Abhi-Pragya One Shot: My Love - Page 4

Originally posted by: renukha871

This is awesome, Tia. I loved how you explained everything from Abhi's point of view. How well you reasoned his actions in the earlier scenes and justified his character. Enjoyed reading it!! Perfect!!!!!👍🏼

Originally posted by: vivkriti

wow...Amazing Tia. you have written it superbly. Loved Abhi feeling guilt of what he has done with Pragya. Way he said sorry was awesome. Abhigya scene was mind blowing. Hope we get something like this in show too. You have written Abhis emotions perfectly. Hats off to you👏👏👏

Originally posted by: Kruths97

This was sosooo sweet! 😳

Loved it!🤗

Originally posted by: Rozy77

this was soo amazing👏
loved it😃
thoroughly enjoyed reading this😃

Originally posted by: lasyap3

Amazing and this is what I call ULTIMATE one shot with utmost finery and excellency...

Wonderful concept and brilliant work dear...

Originally posted by: -mina-

res! / unres! :)

Tia Tia Tia TIA!!!!!

So much amazingness here I don't know where to start! ❤️

Thank you for such a moving and thoughtfully written story. Loved the way you gave us Abhi's voice, Abhi's thoughts, Abhi's fears and guilt in just the most direct possible way. 👍🏼 👏

Interesting that Abhi is recovering from a flop. I like that hint of bad times.

Great recap of all the backstory from the show. Love that you gave us a one-line happy ending for SuBul and PuLiya. And yay that Pragya and Aaliya are friends now! This is perfect, I really want a good relationship for them in the future.🤗

OK, this? Is perfect!

[quote]I did not want to continue the marriage because I had no face to show her. I also wanted to continue the marriage, because I wanted to make up for my blunder, but that was not the only reason; I wanted her although I knew she was the last thing I deserved.[/quote]

I think this is exactly how Abhi would react - wanting her, but feeling he doesn't deserve it. Really liked the way you showed us the effect this has on him, how he tries to keep his distance despite his desire...

[quote]If I come to think of it, I have always wanted her. Even before our marriage, she generated intense emotions in me. She was intriguing and exciting. It's just that the situations in which we met were such that I could not look at her in the right light.[/quote]

So that is really interesting! Yes, they did have this chemistry and attraction in those hit and miss days. I like the way you put it, he has always wanted her, it was just a question of seeing her properly!

[quote]I not once listened to my heart that would beat for her, not once I saw the truth in her eyes in which I used to get lost. I interpreted the yearning I had developed for her as my rage.[/quote]

Wow. Interpreting his yearning at rage. What an amazing way to make sense of Abhi's irrational side. This is perfect characterization Tia, such an amazing insight!

[quote]She told me she understood why I did what I did to her. And she said she even shared some responsibility of my burden because she hid the truth from me and let me sin; she was worried that if she told me the truth, our marriage would end and her mother would die of that shock. [/quote]

Yes, I think is exactly what Pragya would say. I think you do a great job of showing how even though he wronged her more, she still played a part in continuing the mistake of their marriage.

[quote]And both of us have forgotten that we were supposed to end this marriage. I have found someone who knows me more than myself. My life has become meaningful, calmer and I have been able to grow as a person. My music has more soul to it now and I can see the better things of life, the better side of life. I am less impulsive and make a better judgment of people and situations. It works so much better for me now, as in my profession in this celebrity world, everyone wears a mask.[/quote]

LOL Abhi I don't think either of you "forgot," but if that's the way you say you feel then I must accept it 😛 Anyway the rest of this paragraph is just beyond amazingly wonderful. This is exactly what I believe Pragya can do for Abhi, what his half of the "benefit" of their love story should eventually be. Thank you so much for writing it this way, and for touching on how he has been able to grow, have better judgment, and even make better music. How his personality and life outlook have changed for the better. Really good points!

[quote] I find that she likes it when I bother her, tease her and act goofy around her and I keep doing that, like forever. I love dropping her to her college where she teaches, I take her to places, I just engage myself doing anything I can think of for her. I actually love being around her that way. I love when she smiles, or when she shouts at me, or when she behaves crazy[/quote]

Hahaha, so you see AbhiGya nokjhok as central to their relationship eh? Yeah I guess a guy like Abhi would be happiest in a marriage where he could tease his wife and she would play along...cute that Pragya enjoys his goofiness. And amazing to imagine lovestruck Abhi doing everything he can for her. I believe that he would absolutely make the love of his life the centre of his world, and I'm so glad you showed us this with Pragya as his life.

