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Tupimanmus

@Tupimanmus

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#71

Loved it. Wonderful. You just made my sadness poof. Okay time to investigate the story...

Hmm. Spelling mistakes wasn't much but I want you to proofread the parts as possible. It is, by the way, the transitional chapter you've written about. So the story will be getting into a high voltage drama. I wonder how they'll end up in a one night stand. But it seems close.

I have to go. Don't have much time. Battery's dying. Bye

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Acontractor

@Acontractor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

I'm new to this forum, but I have to say this story is one of the best I've read so far! Such perfection in every chapter!! Can't wait for the next update.

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@rbb1

Elite

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Really nice update Aww poor Pragya she cannot tell Bulbul the truth and it's hurting her but at least she has Abhi now who will listen to her and she can trust him, so they will spend the day together can't wait to read that it will be great

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Miss.M

@Miss.M

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#74

OMG!!! Aafrah!!Such a wonderful chapter! That confusion in Abhi's mind as to whether he wanted to kiss Pragya...and how he hopes she doesn't remember what he did so that she doesn't stop talking to him. The impatience that Pragya feel, that he hasn't called or come to see her! And that she hasn't thought about Suresh till Bulbul talks about him. The curious questions from Pragya to Bulbul about Tanu and missing each other (as friends for now)... And also loving the awkwardness...not because I don't want them together but because I like that he is a good guy and does realise that they are both married and because of that he shouldn't have almost kissed her. Can't wait for the next chapter!

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Renukha

@renukha871

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#75

Okay a round of applause for this story!!!!!

Sorry, I couldn't comment or read your stories earlier, I had too much of stuff going on. So, I finally had free time and catching up with the fictions written in this forum.

I've only read till the 5th part, so my comment will be up to that. Just want to let it out first before reading the other.

Your story is amazing!!! I loved the way how you showed both Abhi and Pragya tried so hard making their marriage, but it seems the other spouse has other priorities.

And the conversations you had between Abhi & Pragya in her house, and how smooth everything was between, is what Abhi and Pragya would be in the show too minus the irritating MUs.

I know it would seem like cheating (it is, actually) if Abhi & Pragya were ever to make out, but that's what I want them to do in your story when I was reading the 5th part.

Phew! That was long!! Sorry for the long rant.

Will read the 6th and comment later!!!

Keep writing as this story is awesome!!! 😊

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sam

@sam78

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#76

First you are amazing writer. Thank you for writing new story on abhigya.
I readed your story on one go. Your story concept is different but is amazing story. It reminds me one of the bollywood movie.
I love the abhi and pragya meetings. Tanu is so self center that she doesn't see her own husband loneliness. Suresh is being idiot for not seeing pragya's care for him. Last part was beautifully written. Waiting for more of abhigya meeting and friendship.
Once again thank you for new story. Please continue soon. Waiting for to more updates.

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Diahh

@Diahh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#77

AAFRAHHH!!! Thank you for this mid week surprise!! Sachchi!!! Love love love this!! And I am falling for this Abhi! Uff! He is such a good guy! So considerate, bindass, understanding,etc, etc, list goes on!love how he tries to avoid Pragya coz he feels ashamed and coz he doesn't want to complicate things. Loved how he understands and help Pragya instinctively when Suresh topic comes up.And Pragya missing Abhi and identifying him to be the sudden storm in her dull life! 👏 I like how Pragya tries to find out about Abhi in the same way he did in earlier chapters! 😆 RaBul are such great catalysts in bringing AbhiGya together!I liked the scene where all 4 have dinner together smiling sharing their lives etc. Glad that both AbhiGya are aware of the lonliness in eachother's lives.

Lol Aafrah there are many things I liked in this update but cant really pin point it all!! I love this story and thank you very much for this wonderful story! A big hug to you girl! 🤗

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Aafrah Khan Ahluwalia

@Aafrah-SA

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: -mina-
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unres

nononononononono no aafrah i am so unsatisfied! leaving me there!! *cries* i mean i am so glad to have an update before friday, and this was an absolutely darling chapter built around the visit to BB's but ahhh the tension!!! this is such an awesome story, i love the slow burn, especially abhi's internal conflict. i like how this is a bit of a rest period for pragya - transitional as she said. little does she know what toofan abhi will become in her life...but the best best kind of storm eventually, i think! uff thanks for the delicious update! now go write some more please!! <3 to you :)

Haha trust me Mina, I am unsatisfied myself! I wanna write more!! But damn my office! Been a tough week so far! But lets see, if I can write more!

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Aafrah Khan Ahluwalia

@Aafrah-SA

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: Mkgp88
OMG!!! Aafrah!!Such a wonderful chapter! That confusion in Abhi's mind as to whether he wanted to kiss Pragya...and how he hopes she doesn't remember what he did so that she doesn't stop talking to him. The impatience that Pragya feel, that he hasn't called or come to see her! And that she hasn't thought about Suresh till Bulbul talks about him. The curious questions from Pragya to Bulbul about Tanu and missing each other (as friends for now)... And also loving the awkwardness...not because I don't want them together but because I like that he is a good guy and does realise that they are both married and because of that he shouldn't have almost kissed her. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Hey I am glad that you picked up the hint, that Pragya is not thinking of Suresh or his whereabouts much! It is very uncharacteristic of her, but her head is occupied with Abhi, and she has no clue about it so far!

I didnt know how to pen that down, I was hoping readers would get the idea!

Love

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Aafrah Khan Ahluwalia

@Aafrah-SA

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: sam78
First you are amazing writer. Thank you for writing new story on abhigya.
I readed your story on one go. Your story concept is different but is amazing story. It reminds me one of the bollywood movie.
I love the abhi and pragya meetings. Tanu is so self center that she doesn't see her own husband loneliness. Suresh is being idiot for not seeing pragya's care for him. Last part was beautifully written. Waiting for more of abhigya meeting and friendship.
Once again thank you for new story. Please continue soon. Waiting for to more updates.

awww...thank you so much for those kind words!! :)

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