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@putturani

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Interesting start Advena! 👏 I usually don't hold well with Abhi getting jealous plots (since he has no right to) but I like you as a writer so I'm along for the ride. 😃 I especially loved this line: "Abhi was going to go have a talk with the man about boundaries."

Because it's so true! Suresh does need to learn some boundaries.

Can't wait to read more!

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sam

@sam78

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Awesome start. Please continue soon.

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amana

@AmanaR

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Oooh jealous Abhi all alone with his wife in an alcove! Sounds exciting!!

I don't know if I've already said this but I've read your other work and I think you're an amazing writer. Waiting to read more :)

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Chirikula

@Chirikula

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

AMAZINGGG. WAITING FOR THE UPDATEDE

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rosal_awesome

@rosal_awesome

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Such a lovely start :) loving this abhi 😛 please continue soon and I possible pm me whenever you update!! Thanks 😃

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sukisona

@sukisona

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

I really love the beginning. Abhi's thought process is perfect here. The nun part really got me. 😉

Please continue ASAP!

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Anjum.

@Anjum.

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Just saw this on the forum! Would love to read more :)

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valschanya

@valschanya

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Why do I have an affinity to that subtle-imperceptible-yet-not-altogether-definite transition from being indifferent (or hateful) to not being indifferent? (What the heck am I saying) I just really really like this phase because I love it when the guy is clueless and/or in denial with all these newfound feelings. Please update soon! This is gonna be awesome!