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Posted: 10 years ago
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A very nice and realistic drabble!
Loved it Mina!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -mina-



YOU YOU YOU make me happy just by driving by. I want to talk to you more but I don't because I fail at managing life. And I'm in some bizarre mood right now so please forgive this appalling frankness.

Anyway, thanks for the comment. Pragya needs not a hug but an electric shock up her spine. And a really hot new boyfriend. And just to clarify, she's not staying on. Not intentionally.

Glad you liked the gif. Credit goes to Sriti's face of course, but I guess I should note somewhere that I made the gif 😆



So, is your bizarre mood because of the show? 'coz if it is, then its totally not worth spoiling your mood for. Though - if it makes you write like this, why should i complain??? See - we readers are a selfish lot 😉. Hope you feel better though. Its a bright sunny, crisply cold day outside.

Yep, we should talk more. But life and its nuttiness... i know the feeling about not being able to manage it... grrr. I blame it all on getting older every year. That's my excuse and i am sticking to it 😆.

You know, cool as it would be for P to have a hot new BF, NO. Why should a woman need a man to define her or help increase her own sense of self-worth? What she needs is that electric shock you have waiting for her and then some one/something/ some event to make her start realizing her own worth by herself. The men will follow as moths drawn to a flame. Suckers.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: kdsubs


So, is your bizarre mood because of the show? 'coz if it is, then its totally not worth spoiling your mood for. Though - if it makes you write like this, why should i complain??? See - we readers are a selfish lot 😉. Hope you feel better though. Its a bright sunny, crisply cold day outside.

Yep, we should talk more. But life and its nuttiness... i know the feeling about not being able to manage it... grrr. I blame it all on getting older every year. That's my excuse and i am sticking to it 😆.

You know, cool as it would be for P to have a hot new BF, NO. Why should a woman need a man to define her or help increase her own sense of self-worth? What she needs is that electric shock you have waiting for her and then some one/something/ some event to make her start realizing her own worth by herself. The men will follow as moths drawn to a flame. Suckers.



The mood had other factors, and I did keep trying to remind myself that it's just a show 😆

It's snowing where I am. But light, so bearable.

You're right, she doesn't need a man to help define her or increase her sense of self-worth. And I love the image of men being drawn to her if she found a way to renew herself. I was more just wanting her to be with someone hotter than him because it would annoy it. And also, men can be fun to have around - she should get to have that kind of fun, and not be mocked for it by the likes of her hypocritical husband -_-.

You know what I should do...go try to write that Vikrant POV thing a few people have suggested. Leave these two to their sad mire and find hotness between a couple that was actually happy to be together...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: smala

Loved it Chutki owl.

Simple yet beautiful.
You brilliantly captured Pragya feeling and her perspective.
Wonder how long Pragya could put up with this so called marriage.
If she can't be angry with him at least I want her to be indifferent with Abhi.
She is the reason I started to watch this serial and I think she also will be the reason I will quit watching this serial if she continue being how she is now.
I do not understand her silent.
Reading your story make me want her sing to Abhi this song :
Human by Christina Perri .
Thank you chutki for writing this drabble.



Thank you Akka. Maybe after this kind of stunt she would learn to be indifferent. I understand why you would want to quit - we won't get that Pragya back. But I do keep hoping something different will happen.

Gorgeous song!! Thank you for pointing me to it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Mina the title is perfect
Edited by rbb1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Mina Di one word- BEAUTIFUL!!

Oh! Pragya!!! 🥺 This is so like it!! it is just so BEAUTIFUL Di!! superb!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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What a heartbreaking piece, Mina! 🥺

Her reality is so bleak and each situation in her life is just making her resigned to her ill-fate. She has not become fully numb on the inside yet, but in her case, I can't say it'll be long before it happens and not for the better.

In cases like these, you see cracks in a person, fractures in their psyche that are beyond repair and I can't help but fear for Pragya - Is she strong enough to withstand it? I don't know...

It is a dark and powerful piece that if expanded, I have no could it would be to Pragya's detriment. Everytime I imagine her as a realistic character, it makes me realize that there is absolutely NO WAY that she could be of such a sound mind without her body taking drastic measures to heal her and some SERIOUS therapy.

*standing ovation* BRILLIANT, Cheri!
Edited by Fanaah - 10 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you to everyone for reading and commenting!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yayy!! I love how this is on the first page again. It's wonderful to read this again! One of my favorites among your many works!
Edited by -Trishh- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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AHHH WHERE HAS THIS TREASURE BEEN HIDING??
I dont think I've ever fully watched the MMS track, because of countless reasons. But basically, THISSS is what I wanted after all was revealed and done. I wanted her to wake up and smell the coffee, which you so beautifully exemplified in the drabble!

He had good in him, but it was never going to be for her, and she shouldn't have forgotten.
That line above got to me, especially. Maybe because its still true in many aspects. 😭

Thanks for the sad, yet much-needed read, Mina!

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