TS: Revenge, Pain, Passion & Regrets Part 6 (Pg10) Completed - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51
Nice TS!
It's good, but I'll be little frank.I'm not liking that bit how you showed that Pragya is that smart and bulbul dumb and impulsive everytime.
Do u think in this show Pragya can ever execute any plan like this...I really don't think so, and bulbul is not the one who everytime takes wrong decisions or she didn't feel sad on Purvi's happening. Even if she is not faking, then she was not fully convinced too what all happened with Purvi.
May be in the show now they will bring that Pragya might be the one who will brings Purvi back but any real intelligent plan will be executed by her to prove her innocenct too, I doubt.
When she still did nothing when her own real sister Bulbul got almost killed three times, swimming pool incident, lohri incident, acid incident, she knows about all the three very clearly, but never made any real efforts to do anything and used to easily come in the talks of the two villains, so how can you expect that she can come with something like this.

Previously also when Purab agreed to marry Alia, she supported him in that decision and never did any real efforts to unite Rabul, I really don't have any hopes on this from her. But from your TS things seems different.

I might have gone little offbeat, but wanted to present my views. I hope you don't mind.

I loved the Rabul interaction shown specially in the last part, it had good intensity.

Will try to read further updates also.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
Fantastic work! Yay finally their truth is out!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
Hey guys, before you guys bash Bulbul or Pragya's character, I just want to make it clear both sisters are equally part of executing part so nobody is dumb or oversmart because there are still few parts left to this TS to judge any character, I am sorry if I hurted anybody 😊
Edited by ashpat3 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: RabulLover

Nice TS!

It's good, but I'll be little frank.I'm not liking that bit how you showed that Pragya is that smart and bulbul dumb and impulsive everytime.
Do u think in this show Pragya can ever execute any plan like this...I really don't think so, and bulbul is not the one who everytime takes wrong decisions or she didn't feel sad on Purvi's happening. Even if she is not faking, then she was not fully convinced too what all happened with Purvi.
May be in the show now they will bring that Pragya might be the one who will brings Purvi back but any real intelligent plan will be executed by her to prove her innocenct too, I doubt.
When she still did nothing when her own real sister Bulbul got almost killed three times, swimming pool incident, lohri incident, acid incident, she knows about all the three very clearly, but never made any real efforts to do anything and used to easily come in the talks of the two villains, so how can you expect that she can come with something like this.

Previously also when Purab agreed to marry Alia, she supported him in that decision and never did any real efforts to unite Rabul, I really don't have any hopes on this from her. But from your TS things seems different.

I might have gone little offbeat, but wanted to present my views. I hope you don't mind.

I loved the Rabul interaction shown specially in the last part, it had good intensity.

Will try to read further updates also.


I am sorry if this part hurt you, if I am not wrong but Pragya does not know about lohri incident and acid attack (which nobody knows except Bulbul), I won't bash any character but I would just say both sisters can do anything for each other, I appreciate everybody's views and comments 😊 so I hope you like next parts
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
Part 6

Alia gets in rage seeing the news.

Tanu : what is all this happening Alia?

Alia : Why are you asking me? if I knew would I be standing here

Tanu : I swear whoever did this I will not spare that person

The fans comes across Alia and questions her. One of them tells her she is disgrace of brother-sister relationship making her furious. She slaps that fan while Abhi comes to stops her and takes her home. People starts asking questions to Tanu about her relation with Abhi to which she cannot answer anything.

Arora house

Bulbul : Di, what is going?

Pragya ; we did not do anything then who made created this drama

The whole Arora family goes to Mehra house

Abhi shouts at Alia for being rude to his fans.

Alia : You are shouting at me because of this rumors?

Abhi : I would have not believed it at first but those videos cannot be lie, tell me the truth before I do something to you

Alia : Bhai, trust me I did nothing, why would I cheat you

Abhi : why should I trust you (says angrily) you ruined my reputation which I earned with so much hard work, I am ashamed to call you my sister

Bulbul : Jiju, ask her what did she do on the holi day with Purab,

Abhi : what do you mean?

Bulbul : will you tell them or do you want me do this honor for you

Alia : Shut up Bulbul, do you think my family will believe your nonsense, you and your sister did this na, blowed our reputation in front of people

Pragya : We are not cheap like who can backstab our own people, so don't you dare bring love word from your mouth, it looks abusive

Tanu : Abhi won't believe you, he know us from many years, so just keep quiet

Abhi : Enough! just stop this nonsense and tell me who leaked this news to media

Alia : Bhai, who do you think will do this? this two sisters planned this all

Pragya : we did not do this, why would we take such a drastic step

Bulbul plays a video when Alia says that she wore the same dress as Bulbul and made Purab drink Bhaang. She tried to go close Purab but her plan was foiled when everybody came to the room at the time.

