Abhigya SS: Slight Bump (pg. 10- Ch. 3 update!)

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@putturani

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Loved this addition Anya! Although, don't you know, the danger of abrupt endings is that we readers start demanding more updates and sequels? 😆

I was laughing out loud in beginning part of this update and then suddenly the mood changed and all those underlying currents came to the surface. I like how, even if these are a set of moments throughout her pregnancy, you have kept the characters consistent. Liked the reference to Abhi's tendency to become self-hating, which we saw in the previous updates as well.

This FF might be over (maybe not?) but I demand to know more from you now!

Also, I SO feel you about the assignment thing - my best creativity comes in the face of finals! 😭

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Ayesha

@NasreenAyesha

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#62

Great applause anya 👏
U re writing keenly, it not seem like u re writing first
Pragya works and abhi caresses are so mind blowing.
I loved all ur parts in this such a heart touching
I want to know one thing ehat does temple mean

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Asmaa

@Asma-

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Lovely chapter
Abhi is so cute

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Simmi

@--simmi--

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#64

WOW! Sooo nice! Thanks for such a sweet story!

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x-Ri-Ri-x

@x-Ri-Ri-x

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Is that it?!? I want a sequel!!! That was beautifully written ! Absolutely loved the bit with robin, poor guy! And you captured Abhi and Pragyas emotions perfectly! Well done xxx

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sudanindia2014

@sudanindia2014

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Hi Anya ..so this is the end ,,a perfect end indeed ..it was a beautiful piece from the start to the end and by far one of the most amazing ..romantic ..interesting and well written stories I read in the forum
Thanks for being a dedicated writer and Thank you so much for giving us such a pleasure reading through
Now I'm hooked up with your other master piece fool me ones ..I love it so much hope to read chapter 3 soon

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indi

@indi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#67

That was such a wonderful piece!!! Loved how you showed Abhi's deep feelings, love, fear, uncertainty ... !!!

Thank you!

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valschanya

@valschanya

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: putturani
Loved this addition Anya! Although, don't you know, the danger of abrupt endings is that we readers start demanding more updates and sequels? 😆

I was laughing out loud in beginning part of this update and then suddenly the mood changed and all those underlying currents came to the surface. I like how, even if these are a set of moments throughout her pregnancy, you have kept the characters consistent. Liked the reference to Abhi's tendency to become self-hating, which we saw in the previous updates as well.

This FF might be over (maybe not?) but I demand to know more from you now!

Also, I SO feel you about the assignment thing - my best creativity comes in the face of finals! 😭

So I read this story through for the second time and I sort of facepalmed myself.. what an odd note to end on. Like assembling an IKEA cabinet and rushing to get it done, ending up with wonky panels. *sigh* 👎🏼

I've been in a bid to find really angsty stories on this forum because I really like reading an agonised Abhishek (muahaha). I want to see him repent for his mistakes and genuinely work to regain Pragya's trust. Nothing better than a convincing grovel leading to a reconciliation for these babies.

Yes. You can have like three assignments and two exams to study for.. and end up furiously typing away an Abhigya SS. Like what even is this.

Thank you so much for dropping by to comment! Much love <3

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valschanya

@valschanya

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: NasreenAyesha
Great applause anya 👏
U re writing keenly, it not seem like u re writing first
Pragya works and abhi caresses are so mind blowing.
I loved all ur parts in this such a heart touching
I want to know one thing ehat does temple mean

Thank you! I was going to PM you but because I'm such a scatterbrain I totally forgot. 😕

I'm sorry if I got your question wrong but temple is the area on each side of the head, in front and above the ears. Thank you again for your wonderful words😳