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Posted: 10 years ago
haha and have u seen comments on it! gosh so negative!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Suresh is missing in action again?
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Posted: 10 years ago
found a subul smut drabble in my files, written a few months ago...anyone interested? 😳

and no it's not the dialogue only one from before 😛
Edited by -mina- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -mina-

found a subul smut drabble in my files, written a few months ago...anyone interested? 😳

and no it's not the dialogue only one from before 😛

YES PLZ POST!Embarrassed
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -mina-

found a subul smut drabble in my files, written a few months ago...anyone interested? 😳

and no it's not the dialogue only one from before 😛

still waiting!!!
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ok coming up now if you'll stick around a few mins kay!!
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ok it's not really smut? and there's some rabul at the beginning? sorry sorry but i think you guys might still like it? all opinions welcome :)

my subul muse has disappeared lately, hope it comes back!! would love to write some good stuff for them :)

also if you disagree with the ideas about virginity suggested in the following, i probably agree with you? i write schlocky stuff but i don't always believe in it XD



drabble!

THIRD TIME'S THE CHARM?


so bulbul's first time is with purab when they're on their weird absconding from pune. she doesn't mean for it to happen but one thing leads to another and in the moment she decides, yes, fine, she's going to let this happen, because he loves her and she thinks she loves him and they've been through so much and they need this. but she doesn't really get into it and ultimately it's pretty mediocre; he enjoys her body but he's not especially focussed on enjoying the experience with her, on them sharing something. she doesn't come but she guesses that's ok, but she thinks it takes him a rather long time of thrusting to come and she doesn't why everyone thinks sex is so great.


their first time turns out to be their only time because everything goes to hell after that and eventually it's good riddance purab, though it takes her a long time to stop thinking that she was in love with him. circumstances happen and now she's in a marriage of convenience with suresh, and she's never once thought of him sexually and she's glad that he never tries anything, until slowly she gets to be annoyed because she is his wife, godamnit, and he treats her like his sister. she knows that he wanted her once, her di's life went off the rails because he f--king wanted her, and her ego is piqued that now that she's his and he has every right, he's not making any kind of move.


so one night she says suresh it's your birthday tomorrow, do you want anything from me. and he says you're already doing the puja with ma and you already made my cake and that's great babe, of course i don't want anything else. and she's like no, is there anything you want from me, as your wife. and he's like no, we've been over this, we're good, what could i possibly - oh. no, of course not, never, i don't expect - and she's like never?! what do you mean never?! we are married goddamnit suresh just take me


and he's all flabbergasted but at least the door opened. and she's like listen i have to be honest with you i'm not a virgin i'm sorry i gave that away, i wish i could give it to you, i want to make new memories with you, and he's all alarmed like whoa, meri jaan, did he hurt you? and she's like no no it was all consensual and it was fine i just feel bad that i can't give that to you and he's like that's ok, i really don't care, your past is part of who you are and i never want you to regret that...and so what if he was your first, i'll get to be your last, right? and finally they're on the same page.


and when they're finally doing it he is careful and reverent and she's having a much better time. finally he enters her and he's like oh god bulbul, so hot and tight and wet, you're perfect, i can't, and he thrusts maybe twice and then goes still. and she's like umm...you gonna move? and he hides his face in her shoulder and confesses i'm so sorry, i'm done, i couldn't, because i've never, and you're just...


and she realizes then that it was his first time and she's all ohhh, ok...that's cool, but let's do better next time


and they do.


Edited by -mina- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
ALSO edabella i didn't meant to steal the suresh's first time thing from you? but i kinda may have? :S
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Posted: 10 years ago
I know Bulbul/Suresh is never going to happen so I am not even gonna wait. However, I was very happy that Suresh finally gave a piece of his mind to Abhi and didnt just gush all over him like the others. Loved his little lecture towards Abhi
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: darkmagi

I know Bulbul/Suresh is never going to happen so I am not even gonna wait. However, I was very happy that Suresh finally gave a piece of his mind to Abhi and didnt just gush all over him like the others. Loved his little lecture towards Abhi



Arre. BB-Suresh is definitely happening. It's a lot clearer than before. Abhi is going to get BB Purab married but Aaliyah is so NOT going to let that happen. Aaliyah is going to blackmail BB, how I don't know, but BB will get married to Suresh.

So much scope for drama but if RaBul do get married there will be only Aliyah plotting to separate them.

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