The Black Anarkali | in progress | an AbhiGya SS by mina - Page 15

DIII!!! After coming out of my Condaness I edited my post!!!!

Originally posted by: Diahh

Okay moving on from being so Anacondaish! First of all sorry for the late comment!!! Didn't know you updated this till I read a PM you sent almost a month ago!

Di I am glad that you updated this!!!! You know how much your anacondas love ANADATE right!!!! 😃 The whole thing was so so good! All the convos! I specially liked Ragav being nice to Tannu! Abhi could be such an idiot at times! (Or here all the time!) I liked the convos with the others at the table! Pragya relaxing and enjoying! It was all really well written! But the way you wrote about desert!!! Eeeppp!!! I so want desert now!!!

"It was topped with strawberry whipped cream dusted with cardamom powder, along with a bright green sprig of mint as garnish. She took a bite and closed her eyes as the rich flavours melted on her tongue. The lush chocolate flooded her senses, followed by a slight kick from the tart hint of strawberry and the earthy note of cardamom. She felt a smile starting to stretch her cheeks, just from the joy of tasting the delicious confection."

Seriously diii!!!! 🤪

Of course you know na! Waiting for more!!! Soon!!!!

Lots of Ana loveee!!❤️

LOL, I should have waited for the rest of your comment, I know 😆

Sorry to torment you with dessert?? But thank you for pulling out that quote. I'm reading it now and I'm like who writes like that??? This girl is so cliched??? But wait no!!! It's supposed to be that way. So I'm proud of myself too...hah I'm being crazy sorry 🤡

Yes Raghav being nice to Tanu was important to me. He's our sophisticated man of the world after all. Really happy you enjoyed the whole chapter. And hopefully I can make Abhi not always an idiot...!! He's not so bad after all na 😆

🤗 to my diyu!!

Originally posted by: Diahh

DIII!!! After coming out of my Condaness I edited my post!!!!

ji thank you! full conda comment full english comment!! love love love!

Originally posted by: -mina-

Yay ayeshu glad you liked! It makes me so happy and proud when you say reading it made you visualize the scene easily. Thank you so much. Will try to write more, but don't know how soon, few other things on my mind right now 😳

Your mind bhi na always flooded with ideas.
And my mind is fed with this current track.
Haha thank u minu 😳

I shouldn't have read this SS for two reasons...

One - you know who. But I replaced him in my mind with the man with a sexy voice 😉

Two - Will have to give you your own time to put up Part Four! 😆

Very very well written. Every minute detail has been taken care off. Liked the idea of Alia and Pragya bonding!

Loved jealous Abhi 😛...And I loved how past disclosures portrayed Pragya to be totally bindaas! 😃

Oh Em Gee!!! This was amazing😃. I loved how u made all their reactions.

Originally posted by: JacobB

Oh Em Gee!!! This was amazing😃. I loved how u made all their reactions.

That part of how they reached the peak👍🏼 There could be no worse way for Raghav to have said that line.

I only had one complain... Y did you have to HEAT up that last line so much... have me sitting here like🤪😲🤢

Anyways I really enjoyed this a lot and please give me a PM as to when u will be updating. It will be much appreciated

Thank you so much Jacob!! Go glad you liked the story. I keep thinking I need to edit that peak line, it's awkwardly said - but you picked up on it perfectly so maybe it doesn't need changing at all 😆

The last line...well yes, precisely for that reason. To set the mood for the next chapter.

Not sure when I will be updating. I am very sorry but in general I don't send PMs - I'm not organized for it.

Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment!

Originally posted by: SaaraDON

I shouldn't have read this SS for two reasons...

One - you know who. But I replaced him in my mind with the man with a sexy voice 😉

Two - Will have to give you your own time to put up Part Four! 😆

Very very well written. Every minute detail has been taken care off. Liked the idea of Alia and Pragya bonding!

Loved jealous Abhi 😛...And I loved how past disclosures portrayed Pragya to be totally bindaas! 😃

I still can't believe Bhai read this story 😲 😲 😲

Thank you so much Bhai, really glad you enjoyed despite the wrong model for Pragya's friend 😆

And yay, Aalu-Prags bonding & Prags' adventurous past are two parts of the story that are important to me, very happy to know it resonated with you also.

Part four...dunno! In process still 😳

❤️ ❤️ 🤗

Hey mina...

Mina nice SS
I have read it around 15 times don't no why I love this.
Thank you.