AbhiGya SS ~ Fix me ~ Part- 10 ~ Page - 40:) - Page 20

Originally posted by: Nitya_Suresh

You're welcome.. 😳

I really like the last line Abhi says 😃

Originally posted by: sara7iris

wondeful and fab update...very well written...l love it...there is sadness and the need in each one of them...very nice...pls update soon

I know the sadness makes it so real and you can actually feel their pain while reading the story

Originally posted by: rbb1

Nitya just read the update and feel really bad for Pragya and Abhi, I love the last line how Abhi says "Come back please. I am too broken without you. Come back and fix me." he needs a hug poor guy.

it's sad to see dadi so broken and hurt by Abhi and Aliyah, she believe her family was good and now she blames herself for how they turned out not good

Aaliyah did all of these can't believe she did that to her brother

can't wait to read your next update

Thank you Ray.. Thank you for commenting on the line..
Daadi is wounded.. she believed in her grandchildren and well.. They are not worth it.. :|
Aaliya is just confused.. :/
Thank you.. :)

Originally posted by: rbb1

I know the sadness makes it so real and you can actually feel their pain while reading the story

I agree and while reading I had tears in my eyes

Originally posted by: mahabirf25

Wow that was mind blowing and amazing! Pragya finally standing up to Abhi and giving him the cold shoulder for his deeds. Abhi realization of how much he loves and cares for Pragya and how much she loved him in return.Superb can't wait for the next update :)

Thank you so much.. :)
Yes, Pragya needs to stand up for herself..
Thank you for commenting.. :)

Originally posted by: Krazzy4u786

Wow!! Amazing update!

Loved it, can't wait 4 the nxt part!!

Thank you for commenting.. :)

Originally posted by: sara7iris

wondeful and fab update...very well written...l love it...there is sadness and the need in each one of them...very nice...pls update soon

Thank you so much.. Will do.. :)

Originally posted by: sara7iris

]I agree and while reading I had tears in my eyes

my heart started beating fast when I read Abhi's last line

Originally posted by: rbb1

I really like the last line Abhi says 😃

You saying that makes it all the more special.. 😳

Originally posted by: Nitya_Suresh

Thank you Ray.. Thank you for commenting on the line..
Daadi is wounded.. she believed in her grandchildren and well.. They are not worth it.. :|
Aaliya is just confused.. :/
Thank you.. :)

your welcome and Aaliyah needs to stop thinking about herself and start thinking about others things will be good then