I am half way reading but wanted to comment on how much of an amazing job you have done love ^_^ your writing is superb and very efficient. Fantastic job Sim!😊...more please😳
EDIT: Some fav quotes
He had vowed to protect Pragya during their marriage and along with that came the responsibility of her family and he was going to complete it, not for their sake but for himself too.
- Simsim darling, this is great. my favorite part of the whole thing. He has shown responsibility but in a discreet manner (in the show). this quote right here makes it easier to understand that the guy is doing it for himself. OMG he's love-struct!
"Welcome! How are you all?" He asked.
-🤣 okaaay this is so Neel! He's so creepy when he acts super friendly in these situations. You brought out the right character in him. 😆
Abhi put his hands together and did something he never had done before in his life. He prayed to God to make Pragya survive.
-Hayee she's bringing change in him. I want to know what other things she can do to change him so would asking for a sequel be too demanding?😳
"and I love her anyway." He said
-UFF UFF UFF... Sorry the excitement is talking over me 😳. This is self-explanatory. perfect. amazing.
Thank you for this love!
Edited by IamMeethu - 10 years ago
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