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Posted: 11 years ago

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Fabulous OS Dear!Waiting fr next!Pls continue soon & pm Me!

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Part 2:

"Jay!" Pragya ran after him. Jay was running ahead laughing. "Jay! Clothes." Jay was running around in his diaper while Pragya was running after to get some clothes on him. Jay quickly ran and hid behind Abhi.

"Aye Chashmish," Abhi said out of habit then realized what he said. "I meant... aye Kishmish.. why are you annoying my son?" Though their relationship was rocky, in front of Jay they pretended to be the best couple ever.

"Annoying?" Pragya looked at him. "I am trying to get some clothes on this naughty kid." Pragya tried grabbing him from one side but Jay to the other.

"He doesn't want to wear na." Abhi told her. "He's only two. Let him enjoy."

"Sure. Sure." Pragya sighed. "Make him like you, so he takes off his clothes in front of everyone."

"Aye." Abhi said. "It's not my fault he's not like you."

"Not like me?" Pragya said folding her arms. "He smarter than you!" Saying that Pragya tried running after Jay but she tripped over from her dupatta. Abhi quickly caught her. Together they shared an eye lock. Abhi couldn't help but stare at her. Pragya loved Jay more than anything and Abhi loved it. He loved the fact that she loved kids. Pragya stared at Abhi taking in his fatherly side. How attached he had become with Jay in just about three months.

"At least.. don't romance in front of Jay." Daadi laughed. "He's a kid." Abhi helped Pragya stand and quickly let go. Both of them stared at Daadi sheepishly. Daadi laughed again looking at them and left. This time before Jay could even comprehend what was happening, Pragya caught him.

"Gotcha." Pragya laughed as she kissed Jay on the cheek. Abhi just stared at her. He had only seen her this happy with Jay, as if it came naturally. "Let's get some clothes on this handsome young man."

"Let me." Abhi said.

"Huh?" Pragya stared at him.

"I want him to change his clothes." Abhi said trying to take Jay

"No." Pragya replied pulling Jay closer. "We divided the responsibilities, I am not giving mine. You never let me do yours."

"Please?" Abhi asked.

"No." Pragya said. "We made a deal cleaning, changing are mine while you get the feeding and making him sleep part."

"Okay, let's make another deal." Abhi said looking at her. "I can change today and you can feed him?"

"Okay." Pragya said. Abhi moved his hands to take Jay. Pragya kissed Jay once more and gave Jay to Abhi. "Now, you quickly get ready so I can feed you?"

*****

"Okay so.. you were going to wear this?" Abhi said looking at the clothes. "No way. You're the son of Abhi the rockstar. You need some rocking clothes."

"Am I a rockstar?" Jay asked.

"Yes." Abhi laughed. "You'll be even bigger than me."

"Really?" Jay asked.

"Yes." Abhi smiled. Jay jumped in excitement. Abhi brought out the clothes for Jay. He made Jay wear some black skinny jeans, red Jordans, a white t shirt and shades. "Wait.. how Daadi would say *Ahem* "haye meri wari jawan." But I would say. That's my boy." Abhi took his hand and both of them walked towards the dinning table.

****

"Awww.. so cute." Pragya cooed.

"Enough compliments for me." Abhi smirked. "How's Jay looking?" Pragya shook her head at Abhi and helped Jay on the seat.

"Mama?" Jay said looking at Pragya. "I want..."

"I know.. I know." Pragya smiled. "I got you your burger." Jay hugged Pragya.

"You're the best." Jay smiled. "You both are the best."

****

"JAY!" Pragya screamed as she grabbed him. "Oh my gosh... you're... you're bleeding. ABHI! DAADI!" Pragya quickly grabbed him and ran downstairs. Abhi and Daadi were half way through when they saw Pragya running towards them. She was pale, and crying. Jay, on the other hand, was lying limp in her arms while his forehead was bleeding.

"GET THE CAR!" Abhi screamed as he held Pragya. Pragya looked as she was going to faint this very moment but she had held Jay so closely, Abhi couldn't bring himself to ask her to give him Jay. All of them rushed towards the hospital.

"What happened?" Abhi asked Pragya as Jay was taken into the emergency. Pragya hugged him tightly.

"I don't know!" Pragya cried. "I thought Jay was with you. I heard a crash and when I ran towards it I saw Jay holding his forehead but before he could fall I caught him." Abhi moved his hands on

her back.

"It will be alright." Abhi comforted her. "He'll be okay." Abhi held Pragya tightyly near him

(enough for now.)

Edited by u.a1254 - 11 years ago

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@rbb1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Aww poor kid hope he will be ok thank you for the update, Abhi and Pragya are so cute with Jay

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rkmadhurock

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

hey its really good please pm me when you add the next part :)

thanks😛

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smala

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Loved it very much.
Hope that little Jay will be fine.
Please update soon.

