ABHIGYA OS : ITS SECRET

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey friends... its another one shot

its not nice re... i have written kuch bi

jo man mein aaya wo maine likh dia

PS : i have not done any proof reading tho spelling mistakes and gramattical errors ho sakte hain uske liye sorry



Its secret

" stop it pragya , bohut ho gaya " abhi said for the 10th time

" chodo mujhe , bachao , bachao " she yelled

" bas , that's it , I cant take it anymore " abhi said and scooped her in his arms and walked to their room

She kept on shouting and yelling

He pushed open the door and took her to their decorated bed

" oh shit " he sweared

" kya ?" she asked loudly

" enough is enough , ek aur awaaz tumhaare mooh se aaya tho I swear thappad khaogi " abhi threatened

She started crying immediately and abhi realised what he said

" I mean ..." He stopped seeing her sit on the floor and cry

He sat next to her

" pragya , I didn't mean it , dekho ... ok sorry , kush ?" he asked

She looked at him and smiled

He smiled back

" you know what ??? you are very sweet " pragya said sweetly

" really , after what I do to you ? thank you " abhi said

" you are very very sweet " pragya said

" thank you pragya " abhi said

" you are very very very sweet " pragya said again

" thank you " abhi said softly

" you are very very very very sweet " pragya said again counting very on her fingers

" I know , ab bas , inta sweet hounga tho diabetes ho jayega " abhi said

" ek baat poochoon ?" pragya asked sweetly

" nai boloonga tho jaise ki tum nai poochogi , poocho " abhi said

" tum ho kaun ? I don't know you " pragya said

Abhi took a deep breathe " itna chad gaya isko ki mujhe nai pehchaan rahi hai , tabhi itna sweet bola isne ,I shouldn't have made her drink ... Mujhe hi mehenga pad gaya " he said to himself

" tumhara pati " abhi said

" shhh... uska naam mat lo , kahin se bhi tapak jayega " pragya said immediately

" he is bad , he always insults me , hamesha mera dil dukhata rehta hai , pata nai khudko kya samajta hai wo stupid rockstar " pragya muttered

" dekho..." abhi started

" shhh... Jhor se mat bolo , wo mera pati hai na ? wo aajayega ," pragya said

" pragyaaa..." Abhi got irritated

" idea..." abhi said

" kya idea ??? " pragya asked

" tum purab se pyaar karti thi right ??? you both were planning to get married na ? aaliya told me , tho tumne usse chodkar mujhse ... I mean uss rock star se shaddi kyun ki ?" abhi asked

" its secret " pragya said and abhi made a face

" ok main tumhe bataaungi , but tum mujhe promise karo ki uss khadoos rockstar ko kuch nai bologe " pragya asked innocently

Abhi smiled wickedly and said " promise , I wont tell anyone "

" you know what ??? main wo ladki nai hoon jisse purab pyaar karta hai " pragya whispered and abhi was shocked beyond his wits

" what ?" he literaaly screamed

" shhh... Wo khadoos rockstar sun lega , I told you na its secret" pragya reminded him

" ok , I am sorry , continue karo " abhi composed himself

" haan , wo purab mujhse pyaar nai karta , wo kisi aur se pyaar karta hai " pragya said

" aur tum , tum kisse pyaar karti ho ?" abhi asked

Tears came out of her eyes " koi bi mujhse pyaar nai karta , koi mujhse pyaar kyun nai karta ??? wo rockstar mujhe galat samajta hai tho issliye wo kehta hai ki I don't deserve love , lekin I promise , mother promise , maine kabhi kisi ke saath kuch bura nai kia tho bi koi mujhse pyaar kyun nai karta , wo suresh " she wiped her tears and took a breath

" wo suresh bi mujhse pyaar nai karta , main itni boori hoon kya ? main itni kharaab dikhti hoon kya ? mein chasmeesh hoon isliye koi mujhse pyaar nai karta na ?" pragya asked innocently

abhi felt bad ...he felt her pain
" aise koi baat nai hai pragya , you are very beautiful, koi kamhi nai hai tumme , you are perfect the way you are " abhi said and wiped her tears

" agar ye purab isse pyaar nai karta tho kisse karta hai ? oh god I married her thinking that I am helping aaliya , ye maine kya kar diya " abhi thought to himself

" tumhe bi aisa lagta hai kya ?" pragya asked breaking his thoughts

" kya ?" abhi asked

" that I don't deserve love " pragya said quietly

" prgyaaa...maine kaha na you are perfect, don't think like that ok?" abhi asked
" ok" pragya said

" tumne mujhse... ... I mean uss rockstar se shaadi kyun ki ? paison ke liye ?" abhi asked after thinking

" paison ke liye ?" pragya stood up

" tumhe main aise lagti hoon ?" pragya got angry

" nai ... Mai tho bas aise pooch raha tha " abhi said immediately

Pragya made a face at him

" acha sorry , come sit " he made her sit next to him

" tho batao why did you marry me ... I mear wo khadoos rockstar ??" abhi asked

" maa ke liye , meri shaddi do baar tooti na , tho jab uss sadu ke saath rishta pakka hua tho maa bohut kush thi , main kaise unse unki kushiyaan chin loon " pragya said