As for drinking parties! OMG Tia so naughty! But yes those are the best times they share together...so I guess I can accept Abhi's habit of getting his Chashmish drunk, in moderation 😉

[quote]What would have served me better? Her forgiveness or her hatred?! I don't know what her hatred would have done to me, but her forgiveness kills me.[/quote]

And this line kills me. Again, amazing insight into how Abhi would react. He could understand anger, but forgiveness overwhelms him. I love it.

...Huh, so Abhi climbed Everest to escape his feelings?! 👏 And then turned to the bottle too. 😲 Is this what we call a Devdas phase? 😆

[quote]I took away her happiness and every dream associated with a marriage, on the very first day. Now even if I love her more than my life, how do I take that pain away?[/quote]

AMAZING. Just, wow. He did exactly that, and I never realized. I understand Pragya as someone who has accepted her fate, who is making the best of what she can. But I never really thought about how that first night was deeply disappointing for her. That's why she was crying. All those expectations and dreams broken. Thank you for reminding me.

[quote]But I don't know. Is it the hormones? Or is it her responsibility and commitment to this marriage? Then, why does she care for me so dearly? Why does she get so jealous of my fan girls?[/quote]

Haha, I like this insight, that Abhi knows Pragya well enough to think she might be willing to sleep with him out of "commitment to the marriage." Thank God he soon finds that is not the case. And LOL at Pragya jealous of fan girls. I can see it, once she falls in love with him, they will annoy her a little despite herself...

[quote]The other thing is if she does desire me, what right do I have to deny myself to her? She is my wife, she has that right on me. Why should she suffer because I am dying in this guilt?[/quote]

Lol love this reasoning! She has a right, why should she suffer...sure Abhi, do your duty, if that's how you want to think of it. 🤣

(Seriously though, it is a beautiful, heartfelt line, thank you for including these thoughts. 😳)

[quote]I see a bride sitting on the bed dressed in red, with her face half covered with her dupatta. Oh that's my girl. Chashmish. My bride[/quote]

WOW YES! Perfect perfect perfect climactic moment. His bride, finally, for real. Love it.

[quote]You set my soul free. This is why I could never walk away from you. I somehow knew you are the one for me. [/quote]

Awww. And now we see Pragya's half of the benefit. Love this statement that she knew he was the one, despite everything. Also liked the mention of how Rockstar Daadi explained to Abhi his good effect on Pragya. Hope now these two sillies can be happy with each other!

[quote] A layer of tears wet her big and beautiful eyes as she looks at me sincerely.[/quote]

Very vivid moment Tia, I could see this exactly, great description!

[quote]She moves her fingers in my hair in soothing motions and lets me cry my heart out. I can't even feel what I am feeling but I feel liberated in her arms. After I don't know how long, I lift my head and look at her. She smiles at me making me feel blessed[/quote]

Wow. You know what impresses me most about this fic, is how faithful you are to Abhi's emotions. It's a big, exciting night for them, but it's also hugely emotional and cathartic, and of course he would cry. I wouldn't think of that, but it makes complete sense. Thank you for including this poignant moment along with the more heated ones!

And LOL at your closing lines! No Pragya, you don't get to be in the dark, he already knows you're afraid.

AWESOME AWESOME work Tia. Thank you SO much for posting!! Love your take on Abhi, always note perfect. And very sweet Pragya in the background here too. Thank you thank you!! 🤗

Originally posted by: -mina-

Ok finally unres'd on page 1, sorry for the wait *pulls ears in apology like a school kid* 😳

Also sorry about the formatting, comments might be hard to read...dunno, forum code is weird 😕

Thanks again for a FANTASTIC read, honestly Tia, loved this story so much!! ❤️ to you, you're a star ⭐️! 😃

Originally posted by: -Tia-

Dude, why are you even saying this... I am so thankful to you that I have no words to say. How fulfilling is it when the reader reads your intentions perfectly. I am so happy, dear.