Lets write a story round 3! Fairytale :p - Page 2

....and Niyati bites into the apple. Smiling at Shourya she asks, "You will send my letter, wont you?" Shourya nods his head. Suddenly Niyati feels dizzy and falls to the ground and like a bolt of lighting, Shourya scoops her up in his arms before she hit the floor.

Shourya takes Niyati to her room to lay her down on her bed. "When you wake up from your beauty sleep, I'll be by your side, my love", thinks Shourya. Several hours pass by, and Niyati seems to be waking up. At the moment she opens her eyes, the sound of rapid knocks on the door can be heard.

Leaving Niyati, Shourya opens the door to find a tall, handsome, and gleaming prince standing high. "Where is she? I've come to see my love", Agni demands. "Uh...well...she...", Shourya stutters. Behind him, steps can be heard and Shourya turns around to find Niyati walking towards them.

"I'm doomed", a scared Shourya thinks. "Come to me, my love. I'm here to see you", says Agni as he opens his arms to receive Niyati in his warm and gentle embrace. Niyati smiles and shouts "I Love You!" and runs towards the pair of men. "I Love Yo....", Agni stares bewildered, for Niyati went to embrace Shourya and declare her love for him and not Agni!

bit long....just got into it......sowwwy....plz continue

~diljaani

that's alright hon!!!! it was not LONG at all!!! ok let me continue..
Agni did not have any words to say but had only anger which could be seen in his eyes.. what was he seeing. his love in the arms of another men.. Anger crept through him.. he did not know who he wanted to hurt more.. Niyati or Shourya?

He steps towards shourya and niyati and seperates them..
Agni: HOW DARE YOU TOUCH HER!!! HOW DARE DO YOU EVEN THINK OF LOVING HER!?

Shourya scared to death would not say anything but just stare at Agni..
Shourya: but but but..

Niyati looks at Agni advancing towards shourya. She walks towards Agni and Shourya.. turns Agni around and slaps him..

With anger in his eyes.. he raises his eyes but Niyati Stops him..
Niyati: How dare you even touch my LOVE.. Who the HELL do you THINK YOU ARE??
Agni looks at her.. with anger grabs her and..

continue!!!

"I know this is not you Niyati...this must be some trick", Agni cries out in anger. "There must be some problem. Why are you doing this?"

Both Agni and Shourya wait for Niyati to answer. "I'll give no explanation to anyone. I love Shourya and that is final!", Niyati glares at Agni while her venomous words cut through Agni's heart.

With his eyes moist, Agni turns towards the door to walk out, but stops. He turns one last time towards the pair of them and says, "If I can't have my love, then no one can. I'll be watching you.....both of you". With that, the once handsome face now contorted with fury, walks out of the house and slams the door.

continue plzzz......(oh and I promise this is a love story, not a revenge seeking story.......this is just a twist to keep writers as well as readers interested)😊

~diljaani

shourya did not have words to speak.. he did not know what to say.. niyati with loves in his eyes.. comes to him..
Niyati: Are you okay? who was that baboon.. did he hurt you? i can have him killed!!!

shourya looks at her: You dont remember him? YOu have no idea who he is.

Niyati looked confused: All i know is that I love you and only love you. I have never felt like this before. You make me feel so complete 🤢

Shourya smiles to himself: hmm.. ok.. well i love you too jaanu!! Let's go to your castle and announce the good news that we are together forever my love..

Agni outside would not believe waht have just happened. His Niyati doesn't recognize him? HOW? The only person that he loved and trusted is the one who refuses to even acknowledge him.. His eyes were moist but he controlled himself "No.. i am not going to cry. She is not gone.. but is lost.. and I will get her back.. anyway possible...".

DUN DUN DUN!!!

ok.. how come only me and dilly are writing this.. come on guys.. where are the rest of the parivaar!!

JOIN IN!!! we are waiting!!! they is an award at the end of this for THE QUEEN BEE WRITER!!!

btw: NICE WORK DILLY!! LUV YA!!
pri

Before i continue: awesome work huma & priscilla.....its sooo good 😳 👏

Prince agni is still walking down the lane filled with anger....he keeps thinking about the rude behavior of the princess....he crunches his teeth together......and screams.!!!!!

"frealty thy name is woman" (Hamlet) !!! Never trust a woman!!!

gggrrrr.....Princess Niyati!!! You are not worth the dust that the rude wind blows in to your face!!! (King Lear)

and he smashes his fist on one of the century old trees....sooo hard that his fist starts to bleed and the tree says: young man....its is your heart who is responsible for your sorrow (Othello)....why punish this old tree....

agni starts walking again....suddenly Antara appears in front of him....the light touches agni's sensitive eyes and he looks away...then with a rusty voice he asks: who are thou! and how dare you cut my way!! What business you have with me (King Lear)!!

Important is not who i am....or what i am doing here.....what is important is who you are my beloved prince!

Agni looks confused and says: explain your self old woman!

Antara: that is where your heart fails my prince. You only see what appears to your eyes....you refuse to look behind the veil ....

Agni: Women and women's creatures.....they are not to be trusted! Clean my way!

Antara: Prince Agni!! Please hear out my heart.....no more than that i ask from my prince....