Edited by smala - 11 years ago

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FhatTheWuck.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Hope a similar track does happen in the show! And oh no jay!!!

Cant wait for the next!

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Humairaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Wow awsm updates

Loved it

Very beautifully written

Continue soon

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@u.a1254

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Part 3:

"Is he okay?" Abhi asked the doctor as he came outside. Pragya was sitiing beside him praying to God. All she wanted at this moment was for Jay to be okay.

"Nothing to worry about." The doctor assured. "Just a little wound. He'll be fine to go home tonight." Pragya thanked God for saving her Jay. She wouldn't have been able to live if something had happened to Jay.

"Can we see him?" Pragya asked standing up.

"Of course." The doctor smiled and left. Pragya ran inside. Abhi first called home and informed Daadi then came inside.

"Mama?" Jay said as he saw Pragya. Pragya quickly hugged him.

"Are you okay? Does it hurt?" Pragya asked frantic.

"He's fine." Abhi assured her as he sat beside her. "He's a fighter."

"Jay?" Pragya asked. "How did this happen?"

"My ball was on the table. I tried to get it but it fell on me." Jay explained. Abhi took him from Pragya.

"Next time be careful champ." Abhi laughed. "Look at your mother, she forgot to breath."

"I promise I won't scare you." Jay smiled. Pragya just kissed his forehead in response. Abhi grabbed her shoulders and side hugged her. He was glad everything was okay. Then he realized what he was doing and quickly let go.

"For Jay." Abhi said quickly.

"I know." Pragya replied looking away.

****

"Daadi you called me?" Abhi asked.

"Yes." Daadi said smiling. "I think it's time."

"Time for what?" Abhi asked.

"To have another child." Daadi told him. Abhi just stared at Daadi in shock.

"We have Jay." Abhi told her.

"Jay needs a sibling." Daadi explained.

"But.. I mean.. that.." Abhi stammered.

"What?" Daadi looked at him. "If there had been no Jay, you wouldn't have kids? You're lucky. You'll have two."

"I..." Abhi was speechless.

****

"Aye Chashmish!" Abhi said coming inside the room.

"What?" Pragya said looking at him.

"Did you say something to Daadi?" Abhi asked.

"I?" Pragya looked at him

"About what?" Pragya asked.

"Kids." Abhi replied.

"What?" Pragya looked at him. "No. Why?"

"Daadi wants another kid." Abhi told her. He saw Pragya going in shock and then turning crimson red. Before Pragya could reply, Jay came running inside.

"Mama! Dad!" Jay said excited. "Daadi told me you're going to get me a brother or sister." Both of them stared at Jay in horror. Daadi had trapped them.

"Uh.." Abhi began but was cut off by Pragya.

"Yes beta." Pragya told him. Jay jumped in excitement and left the room.

"WHAT?" Abhi looked at her.

"He's two." Pragya told him. "I can see him disappointed."

"Clearly." Abhi replied. "How are we going to get another kid from. You do realize faking pregnancy is hard."

"I don't know." Pragya replied.

"Or.. there something else in you mind." Abhi smirked and pulled her towards him. Pragya stared at him in shock.

"Y-you." Pragya stammered.

"Why the hesitation?" Abhi asked her. "I'm your husband."

"Really?" Pragya looked at him. "You don't even consider me as your wife."

"Are you kidding me?" Abhi looked at her. "Why do you think you're here?"

"Huh?" Pragya looked at him confused.

"The truth is out, Bulbul's married to Purab. Tannu and I broke up." Abhi began. "Why else do you think you're here?"

"What?" Pragya replied shocked.

"If I hadn't considered you as my wife, you would be home right now." Abhi told her. "I thought you knew?"

"But.. we fight and... all." Pragya reasoned not comprehending what Abhi was saying.

"I was giving you time to forgive me." Abhi looked at her.

"I was never angry." Pragya replied.

"You weren't?" Abhi looked at her.

"No. It wasn't your fault." Pragya told him.

"You're telling me I wasted all this time for nothing?" Abhi looked at her.

"I guess so." Pragya smiled. Abhi wrapped his arms around her.

"Now that this is all cleared... back to business." Abhi grinned. "If we have to give Jay a sibling, we better start... lengthy process?" Pragya smacked his shoulder and laughed.

"Mama, Dad?" Jay said coming inside and they quickly let go.

"When will my brother or sister come?" Jay asked.

"It will take some time champ." Abhi said.

"Aww." Jay replied defeated. Pragya just smiled at the duo.

"Ice cream?" Abhi asked.

"YES!" Jay jumped. Abhi held him and walked out the room. Pragya stood there laughing.

(Enough for now.)