FF: Manzil *Authors Note* 6/16/08

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Hmmm…an idea creeped in my mind today at work and I just had to pen it down, it's my first attempt and am not really sure about it, would love your thoughts!

All the world's a stage, and all the men and women merely players;

Kanya stood staring out her window watching the waves rise and fall; how ironic she wondered the waves had reflected so much of her life, its ups and its downs reminded her of the turbulences she had faced. She watched silently as the minutes on her large clock above the mantelpiece ticked away. She had never been the silent sort, she was once a chirpy and full of life Kanya who had received everything she laid her pretty eyes on. Having lost her mother during childbirth Kanya had become the apple of the eye for her father, Anand Godbole. He doted on his only child and found in her the happiness he had lost with his wife Pammi. Anand was a successful entrepreneur therefore fulfilling his daughters wish was always a snap of a finger. Anand was everything for Kanya, he was the man who had given her the world on a silver platter then how could she not do the one thing he had so wanted her to do. How could she refuse a man who had given her everything and had asked for nothing in return.

Sunil Srivastav was a charming man, and it was his charm that had won over Anand's heart. The fact that Sunil was a mere employee in his office never bothered Anand for he found the boy to be intelligent and very sincere. Kanya and Sunil's alliance had immediately taken born in Anand's mind. If Pammi and Anand had ever had a son he would have turned out to be just like Sunil; Anand was sure of it. Perhaps that is why he didn't hesitate and had instantly brought up his marriage proposal to Sunil. Sunil at first had been flabbergasted; being an orphan he had worked hard to support himself and make it on his own in the world, and never had he dreamed that a man like Anand could bring about such a proposal. He had expressed his concern over housing and Kanya's well being to Anand but Anand had shooed those worried away. If it didn't hurt Sunil's self-respect Kanya and Sunil would live in the Godbole house after marriage. The thought of Kanya going away to her "sasural" one day had always depressed Anand, Sunil & Kanya living in the Godbole house would be perfect as his precious daughter will always be in front of his eyes and soon Sunil could take over handling the business.

Sunil had instantly started courting Kanya, he was a very humble man and not to bad to look at, but Kanya didn't love him. So what she thought, it was not always necessary to fall in love before marriage sometimes it could happened after marriage as well. She thought of her parents, they too had an arrange marriage and even after 25 years Pammi still ruled Anand's heart.

The wedding preparations were in full flow, Anand had wanted it to be a grand affair, for it was the wedding of his only child, he wanted everything to be perfect and it had been. Kanya had looked gorgeous and Sunil had looked just as handsome, everyone seemed so happy so content then what went wrong?

Kanya sighed and came back to the present, here she was alone, lonely and DIVORCED! She cringed at the sound of that and swallowed a sob. Her marriage had not even lasted a day! It had not even lasted 12 hours! It had all been over before it had even started and here she was 27 and divorced for 2 years!

Sunil had not been the sweet, innocent man they all had thought him to be, infact he was completely the opposite. The moment that Anand had brought up Kanya and his marriage to him Sunil had immediately seen this as a key to Anand Godbole's safe, all he had to do was get Anand to sign his business over to him which he knew was not an easy task, but after agreeing to the marriage Anand had been thrilled and had signed whatever was presented to him without uttering a word!

Sunil had broken all the promises he had made to Kanya as soon as they were made, she felt her world spin when her husband told her he married her for her father's wealth on their wedding night He had announced not just to her but to her father as well, who had ended up suffering a major heart attack which unfortunately he had not survived.

The divorce proceedings had been a blur, it was only a few days after Anand's wake, it seemed as if Sunil had it all planned, he wanted to be rid of her ASAP. She remembered the brief meeting she had with him after the divorce was finalized she was outraged and demanded and answer and all he said was "everything is fair in love and war" that is when she saw her, a beautiful girl had just walked to his side and put her hand into his and they walked away. That is all is remembered seeing that day the two of them walking away with her dreams and her fathers heard earned money and she could do nothing but watch.

Ranbir Nanda was a ruthless man. He did not believe in love or the institution of marriage but here he was standing as the best man at his friends wedding. He hated such displays of emotions and feelings, he did not believe in these silly rituals and cermonies he thought them to be too vile and a waste of time. No matter how much his mother tried she could not convince Ranbir to settle down, here he was nearing 30 and still single. It's not that he hadn't had his share of women, oh no Ranbir Nanda had bedded many women but that was the furthest he chose to go. He was a man who believed in one night stands, being emotionally involved with a women was a hassle the more involved you'd get the more they would stick.

