Abhigya SS - Opposites Attract [EPILOGUE PAGE 11] - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey simy.
Nice ups yaar.
I loved abhigya scene hey new a hi like as pragya.
Tanks for upd.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved it Simmo.
Awesome update

How I love this Pragya.
Thank you for the pm dear.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yay!! A new story!! I like the title.. 😉
A totally different Abhi and Pragya..
Abhi - Books - Glasses!! Chashmish Rockstar!! 😲😆
"I will sort this Rockstar out." I love this Pragya!! She is so jolly!! 😃
Both on different missions!! 😃 I love it!! 😃
"Tum phir se aa gaye Rockstar" OMG!! I'm loving reading all this!! 😃
I read both the parts together and I had this smile on my face throughout while reading this..
Simmi, I love you for writing this!! 😆 I love it.. 😃

Forgot to tell, Update soon.. I wanna read more and more and more.. Can I get more greedy?? 😆JK.. Take your time.. 😃😉😛

Edited by apple123flower - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for so much positive feedback guys! Next update will hopefully be updated soon! Thanks once again! <3 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice write-up. Read both parts in 1 go.
Liked how you brought book reading Rockstar into the picture. Abhi contemplating his bride...all sounds mature and good.

The story flow is going on well...love to see where you are taking this story line.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: JazzyM

Nice write-up. Read both parts in 1 go.

Liked how you brought book reading Rockstar into the picture. Abhi contemplating his bride...all sounds mature and good.

The story flow is going on well...love to see where you are taking this story line.



Hey Jazzy, long time no see! Glad you liked it!! <3 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OMG so much fun in this chapter Simmo!! And really well written too. Awesome, keep going!! 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for he lovely feedback! Hope you all like this part as well!


Part 3 -

Pragya walked after Abhi who left to get changed into dry clothes.

"Rockstar, listen, Rockstar" Pragya chanted after him.

"Will you please be quite at least let me get changed" Abhi called from the dressing room.

"Calm down Rockstar, relaxation is good for the mind and body" Pragya called back closing her eyes and putting her fingers together

"Whatever" Abhi muttered walking out of the room and straight into Pragya who stood closing her eyes. Abhi fell on top of her. He looked at her lost for a few moments but then she gently blew on his face and he got up.

"Now tell me what is it?"

"First calm down"

"I am, now what was you calling me for?"

"Let's go to the beach"

"Yeah, but first I have to finish some work"

"Are you mad! We are on holiday, and holiday means no work right"

"Yeah but -"

"I will call Daadi" Pragya interrupted

"No don't call Daadi, okay you want to go to the beach, fine we will go, now in fact."

"Yay, let me go get changed" Pragya called and disappeared into the dressing room.

Pragya walked out a few minutes later in a tank top and shorts with sunglasses. She hadn't bothered putting any make up on which Abhi noticed, she didn't care about her appearance at all. Why? Every girl did?

"Ready Rockstar?" She asked

"Yeah" Abhi walked after her locking the door behind them.

***

"I want ice cream!" Pragya exclaimed.

"No, it's too cold." Abhi told her and put his ear phones in while laying on the sand.

"What? I ask you to play in the water you say it's too cold, I ask you to eat ice cream it's too cold as well, why do you think you so hot for everything?" Pragya moaned at him.

"I never said that, unless you think that" Abhi smirked at her.

Pragya smiled, this was the first time he hadn't spoken seriously with her.

Pragya watched him for a few moments before disappearing and coming back minutes later with two ice creams, one chocolate one vanilla.

"There you go" Pragya handed it over to him.

"But I said I didn't want any" Abhi moaned but she ignored him.

The ice cream began to melt and he had no choice but to eat it.

He watched Pragya eat away, clearly having the time of her life - with an ice cream - reminding him of a 5 year old kid. He laughed at her and she looked at him blankly.

"What?" She asked scrunching her nose in confusion.

"Look at yourself"

"What? Just tell me na" Pragya moaned

"You have cream on your nose, stupid"

"Where?" Pragya wiped it but missed a bit.

"Wait let me, Abhi wiped it with his thumb and then continued eating his when he felt someone smack it against him mouth.

"What the hell?" Abhi shrieked.

Pragya laughed at him.

"That's not funny" Abhi moaned wiping his mouth but couldn't help letting a laugh escape.

Both sat on the sand for a moment and then decided it would be best to head back home. Pragya got up and wiped sand off of her clothes, not looking where she was going she walked into a girl.

"What the hell? Are you blind?" She shouted.

"I could ask you the same question?" Pragya shouted back. "Who do you think you are, is this your dads beach? No, then you look where you're going!" Pragya screeched at the girl.

Abhi saw that the situation was nearing a fight and grabbed Pragya by the waist.

"Im so sorry, you see she has anger problems" Abhi told the girl who walked away raising her eyebrows.

"Where are you running now?" Pragya screeched behind her. "Scared?"

Abhi put his hand over Pragyas mouth and picked her up, walking back to the beach house. She kicked and screamed but it was no use against Abhis firm hold.

Abhi pushed open the door and stormed in with a struggling Pragya in his arms and placed her on the bed, gently trying to control his anger.

As soon as he moved his mouth away from her she began blabbering.

"Rockstar! How dare you? From which angle do I look like I have anger problems!" She screeched.

"Is that a rhetorical question?" Abhi sighed scratching his head.

Pragya began to wail.

"Please what happened now?" Abhi asked.

"Your calling me mad, I just wanted to have some fun." Pragya continued her cries.

"Okay, please sorry meri maa" Abhi got up and held his ears.

Abhi noticed that when they had gone shopping earlier Pragya had bought a sweet, he opened the wrapper and popped it in her mouth and she instantly shut up.

"What shall I do to seek your forgiveness?"

"Gulab jaamun" Pragya pouted.

"What? Where do I get them from, this is not India, we are in Switzerland" Abhi told her.

"Well, then don't speak to me because I refuse to accept your apology" Pragya told him and laid down on the bed pulling the duvet over her face.

Abhi sighed and went out to ask Robin for help and thankfully Robin was an expert at making the sweet and got the mixtures out.

An hour later Abhi walked in their room with a bowl full of gulab jaamun's and sat on the bed next to Pragya.

"Pragya" Abhi called but she was still laying with the duvet over her face.

Abhi thought she was asleep and pulled the covers to see her grinning.

"Get up, I got the gulab jaamun for you" he told her and she quickly got up and grabbed the bowl.

"So am I forgiven?" Abhi asked her smiling at her eating away.

"I forgave you the first time you said sorry, it's just fun teasing you" she told him with a smile.

"You will never change, don't worry my time will come and I will get you back" Abhi told her and laid down tired.

It had been a long day and both were tired. Pragya placed the bowl on the side and laid down.

The Rockstar was showing some changes and hopefully after tomorrow she would accomplish her mission and get him to open up to her completely about what it was always worrying him at the back of his mind.

Abhi thought about his promise to Sarla. Changing Pragya and teaching her to calm down was going to be hard, and deep down even he didn't want to change her because he liked her childish side but then sometimes he thought that her smile hid many sorrows and secrets that she hadn't shared with anyone, he needed to know what it was and fell asleep thinking about how he could get her to open up to him.

Please like and comment! <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome Sim .both are on mission to change each other. Pragya is similar to Geet of jab we met.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: vivkriti

Awesome Sim .both are on mission to change each other. Pragya is similar to Geet of jab we met.



Yeah I was trying to show Pragya like Geet, thanks! 😊

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