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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice story update it soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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You are an awesome writer!!👏
Enjoyed it to the core...
Fantastic
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update next part soon pls...
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Last Chapter:

Abhi and Pragya were at the beach. As it was night time, there were hardly anyone there. Just Pragya and Abhi and some other guys. Abhi was lying in the sand while Pragya went towards the water. She stepped in the water and she could feel her body coming to an ease from the water. She felt relaxed. Just then a man approached her.


"Hey." The man said. "My name is Vishnu." Pragya forced a smile and turned away.


"You're alone?" Vishnu asked Pragya. Before Pragya could say anything he grabbed her by the hand and tried to pull her.


"What are you doing?" Pragya protested. "Leave my hand."


"Why?" Vishnu asked smirking. "You're so beautiful, why would anyone leave your hand?"


"Please." Pragya tried to free her hand. "Leave me." Vishu tried pulling her. Pragya was scared. She didn't know what to do? Should she scream but as if something caught her throat. Tears started to fall from her eyes. She was extremely scared. She desperately tried to free her hand.

Vishnu left her hand but grabbed her dupatta. He kept pulling it. Pragya tried to pull it back and tried to cover herself as well, Just then Abhi pulled the dupatta from Vishnu. Abhi was extremely angry. The heat waves could be felt from far. He took the dupatta and carefully draped Pragya with it, covering every inch of her body.


He turned his attention towards the man. Vishnu just looked at him and smirked.


"Who are you? Superman?" Vishnu laughed.


"No." Abhi replied. "But her husband." With that statement he punched him. Vishnu fell towards the ground. Pragya looked at him shocked. Before Abhi could do anything further Pragya stopped him. Vishnu ran away, seeing the chance.


"Stop!" Pragya cried. She was crying. She was scared. She was trembling out of fear. Abhi turned to her and she hugged him. Abhi held her tightly trying to sooth her. He rubbed her back. He lifted her face and wiped her tears.


"It's okay." Abhi told Pragya. "You're safe. Nothing will happen to you. I will never let that happen."
Pragya looked at him. She started to calm down. She had stopped trembling.


"But he..." Pragya whimpered. Abhi put a finger on her mouth and pulled her into a hug.


"You're safe." Abhi told her. "He would have never done anything to you. I would have killed him." Saying that Abhi tightened his grip around her.


"I want to go back." Pragya said. Abhi nodded. While hugging (You know when the girl is holding the guy and the guy has his arms around her.) they went towards the their.


****



Abhi woke up to see Pragya shuffling in her sleep. She started to cry and whimpers. Abhi quickly pulled her in his arms. She protested in her sleep. Tried to get away from his clutches but Abhi kept his grip tight.


"Shhh." Abhi said. "It's just me. It's me Abhi. You're okay. It's just a dream." Hearing his voice, Pragya began to calm down and started to sleep peacefully again. Abhi made her lie down but he didn't let go of her. He kept her close, in case she were to have another like this.


"ABHI!" Pragya screamed and got up. Abhi quickly got up and tried to calm her down.



"It's me, Abhi." Abhi told her. "Look at me. Pragya? Open your eyes." Pragya opened her eyes to find Abhi in front of her. She hugged him and started to cry. The incident at the beach had greatly effected her.


"I saw him again." Pragya cried looking at him. She tried explaining the dream. "He... he got hold of me... I couldn't do anything... he even shot you... and I saw you fall limp... and then he... he..." Abhi put a finger at her mouth and hugged her. She was crying for him. She was afraid of losing him. She was in love with him and today she had proved it.


Abhi didn't care about what Aaliyah said. Pragya wasn't what Aaliyah described. She was just a pure, innocent girl. He will always be there for her. If she could love Abhi despite all she did, Abhi could do the same. He did have feelings for her but he wasn't sure. But what happened at the beach, he realized that he was in love with that he couldn't let anyone harm her.


"Shh." Abhi consoled her. "I...I love you. I wouldn't let anyone do anything." Pragya looked at him.


"What?" Pragya asked in disbelief. "You said what?"


"I said I love you." Abhi said. Pragya just threw her arms around his neck and hugged him. That was all Abhi needed for an answer.


****


"Careful." Abhi said as Pragya walked down the stairs with him.


"I'm fine, Abhi." Pragya replied. "You need not to tell me everything as if I am a little kid." Abhi just laughed at Pragya's statement. He touched her stomach.


"Are you listening?" Abhi said. "If I don't say anything she cried that I don't care but if I say something, she gets annoyed. You tell me what should I do?"


"You will have to wait two months for him to actually come." Daadi laughed coming towards them.


"Two months is so long." Abhi whined.


"Patience." Daadi told him.


"Yes, Abhi." Pragya replied. "Some patience. Now hurry up. I don't want to be late for Bulbul's wedding."


"I don't know which side to choose Daadi?" Abhi said. "Should I choose Purab's or Bulbul's?"


"How about Pragya on Bulbul's and you at Purab's?" Daadi suggested.


"Deal." Abhi said and all of them laughed.


****


Pragya woke up early morning. She first woke Abhi up.


"Get up!" Pragya said. Abhi whined. "You have a meeting."


Abhi groaned and got up. "All the meetings should go to hell."


"Very funny and now get up and get ready." Pragya said leaving the room. She came to Jay's room.


"Jay?" Pragya said shaking him softly. "Get up! You have school."


"I don't want to go!" Jay whined. Like father like son Pragya thought.


"Jay?" Pragya said. "You have a test. Jay groaned and got up.


Pragya laughed at her little family and went to do the other chores.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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aww that ending was so cute! I just read this whole thing in one go! It was so cute and adorable. You should definitely write more. I also watched your VM on Kabhi Alvida Naa Kehna and I loved that to. You should definitely make more.
❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
full story was just awesome!!!!!!!!!!!
loved it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww such sweet ending thank you it's nice to see them all a happy family
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely story
Loved it
Very nicely written
Cute ending

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Posted: 10 years ago
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😳😳😳cute story
👏👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Read the whole thing in one go. Love ur style of writing

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