Agni: tell me what important is there for me to know?

Antara: Shourya.....the lord who claims to be the lover of your princess.....he....he is my son....

Agni: Darkness & Devils (King Lear)!!! Angels & Demons!! Heaven & Earth!!! How dare you woman!!! Did the coward send you to aks my approval before he robs me from my love!!!! Or no wait!! That he already did!! What is left for him to snatch from this poor prince!!

Antara: No my prince....even Shourya is not him self....Queen Rajlaxmi....the evil queen of Rajhastan....the one even the demons and darkest creatures fear.....she casted a spell on my son and she is using to destroy the princess and you my lord...



hehhe sorry thoda lambi hogayee nahi 😳
i luvvvv agnis anger...so that's why his anger is still rising in the scene....

continue like this: agni should not believe antara right away....he will still suspect niyati of betrayal 😉

btw those who know Shakespeare work....you will recognise lines from King Lear, Hamlet & Othello.... 😳 😛 (not exact words, because i dont know exact lines by heart 😛)

hai.. shaheen.. kya bola hai meri jaan. loved it.. it is a bit sounding like Grim's Fairy Tale.. 😆

ok let me continue.. i dont know Shaky too well so i am not going to quote him!! 😆 i leave that to shaheen... 😆 😆 😆

ok..

Agni looks at Antara with shock and anger...

Agni: Old woman are you mad! why would the mother of my love Princess Niyati be plotting against her.. i do not believe you. YOur thinking is as vile as your face. I shall have you punished for saying such things against the woman who brought up my Princess..

Agni takes off his sword to lash at her. When Antara take a quick turn and disappears into thin air, but not before she said these words:

"You shall regret this pretty prince. For now I shall avenage you for this insult..."

Agni looks into the thin air.. her rustic voice still echoing in his ears. Calmly he starts to rethink her words.. would Queen RL really do this.. Would the old woman really be telling the truth?

"Oh Gods of the Heavens.. Who shall i believe? MY heart is broken and my life is left meaningless.. I have no one to love or turn to.. I am alone in this world..."

Just as he is praying to the gods, he hears a faint voice coming from the forest.. At onces he get hynotized and decides to follows the beautiful music determined to know the owner of this melodious voice. He advances through the forest as the voice gets louder and louder... finally a bright light and the voice that he is eager to put a face to can be heard clear as a bell.. In the middle of the forest a young beautiful maiden is picking up wild flowers and now humming the beautiful music (think theme song of Kulvaddhu 😆 )..
Agni memerize by her voice advances towards her and steps on a branch.. Frightened she turns around.. at that very moment.. a voice from a far distance calls out her name..

"CAROL.. CAROL.. where are you.. come hither.."

Carol cannot hear the voice for before her stands the prince of the land.. holding his sword...

continue..
sorrie yaar.. a little longg.. but couldn't control myself..
please this is soo much fun yaar..
luv pri

guys continue the story please 😳

there is a nice price waiting end of week 😃

yaar shaheen i read it right from the beggining it is very very intersting no doubt, but adding shakespeare and otheelo stuff i m not tooooooooo good at understanding these complicated topics so please use simple language really and honestly i did'nt get the last part tht how Agni finds out carol and who was the prince of land. 😆

MALEKA

Carol is standing still and is shocked to find Prince Agni in front of her with his magnificent sword raised. Agni cannot help but stare at the beautiful peasant praising her good looks. Meanwhile, the voice calling for Carol faded away slowly.....

"How may I be of service, my lord?", a frightened Carol asked.
"Can you mend a broken heart?", asked Agni with a shaky voice.
"I cannot mend a heart. But wounds will heal over time", said Carol after taking a minute to reply.

"Where do you live?", a curious Agni asked.
"Down that road and on that hill", Carol pointed out with her fingers.

Looking away from Carol, Agni memorized the location and then turned around to face Carol once more. He stared at her for several minutes before he spoke, very slow and very sternly.
"If I call on you to serve me, do to anything I ask you to, will you without question and regret?", Agni asked without once winking his eyes.

Carol looked scared more than ever. What could he possibly want from me? Should I accept this or deny his request? Maybe I'll say no and he'll go away. NO! I cant do that....he is the Prince after all. I must obey him. Without winking her eyes, Carol responded, "Yes, most willingly".

A smile spread over Agni's face and his eyes danced with excitement. "Good. You'll be called upon when needed. Now leave".

Bowing her head and taking Agni's leave, Carol turned around and disappeared into the forest.

Agni turned around and started to walk towards his horse. This is excellent! Now Shourya will just have to forget Niyati and even Antara cant do a thing. I'm the Prince and I do what I want and I get what I want. No one will forsee what I'm about to do. Once again a smile spread across his face.

With that, the handsome Prince mounted his white horse and rode off towards his towering castle!

continue plz...

~diljaani

In his way he saw Shorya going in his charriot with he think something, and than follow the chariot,slowly keeping the distance so Shorya's guards cannot see him, Agni thinks i know he is going to meet my princess,if he can do a magic tht takes my princees away from me, than i can also do a magic, it is time to summon Carol..........



Please continue
MALEKA