~Haven: an Abhi OS by -mina-~ - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
New Os? Yay I'm so happy
The title is intriguing "heaven" means paradise so is it related with Abhi state of mind ? He is feeling peace with his Fuggy
With Tanu he was DREAMING of Pragya I was so glad the way he was worried :)
The last scene was the best :)
It was a cute Os
Fabulously well written
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Abhi having a nightmare about the whole kidnapping thing itself is so realistic given how much him and Pragya went through, especially him having gone through almost death situation. And him dreading about Pragya, his brain would be totally tuned to that after a week or so of worrying about just that in the jungle. So this OS presents a very realistic scenario.
I am not sure if he would go to Tannu like that, however what happened in Tannu's house is something that would actually happen if he went.

Hope they separate AbhiGya in the soap too in some way, so that he misses her like this.

As usual, very well written piece, Mina. Thank you for sharing the story, a lovely read.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Mina.. a weekend treat ..lovely surprise
I loved it so much ..I love the idea that the bond they shared during this kidnapping track is unbreakable for life regardless of their relation pre or after..and it had to be unforgettable specially for Abhi..you are right the CVs will not deal with PTSD although it could have given them good track and good scenes and it can be step forward in the regularly progressing Abhigaya love story ..well this is one of the reasons I love our AT we can coverup for CVs slips and create our own reality ,,
I always find it so difficult to bear Tabhi's scene and to be honest I love to believe that their relation is so superficial and meaningless ( regardless of Abhi's plah plah)..yeah he can have fun good time sexual release with her but I can not imagine him feel relaxed and comfortable just hugging her while they are cuddling in bed for me this need a deeper feelings..so I sort of winced when I read these lines but taking them in context make it easier for me .he feels that being with her is him getting his old regular complications free life back so this is the reason he felt relaxed ( my POV) ..I loved everything else so much and it was great reading it ,,thank you so much for always being one of our main providers whenever CVs choose to look the other way
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Tia-

Abhi having a nightmare about the whole kidnapping thing itself is so realistic given how much him and Pragya went through, especially him having gone through almost death situation. And him dreading about Pragya, his brain would be totally tuned to that after a week or so of worrying about just that in the jungle. So this OS presents a very realistic scenario.

I am not sure if he would go to Tannu like that, however what happened in Tannu's house is something that would actually happen if he went.

Hope they separate AbhiGya in the soap too in some way, so that he misses her like this.

As usual, very well written piece, Mina. Thank you for sharing the story, a lovely read.

Tia , abhi could have gone to tanu to escape from pragya instead sleeping in the hall but he dint go .. Thank u for making me see it this way 😆
Edited by harisha_kb - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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What a beautiful OS! Very realistic, very Abhi-like...
Thanks for sharing it with us, mina! 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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🤪 i completly misunderstood the title I read heaven instead of Haven
:) it's ok it happens lol
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
loved it and this is what should have happened after the jungle sequence!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ooh!! In love how realistic this is. At first, I was confused on why there was so much of Tabhi, but it all made sense towards the end.

It truly depicted the depth of Tabhi's relationship, and then their's Abhigya's relationship.

A nice way to compare their relationships without being completely obvious!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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WOW!!
Despite having Tabhi in it I love this!! 😆

No seriously! This is amazing! I will come to the story later but before that I have to tell you I love the way you narrated. All well according to DB Abhi, only to open his eyes to find him back in jungle, struggling to get over the nightmare, running back to see Pragsy is okay deep down knowing that she is the only one who would understand having going through the same thing. Wow! Di! Kudos to you!! ❤️

Wish there were something like this post kidnapping in the show. AbhiGya would have come closer. I love the way you showed the contrast between Tannu and Pragya. Really enjoyed reading this!

Lots of love!

Edit - ignore the res in the first Page. 😆
Edited by Diahh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Thanks all...I have a soft spot for this story 😳

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