Dadi slaps Alia hardly for breaking their trust

Dadi : I am ashamed to call you my granddaughter, did you not think about your brother who sacrificed his childhood for you

Alia : Purab, at least you believe me, you know me from childhood

Purab does not say anything

Alia : why don't you say something

Purab : what should I tell you? remember that day I told you that I will sacrifice my love if you want to stay in loveless marriage but you chose to rectify your mistake, I did not know I would have to pay such a big price for one mistake, thank you Alia (says cryingly) for making me realize that friendship bonding are so weak

Bulbul goes to Purab emotionally

Bulbul : I am sorry for everything, I had to do that charade other day so I can show you her true colors, forgive me if possible

Purab : you don't have to

Bulbul : I don't deserve your love, I am sorry (looks down in tears)

Purab : I have nothing left to say anymore

Alia goes and strangle Pragya but Abhi pushes her back on floor. She falls on somebody's feet and looks at a stunning beauty standing in the house none other than Purvi.

Sarla :You?

Purvi : why what happened? shocked to see me here.

Abhi : I am giving you last chance Alia, tell me the truth

Alia who is out of control blurts out the truth in anger

Alia : Yes I did everything, I pushed her in pool, made that acid attack, and tried to kidnap her, I don't repent on my action

Everybody is stunned to hear Alia

Alia : I know I did nothing wrong, and the one who forced to do is my own brother

Abhi is shocked to hear it

Alia : Yes, bhai you are the one responsible for all this mess, you chosed this girl's happiness over your sister, you proved you never love me and never cared for my happiness, if you did then you have never gave my Purab to this middle class girl

Dadi : Shut up Alia, at least have some fear from god, what do you think, for whom your brother build this mansion, this luxurious life, for himself?

Alia : Dadi, he snatched my biggest happiness and he is the one forced me to do all this, I would have never done this and today I lost my own reputation too

Abhi stands quietly listening Alia's harsh words

Purvi claps after hearing Alia's speech

Purvi : what a speech, actually who needs enemy when there is sister like you

Bulbul : what did you get doing all this? are you satisfied with it (says angrily)

Alia : I will not spare you both sisters for this deed and ruining my image in front of people

Purvi : Wow, you already found out that who leaked the news, don't you wanna know the name?

Everybody gives a confused look on her

Purvi : Yes I did leaked it,

Flashback

Late at night Purvi spots Neil with Alia and Tanu talking about kidnapping and snaps the pictures. Purvi with the help of her friend who works on TV channel sends the video and pictures in all channels.

Purvi ; Alia Mehra, just wait and watch how will I bring you on my feet

Flashback ends

Tanu and Alia fumes in rage

Purvi : So, how did you find my surprise?

Alia : how dare you ?

Purvi : I hope now you got to know what does insult mean

Abhi stands lifelessly giving no reaction and response making Pragya worried

Dadi : get out of this house, and don't show me this face in whole life

Alia : i have equal right on this house

Dadi : you are forgetting this is my Abhi's house

Bulbul : Wait Dadi, they should get a good farewell na

Pragya : Bulbul is right, after all they worked so hard

Purvi calls the cops. The police arrests both Alia and Tanu

Alia : Leave me I said, bhai

Purvi goes to Abhi to apolozise

Purvi : I am sorry jiju, i never wanted to do all this, I know i don't deserve your forgiveness

Abhi leaves taking his car

Dadi : my Abhi is totally shattered , I don't know how will be he feeling

Purab : He needs some time alone, I am sure he will be fine

Bulbul : Purab?

Purab : what happened?

Bulbul : thats what I am asking you

Purab : I feel so bad for Abhi, I don't know for what mistake he is punished

Bulbul cries on his shoulder

Pragya gets more worried when Abhi does not pick up her calls

Bulbul : what happened di?

Pragya : Your jiju is not picking my phone, I don't know how will he be, I should have not let him leave alone

Purab : Don't panic di, I will go look for him, lets go Akash

Abhi in car remembers Alia's words when she accused him of stealing her happiness. His moments with Pragya while speeding the car. He remembers how he used to carry Alia when she got hurt in her leg in childhood.

Purab and Akash comes at home with a very tensed face

Pragya : Purab, what happened, why are you not answering me

Purab takes Pragya to Abhi's room who is sitting on floor folding his legs and eyes full of tears.

She gently puts her hands on his shoulder but still does not get response. She shouts at him this time.