Malika knew the reason behind her sons behavior and his trivial thoughts, it was Ranbir's father. Rajeev Nanda had everything a booming business, a loving wife and a handsome son but still he was unsatisfied. He was seceretly having an affair with his secretary and it hadn't taken Malika long to uncover it. The argument had been huge and it had ended with Rajeev walking out; unfortunately Rajeev not only left the house but this world as well he was involved in a terrible accident 30 minutes after leaving home and had died on the spot. Ranbir was 15 at the time and every detail of the argument had replayed in his mind every night, his mother had gently told him that Dad was in a better place, but Ranbir had hoped, he had PRAYED that his father was in hell rotting there for hurting his mother.

Ranbir had refused to let Malika live the life of a widow, why should his mother give up color for the sake of a man who had walked out on her. His Dadi; whom he fondly called Big D and his mother had tried to make him see reason but he would hear no word of it. The people talked and gossiped as they often did but Ranbir paid no ear. His fathers death had put Malika incharge of the business being inexperienced caused a lot of damage to RN Incorporated. the company was suffering major losses, many of their hotels had run out of business and the company also lacked competent employees. It was Ranbir who had changes all that at the age of 23 he had stepped in and taken control of RN Inc. Within the next 5 years the company had emerged a winner, Ranbir had brought RN Inc. to new heights and his success had no bounds.

It was the shrill of the phone that woke Kanya from her thoughts, she hadn't realized how much time had flown by and she was still there standing by her window.

Kanya- Hello

Shruti- arey kahan hai tu, kabse tera cell try kar rahi hoon

Kanya- oh sorry yaar…

Shruti (cuts her off) oh fo rehne de na, acha sunn I called to tell you that your meeting with the MD of RN, Inc. has been set for tomorrow morning, you will have exactly thirty minutes to present and impress him babes, so best of luck!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow it is very nice!! continue soon Di!

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wow
how sweet
continue yaar 👏
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😭 😭 😭 Meri simran abh khud ff lekhna shuru kar di!!! Oh I can't express the feeling!! Muahahahaha!! I havent read it yet..I will finish reading and comment. 😳
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hey thats a real nice story line!!
continue!!
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it was very nice
continue soon
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Thanks guys for the response, I might or might not continue...if I get some time I might😆, but I really appreciate the feedback 😛

@Perfu- tu toh kabhi kabhi FF update karti ussi ke gham mein maine bhi FF likhdala 😭
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that was a brill start...
you have to continue it...
pls...
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The next installment and so far no writers block, of course in the next update RanKan will meet!

Sunil might have deceived Anand into signing away his business to him, but he hadn't taken the house. The once warm and laughter filled house was suddenly cold and solemn. Kanya slowly walked around the house seeing her father everywhere she turned, she could hear his laughter, she could picture him sitting on his large leather chair reading his paper and smoking his favorite cigar but as the tears welled the image blurred and soon disappeared. Much to her dismay she had to let go of all the naukers; she couldn't possibly afford to pay them. She hadn't a clue what to do next having no extended family was also no help, and even the friends had turned their backs on her, she had nothing and no one while striding up the stairs she suddenly broke out in to sobs, she couldn't make it to her bed, she couldn't even make to her room and so she sat, sat on the stairs and wept uncontrollably.

The warm shower had been a relief but it didn't ease the pain in her heart. A week had passed since her divorce, she hadn't once stepped out of the house, most of the time she had cried; it was hard when no one was around to pacify or hold you but she had to step out and buy things for the house after all she had to go on…for her fathers sake!

Perhaps it was because of her empty stomach, perhaps it was fatigue or perhaps it was just a misconception of her eyes but she knew she felt people looking at her different, and those whispers they were driving her insane, but she strode on. The friendly shopkeepers were now giving bitter looks, the passerby's looked displeased…what was wrong? Was their something on her face? Why was everyone acting so cold? And that is when she heard it, it had come from the Mouth of Mrs. Chadda her own neighbor, a women she had known since she was a child, a women who had welcomed her into her home many times!

Mrs.Chadda- kaisi besharam hai, patti ne shaadi ki raat hi chod diya, na jaane isse kya bimaari hogi, dekho toh is kamzart ko budhe baap ko bhi kha gayi!

And that is when it all started, she heard more taunting this time from people she didn't even know they were all pointing at her, staring at her, calling her names! that was enough, that was more than enough for Kanya, she couldn't fathom it, any of it…she had to get away…she had to RUN away!

Two Years had passed since she sold her house it had been heart wrenching leaving the house you grew up in, but it had to be done, she couldn't move forward had she stayed she knew the everyday stares and taunts would have driven her mad, so she had picked up whatever she could and left…that day would always be etched in her mind, she watched as her house grew small in the distance and then is disappeared as her car turned at the curb. She had decided to leave all the bad memories behind and take with her only the good.

