KKB Omnibus - 10 Shades of Life - Tanu Mehta - Upd 15th June - Pg. 6

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-Nimmy-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

oh my god

aafrah u have once again amazed me with ur writing skills

u have a really good imagination

this story describes sarla 's zidd for seeing her daughters happily married

the best line was

only pragya and bulbul were paying it this time

u rocked it aafrah u rocked it

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sudanindia2014

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Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Aafrah ..I loved the background of Sarla it explains much about her present personality ..so BB is not Sarla's daughter hmmm understandable judging by how Sarla behaved in certain situations although it cast a selfishness shadow on her ..when things turned tough she took the side of her real blood Pragya ..can not help feel sad for BB if she ever discovered that Sarla is not her biological mother after all..if this happened in the show I hope against hope that they give BB a beautiful and true love story.. find a loving life partner can be the only thing that may help in make this wound healing with time

very good Aafrah ..waiting to read the rest ..I do not mind whoever you choose I'm interested in all of them

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Asmaa

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Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Fantastic os :)
It was just perfect and well written
I felt all the feelings you put inside this story. I was surprised how you managed to convey this strength and those emotions of this woman who might be an example for us . This is is touched me a lot
So thank you for this amazing Os :)

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nitarata

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Oh dear! I anticipated Sarla to have a very rough patch in her life, but did not expect this Bulbul angle. Some people have been complaining in the forum that Sarla treats BB a little less than Pragya... I could not stop correlating that.

But it all gives sense to why Sarla is so insecure at the same time strong as well.

I guess Sarla will not be able to tolerate Pragya having to go through a similar situation like her (she already has to some extent unaware to her) if TaBhi baby is to come into picture even if it is fake.

Thanks for a engrossing read, Aafrah.

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Diahh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

AAFRAH!! WOW!! WOW!! WOW!!

Amazing!!! 👏👏

Loved it!!

This story very well justifies Sarala we see in the show!! BB not being her own daughter!! Well, many have questioned her different treatments and her constant worrying over Pragya so... this justifies it too!

And RoDaadi!! Wow! Never even think of their equation during the early days. But it could have been something like this! I love this Aafrah!!

And thank you for this superb idea!!

Well, i am looking forward to reading Aaliyah and Bulbul too after reading this story! Wonder whether she knew. i am guessing she knows.. well, lets see! Waiting eagerly for the next one! 😃

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Simmi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Aafrah! Wow! Wow! Wow!

Like how are you so amazing! This was great! A fantastic insight to sarla! I would defo replace you for the kkb writers anyday! Cause I know you would make the storyline so much more clearer and I teresting, and I'm sure you would never run out of ideas what with all these fab stories you have been sharing with us!

Especially loved the last few lines of this! Amazing work!

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rosal_awesome

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Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

That was just too good aafrah! 👏 last line was the best punch line you could gave given this os 😳 somehow I find Aaliyah very intriguing, with her smart aristocratic looks and elegant poses everywhere makes me wonder if there's some hidden secret we know nothing of...looking especially forward To that OS of your's 😉

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Mina

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Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

uff aafrah <3

gutwrenching, heart-thudding read. thank you. love this strong sarla; love that she was her father's laadli; love the way she took in bb. can even see the seeds of hysterical overbearing sarla here too. thank you so much for this thoughtful story on her.

and the ominous ending :( but also exactly perfect.

fantastic work aafrah! feel so lucky to get to read it :)