Pragya : Say something, don't sit like this

Abhi : what do you want me to say? go away from me else you will feel I will take your happiness

Pragya : Please don't say that, i know you cannot do that

Abhi : you still believe me, maybe you did not hear what Alia said

Pragya : I don't care (puts her hand on his face) whatever people say, I know you more than anybody

Abhi gets up seeing her care

Abhi : But I don't deserve anybody's love, I am destined to be alone anyways, just go

Pragya grabs his collar and shouts at him

Pragya : If you wanted me to go away then why did you came to save me, should have let me die, why you did everything for me

Abhi is speechless

Pragya : why are you quiet? answer me

Abhi : I don't find it necessary to tell you the reason

Pragya : Fine, then I am leaving

Abhi holds her hand and pulls her close to him and confess his love for her.

Khanna house

Bulbul ; I know I hurt you a lot by my charade

Purab : I will forgive you on only one condition

Bulbul : what?

Purab : You have to promise me you will never ever leave me alone

Bulbul : I promise

Purab : I only have you after Abhi, i don't want to leave alone again

Bulbul gets emotional hearing it

Edited by ashpat3 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: ashpat3



Thanks dear for comment, you will see an intense abhigya & rabul at the end, who do u think leaked news to media


... Hmmm... I would like to say either Purab or Purvi or maybe both because they are the accused ones...

Well, off to read the final chapter and find out! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
*grins widely*
So it was Purvi! I was right! Well, at least half right! And Bulbul was acting!

Finally done! Nice take on the kidnapping track! 👏 I enjoyed reading the story and look forward to more from you!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: ashpat3


I am sorry if this part hurt you, if I am not wrong but Pragya does not know about lohri incident and acid attack (which nobody knows except Bulbul), I won't bash any character but I would just say both sisters can do anything for each other, I appreciate everybody's views and comments 😊 so I hope you like next parts

No Pragya knows about both the incidents, lohri incident Purab and Bulbul both told her about it together (when Purvi informed her about the happening,and she went to meet them )and this time Bulbul even said she has a doubt on Tanu,as she saw her there. But Pragya replied we don't have proof so we cannot do anything. And that acid attack plus corporator also , bulbul told this thing only to Pragya, after reaching home on phone conversation, and Pragya said she'll talk to Abhi about it, and even asked her not to worry...
Well I agree, both sisters are good soul and positive characters, though many times someone disappoints me in her sister's love (as the things are not that evident or great from someone's side as from the other)
But thanks for appreciating 😊
Edited by RabulLover - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
I loved this update!
Continue soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
Hi Ash...I'm sorry I'm bit late in catching up , was little down on certain things, but weekend helps along with this TS!
Aah it's pretty good...I left where Purab's heart got broken and is again here when he is the arms of his love which I hoped to see last time...😆
So the two sisters joined the hands and got well with the truth behind..nice..then I loved the portrayal of Purvi's character..so I want her to be in show also depicted like this only..even if she is shattered..she is determined to expose her culprit that also with a solid proof! Best thing that you made her work alone on her plan without taking anyone's assistantance 👍🏼

And this Alia...😡, she now will get to know how it feels to be disowned by your family..she badly deserves it...because of her three people have gone through it ...Purvi, Bulbul and Purab(he also got disowned by Mehra's and Bulbul at the same time..so)

I never want Purab - Alia marriage to be brought again🤢 (just even hate it's feels..😆), but thank god it ended before even started..😳

At present things seems good for future...Abhi confessed his love for Pragya, Purab and Bulbul got united, Alia and Tanu got exposed, Purvi case is solved!

Feeling bad for the rockstar😭, I really love and admire him...everyone knows that once this phase has to come in his life and he'll be completely shattered on this. The feels that how he was blaming himself for ruining her sisters life(though he did nothing intentionally) and how was telling Pragya to go away from him..were heart wrenching...hope with the help of his destined partner cum wife..he is brought back to reality and life again..and we see our rockstar back to thumping and pumping!

RaBul..my loves...❤️...I loved those special portrayal of moments like getting close to him and asking with intensity that you don't want me to come or something like that..then Bulbul crying on Purab's shoulder...those emotional senses that what she means to him.

So I want Bulbul in the show even to understand the Purab's phase like that...what all she means to him...like he even said these things na during his confrontation with Abhi once (when Bulbul wanted to go to kidnappers)..that he doesn't have family from childhood ..only Bulbul is there with whom he can think of starting a family...

Hope now these two also get married soon..enough of heartbroke they have faced..it's time for some real love to blossom...😳


Will be waiting for next update...how after all this mess got clear..things proceed in everyone's life...hope to see some happy moments too after all the high voltage drama..may be for short time as you can't expect much from kkb 😆...but still atleast before next thunder strikes..some cherishable moments need to be there!

PS: sorry for this big rant...can't help at times when I'm writing, though I'm very bad at writing skills 😛😆...

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