FF: Manzil *Authors Note* 6/16/08 - Page 2

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Thank you guys appreciate the support and feedback!! 😛
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keisha or kaya, or whatever her name was 😆
tht displays attitude babes!!!
and ya oh wow!! ranbir is a pure playa here!!waiting!
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Simran Di!!!!

U Rocking it girl!! Continue Soon

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Wooowiez!
Continue soon plz! Great story so far
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wow that was so good 👏
im so excited to read the next part 😃
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gr8 story so far getting more and more interesting by the minute. continue soon.
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great start plz write more soon can't wait=)
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Hi,

Nice update and your characterizations are very good. BTW don't you telk Perfu that she needs to update her ffs soon and so shouldn't you too follow the same rule. Please update soon and make Ranbir and Kanya meet in the next update.
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Thank you all for the comments I am quite overwhelmed, I wasn't really expecting much but am enjoying the adulation nonetheless. Please understand that the Ranbir Nanda in my story is quite the ruthless man, he has no respect for women other than his mom and Big D.

Part 3

It was 8:30 when Kanya walked in to the offices of RN, Inc. Located in the heart of Mumbai RN, Inc. was situated in the tallest building; which also happened to be owned by the great Ranbir Nanda. The interior of the building was exquisite, everything was so detailed the color schemes were brilliant each floor had a different design and layout, all breathtakingly beautifully. It suddenly made Kanya conscious of her own designs, the fear of her hard work being rejected had started forming in her stomach. No, she wouldn't be afraid, she had to show confidence even if she was shaking from the inside she would have to stand tall and still.

With some sense of reassurance she had asked the receptionist for the conference room where the presentation would be held. She had nearly floated all the way to the conference room, the shakes were back and so was the fear. With trembling fingers she had set up her equipment fearing that if she trembled even a bit more she might drop everything.

8:45 she still had time, maybe she should get some fresh air, yes fresh air that should help her recompose her self. She had almost ran out of the office and into the elevator, had she stayed another minute in the room she might of thrown up, but the minute she stepped outside the building she felt her color rise back up to her cheeks. She inhaled deeply and slowly exhaled, coffee where was this smell of coffee coming from? Looking to her right Kanya spotted the small coffee shop, she still had time maybe some coffee would warm her up a bit, without giving it another thought she stepped into the small shop, but there was this incredibly tall man standing in front of her blocking her view of the selection. Kanya looked at the man in front of her he was wearing an expensive tailored suit which fit so well on his broad shoulders, and god he was wearing Unforgivable; her favorite smell it was already giving her a high, but what caught her attention the most was his hair…he had a PONYTAIL!!

She had to really try hard to control her laughter, my god this man had a ponytail, but unfortunately Kanya hadn't tried hard enough to control herself a small shriek had escaped her mouth causing the man to instantly turn around. She sucked in her breath and that is all she could do. God this man was gorgeous!!!!! He had the most incredible face she had ever seen, her eyes involuntarily scanned his face from his jawline to his eyes, his deep gray eyes that were intensely staring back into hers. He had a stubble but that had only enhanced his rawness and the seductive smile that he was giving her was making her head spin…as if his smell WASN'T enough!

Man- (still with a sly smirk on his face) HI

K- (stuttering) H-h-ello

She saw the man's gaze wander from top to bottom and then it came back to lock with her eyes

Man- so are you free tonight

K- (stumped) w-what

Man- I said are you free tonight, maybe we could go have some dinner and then get to know each other in my hotel suite

K- excuse me!

Man- oh come one babe

K- shut up! What the hell do you think of your self, main koi aisi waisi ladki nahi hoon…god your such a disgusting man!

Kanya was furious, the nerve of that man to openly ask her to spend a night with him! Granted he was gorgeous and had stirred something in her but that did not mean she was going to sleep with him! She had been so outraged that she had not even bothered to look back and had walked out of the coffee shop. She stood outside RN, Inc. trying to calm herself down, but she was shaking again and this time it was not because of fear.

She walked in to the conference room and tried to get the coffee shop encounter out of her head, she had a presentation to present and a contract to get she had no time to think about a gorgeous man or his absurd request. She had become so engrossed in trying to get her stuff loaded that she didn't realize that everyone had walked in and were already waiting for her to present.

Presenting was exactly what she did and that too with confidence and grace, she was quite surprised at her self at how well she was doing, the coffee shop incident had made her nervousness disappear. Her designs had been well liked by every one, though it was dark she could still see the look of awe and the smiles on almost every ones faces. Pride was already welling up in her chest; she knew she had this contract for sure.

Ranbir had been sitting in the back watching silently, yes the designs the colors had all been brilliant and the women presenting them was SEXY as hell. His thoughts had gone back to the little coffee shop incident; it was not his fault it was hers! He had been innocently standing in line for some coffee when he heard a small shriek and when he turned around he had come face to face with the most angelic face he'd ever seen, her skin seemed so soft and whit and she had the most gorgeous chocolate brown eyes, they had reminded him of almonds, nice and long! And her mouth ah she had quite the full lips on her pretty face…they had looked so juicy and tempting he was surprised he hadn't just kissed her right there and then. The overall package had not looked too bad either, his eyes had skimmed and pictured everything to be perfect, he was sure her eyes had felt the same about him. Oh, he saw the way she was awestruck and floored by his looks, he was not surprised, he knew he looked good!

He had been surprised to see her in his conference room but he didn't want her to run off again hence he had taken the back seat and tried to keep himself hidden. God she had looked beautiful, even through the dark he could make out those almond eyes of hers, and that gorgeous mouth of hers the way it moved was turning him on to no extent. She was smart, very smart, beauty with a brain was a deadly combination… this women had a fire in her and Ranbir Nanda loved to play with fires!

Her 30 minutes were up but she knew she had nailed it. As soon as the lights went on she heard the claps she heard the adulation but her body had turned numb…she had once again found herself staring in a pair of deep gray eyes. There he was, that gorgeous man seated in the back, staring at her with that sexy grin on his face, she couldn't hear anything she couldn't see anything, she was entrapped in his eyes! He was getting up, she felt her self stiffen…he was walking towards her but she couldn't break the gaze.

R- Congratulations Ms. Kanya Godbole, the contract is yours! By the way I am Ranbir Nanda (he takes out his hand)

Kanya hesitantly puts her hand into his…she felt a sudden surge of passion… a shock in her gut she had never felt before. She was feeling weak in the knees…all because of a handshake?

R- (realizing she won't say anything but is simply staring away) Your presentation was excellent. I was quite impressed, you have truly earned this contract on your merits and exceptional designs.

He slowly leans in knocking the breath right out of her and whispers huskily in her ear "and oh my previous offer still stands!"

Edited by simran1285 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: psarada

Hi,

Nice update and your characterizations are very good. BTW don't you telk Perfu that she needs to update her ffs soon and so shouldn't you too follow the same rule. Please update soon and make Ranbir and Kanya meet in the next update.

but unlike Perfu I have updated 3 parts in one week😉

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