oh this was beautiful and so sad!! I really liked the part where he looks at the stars to remember her. It's a very lovely sentiment. I'm glad you can't continue this one, I'm not sure i could handle anymore sadness! Really well written, well done xx
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: x-Ri-Ri-x

Oh this was beautiful and so sad!! I really liked the part where he looks at the stars to remember her. It's a very lovely sentiment. I'm glad you can't continue this one, I'm not sure i could handle anymore sadness! Really well written, well done xx



Thanks! Yeah, I would never continue this, too much crying...
Btw, I love your story, very good writing! <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: simsim25



Aww Adah! So sorry about the tears, I've been upset all day cause this OS keeps bugging me, shouldn't have wrote it, too upset! 😭


No worries buddy..
u wrote it beautifully
no doubt the OS is heartbreaking but it is quite good..
cheers -hands a tetra pack of frooti- (hope u like frooti)
love,
adah 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Okay guys so I have been so upset lately all because of this OS which has effected me loads cause when you think this may have happened to someone in real it is horrible! So I decided to write this alternate happy ending cause you know true love is always strong! Hope you enjoy!

Continued from when Pragya faints into Abhis arms.

***

"Doctor how is she, is she okay, she will be fine?" Abhi burst on the doctor with questions as soon as he saw him walking out of the room.

"You are lucky Mr Mehra that the cancer is only at the second stage which is curable but I can't give a guarantee as it does not always work."

"Doctor, how much will the treatment be?" Abhi asked.

"10 lakhs"

Abhi breathed deeply, money had never been a worry for him and he was glad that there was a positive sign to all of this. "Okay I will get the amount arranged in a few hours and you may start the treatment as soon as possible"

The doctor patted Abhis arm as encouragement and walked away when Abhi called him. "Can I meet her?"

"Of course, why not" the doctor replied, walking away as Abhi walked into Pragya's room watching her open her eyes weakly. Abhi sat down next to her gently and held her hand before speaking. "Why didn't you tell me?" He asked her in a gentle whisper.

"I didn't want to worry you" Pragya told him squeezing on to his hand tightly.

"Why, did you not think I needed you, our kids?" Abhi asked her hurt.

"No, I just thought there was no point, I don't want to waste my last moments as a corpse" Pragya told him.

"Stop it fuggy stop! Who said these are your last moments, you are going to live, live for all of us, I won't let you go so easily" Abhi pulled her into a hug and began to sob his heart out. Pragya tried to comfort him but she wasn't strong enough to get up properly and when Abhi realised this he sat up again.

"And do you think I want to go?" Pragya asked him.

"No, and you won't go either, I spoke to the doctor and your treatment will be started soon" Abhi smiled wiping his tears.

"What, chemotherapy?" Pragya asked.

"Yes fuggy" Abhi told her.

"But, no, I don't want to, Abhi it will hurt, and my hair?" Pragya asked worried.

"Fuggy calm down, listen you want to get better na? Then please, for me, for Aarav and Aditi?" Abhi held her hand again.

"Abhi the doctor didn't even guarantee that I would survive, it will be a waste of money"

Abhi placed his finger on her lips to hush her. "Don't fuggy don't, look at the positive side please, I need you, please. And it is not a waste of money, nothing is for you" Abhi told her before hugging her again. Pragya clutched his arm and nodded.

"Okay Abhi" she whispered.

"Fuggy, don't worry about your hair, I will love you always" Abhi whispered back.

"I love you too Abhi" Pragya spoke as Abhi wiped her tear.

***

"Fuggy! Fuggy where are you?" Abhi called.

"I'm here" Pragya called from the kitchen.

Abhi walked in and pulled her back from cutting the vegetables. "Fuggy, Aarav and Adiri are calling you" Abhi told her and led her out into the garden.

"Maa, can we play with the hose pipe" they asked.

"No, you will catch a cold and then regret it so don't even think about it. Come on into the house" Pragya beckoned them and they sighed but then they looked up to see Abhi creeping behind Pragya with the hose pipe. They smirked as Pragya looked at them in confusion. "What's so funny?"

Pragya turned around and before she could utter a word water sprayed her in the face and Abhi and the children couldn't stop laughing at her state.

"Abhi!" Pragya shouted. "What the hell?" Pragya grabbed the hose pipe and sprayed him with water not stopping as he continued to shriek.

"Fuggy, I will not leave you!" Abhi shouted. "Aarav come help me" Abhi called and he ran over while Aditi ran to Pragya. "Maa ki chamchi" Abhi called at her.

"Abhi" Pragya looked at him sternly, "Dont be mean"

For the next twenty minutes they all spent soaking each other with the water before laying down on the grass laughing. Abhi smiled watching Pragya hugging Aarav and Aditi and it was the best feeling ever. His mind wondered to the memories of the night ten years earlier when Pragya had been diagnosed with cancer but with the support she had received from each and every family member had made her better and Abhi still remembered the day she had recovered fully and he had first been given the news by the doctor.

***

"Congratulations" said the doctor. "The reports have come and she is completely cancer free!"

Abhi who had been sitting on the seat for the past half and hour sprang up at those words and hugged the doctor. "Thanks you so so so much, I don't know how to express it!" Abhi smiled and ran into Pragyas room. "Fuggy, guess what!!" He told her. "You are perfectly fine!!" He hugged her while she stroked his back soothingly.

"You know why?" Pragya asked.

"Why?" Abhi asked.

"Because of your love Abhi, you didn't let me go"

"I didn't and I won't ever let you go fuggy" Abhi kissed her forehead.

***

My thoughts were interrupted with the kids squeals. Today I couldn't ask for anything more, I had my everything in front of me. I had always been scared of falling in love knowing it would hurt, but then chances need to be taken, we should live like there is no tomorrow and that's what I did. I fell in love with my fuggy and one thing led to the next and now I have a family who I love more than myself, I have someone to show my care for. I pulled Pragya and the kids into a strong hug. They would always be mine.

Forever and Always


Okay so that was it! Hope I made up for all the tears in the sad end! Wow! This is making me feel so much better! <3
Edited by simsim25 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
That was beautiful
Thanks for the happy ending
Loved it

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