" do baar ?" abhi asked

" haan , pehli baar bhaarati lautkar chale gaye . dahez kam than a , aur dusri baar ," she wiped her tears

" engagement hone ke baad suresh ne kaha ki he doesn't and can never love me " pragya said

" tho tum suresh se pyaar karti ho aur purab kisi aur se , kisse?" abhi asked her

But she had fallen asleep on abhi

"shit man , she slept ." abhi said and lifted her

" its secret , kisi ko mat bolna khaas kar uss rockstar ko warna sab barbaad ho jayega " pragya whispered getting up

" kya barbaad ?" abhi asked

" arrey buddhu , agar usko pata chal gaya ki purab mujhse pyaar nai karta tho wo mujhse shaadi tod dega na , tho meri maa toot jaayengi na , aur wo ye sadma bardaash nai kar payengi ki meri ek aur rishta toot gaya , iss liye he should never know the truth , tum usse kabhi mat bolna ok " pragya said and closed her eyes

Abhi kept her on the bed and took a deep breathe

" ye maine kya kar dia , iski tho koi Galati nai aur main isse punish kar raha tha , but purab pyaar kisse karta hai , ye tho isne bataya hi nai " abhi muttered

" god... Ab kya karon main " abhi thought to himself

" no... I wont hurt her anymore , I wont break the marriage , ye shaddi tab tootegi jab pragya chahegi no matter what , aur ab ke baad I will not hurt her aur purab kisse pyaar karta hai I'll have to find out that , I just hope ki jab ye utegi tho isse kuch bi yaad na ho " abhi said to himself and sat on the couch looking at her

" don't worry pragya , sab teek ho jayega , I wont hurt you again " abhi promised her , he promised himself and drifted off to sleep


the end

i know its not good tho all sorts of tomatoes and onions are welcome
please comment and give me your feedbacks
it means a lot to me
love you all
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nicky13 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi Magati you r here also ... Me too ... Hey it's really very nice story ... I love your stories since Arakshi time... When I found ur story on this forum I was super exited to read it ... You have written very well again ... Plz send me pm whenever you write another story on Abhi and Pragaya ... Thanks dear :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow, well done!! 👏 I really liked it. Poor exhausted Pragya finally spilling out all her secrets, and Abhi's world changing with every word. LOL @ too sweet for diabetes and khadoos rockstar pati 😆!!! I hope you will write more Abhigya. Would love to know what happen next here too...

One thing I didn't understand, what was happening in the beginning and why did Pragya forget Abhi? 😳

Anyway, no tomatoes or onions needed, could throw flowers maybe because it is a very good story 😊 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -mina-

Wow, well done!! 👏 I really liked it. Poor exhausted Pragya finally spilling out all her secrets, and Abhi's world changing with every word. LOL @ too sweet for diabetes and khadoos rockstar pati 😆!!! I hope you will write more Abhigya. Would love to know what happen next here too...

One thing I didn't understand, what was happening in the beginning and why did Pragya forget Abhi? 😳

Anyway, no tomatoes or onions needed, could throw flowers maybe because it is a very good story 😊 👍🏼

she has consumed alcohol that's why...
I just read what I have written...omg too much typos
I'll rectify it in evening
I am soo happy ki you like it
Even more happy ki no tomatoes and onions...i was really expecting some
Thank you so much for the encouragement...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: nicky13

Hi Magati you r here also ... Me too ... Hey it's really very nice story ... I love your stories since Arakshi time... When I found ur story on this forum I was super exited to read it ... You have written very well again ... Plz send me pm whenever you write another story on Abhi and Pragaya ... Thanks dear :)

you. Have no idea I am sooo happy after knowing ki Arjun forum ka koi tho hai
I was feeling sooo ajeeb to write here starting mein...but fir yaad aaya ki Arjun forum mein bi start karte waqt ajeeb lag raha tha...
anyways I am very happy ki you like it...i will pakka pm you my further works...now abhigya are my favourite
Thank you so much ... Your comments means a lot to me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: arthi_v

amazing yaar.. ❤️

thank you so much dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It's really good. I wish something like this happens in the serial.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: magati


you. Have no idea I am sooo happy after knowing ki Arjun forum ka koi tho hai
I was feeling sooo ajeeb to write here starting mein...but fir yaad aaya ki Arjun forum mein bistart karte waqt ajeeb lag rahatha...
anyways I am very happy ki you like it...iwill pakka pm you my further works...now abhigya are my favourite
Thank you so much ... Yourcomments means a lot to me...

Abhigya is my fav also ... Have u written before on this couple... If yes can you plz send me those stories also ... I would love to read :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I just loved it

This is the only way Abhi will ever come to know the truth

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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was really nic dea...😊

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