Godbole Interiors Inc. was started with the money she had received from the house. Interior decorating had always been a passion and what better then to make a living from that passion? At first it had only been Kanya but then Shruti had come along begging for a job. Shruti was a middle class girl who wanted in some way to help her mother in running the house, but landing a good job that too in the field of interior decorating was not an easy task in Mumbai. Kanya had immediately felt for Shruit and had hired her but once an employee had soon turned in to a friend; Kanya's only friend. Shruti did not taunt or think vile of Kanya instead she had cried with her and alleviated her pain. They had worked hard to make the business a success, landing small jobs paid the bills but it didn't not give them the recognition they needed. It was Kanya's dedication and contemporary thought process that had helped them land an interview with the MD of RN, Inc. The company was opening a new 500 bedroom hotel and Kanya had wanted badly to get a chance to decorate the hotel, the money she'd get would be huge of course but this would also help her get the acknowledgment GI, Inc. needed.

Ranbir woke to the sound of the alarm he had set on his cell phone. Shutting the alarm off he lazily turned and came face to face with Shonali. God she was one gorgeous piece of work, thought Ranbir, He had already planned this night the moment he laid eyes on her and she being, carefree and willing had happily agreed to a night of ecstasy.

Shonali- (sleepily) Morning

Ranbir- You have exactly 10 minutes to clean up and go (smiling)

Shonali- what? (Confused)

Ranbir gets up and starts to tie his robe "you heard me you have 10 minutes to clean up and leave I am going to go take a shower, and oh please clean up your clutter…I hate a mess that is not made by me"

Shonali- how can you be so shameless, we have just spent the night together and…

Ranbir- (cuts her off) we had only agreed to a night and that night is now over, so please pick up your things and get out!

Shonali groaned in anger and quickly pick up her things to leave but before slamming the door she gave him one stern look and yelles "YOU ARE DESPICABLE" Ranbir only gave her his award winning Grin and headed for the shower.

Ranbir had a meeting with Keisha, no Kaya oh whatever her name is at 9 but before that he had to go meet his mother and grandmother at the Nanda Mansion. He often stayed in one of his hotel suites whenever he had a date, everyone knew not to disturb him when he was busy with his "guest" His mother and grandmother knew of his antics and didn't approve a bit but there was no stopping Ranbir. His mom and Big D were the only women he loved in the world, all the others he despised and used merely for pleasure, but no matter how much he loved his two ladies it didn't mean he always had to listen to them.

Malika was praying when her son walked in, she had not seen him for 2 days but knew the important "work" he had to do. As per ritual she took the "aarti ki thaali" to him and put a "tikka" on his head, secretly praying that may he change his ways and find a good girl soon to settle down with. It was the same thing she had asked from god everyday and Ranbir knew that but chose to ignore it. He didn't want to settle down and there was no such thing as a "good girl" They were all the same greedy and selfish. Marriages led to only one thing and that was divorce!, sooner or later people would get tired of each other and move on to someone else…his father did. Malika saw the hint of anger flash into her sons eyes, she knew what he was thinking and she couldn't do anything to change that.

Malika sighed and continued- Big D apne kamre main hain, kal se tumhe bahut yaad kar rahi hai, jao pehle un se mil aao main breakfast lagati hoon

As soon as Ranbir started to walk upstairs his mother called out to him, he walked back to her and was about to question when Malika held his face in her hands and kissed his forehead. He could see the tears and feel their pain.

Ranbir- come on Mom (engulfing her into a hug)

Malika- (sobbing) yeh bhi koi baat hui Ranbir tu do din se ghar nahi aaya, patah hai hum kitne taras jaate hai tujhe dekhne ke liye

Ranbir- I know I am sorry mom, woh mera kaam…

Malika- haan haan mujhe sab maloom hai tere kaam ke baare mein

Ranbir only grinned, of course his mother knew but still talking about your escapades with your mom was not the best thing to do

Big D- Ranbir tu aagaya puttar

Big D was already making her way down stairs, though they had a elevator in the house, Big D had refused to use it, if told she would retort back and say "main koi budhi thodi na hoon"

Ranbir instantly ran to his grandmother and touched her feet

Big D- jeeta reh puttar, chal do din ke baad hi sahi, lekin tu aaya toh

Ranbir hugging her now "sorry sorry sorry Big D, who mein thoda busy ho gaya tha"

Big D- haan puttar main sab samjhti hoon, chal naashta karle

Big D and Malika forced three aalo parantha's down Ranbir's throat, they fed him lovingly with their own hands, Ranbir had no option but to eat. They chatted at little with the two women still bringing up his marriage here and there. An hour passed and Ranbir had only 20 minutes to make it to his meeting with Keisha or Kaya or whatever her name was.

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wow sucha good start luv it allready ...

plese update soooooooon im waiting:::D

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