The Power Of Love,new ff!Part 1,pg2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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A big hello to all the KIT members😊.I have seen a lot of fanfics writers over here so a bid applause to all of themšŸ‘.The charcters are the same but changed it slightly.I changed the name godbole as for me it sounds weird and funny šŸ˜†moreover in my ff they are ultra rich and godbole dosent seem to be right to me. Right now I did'nt thing of a title will give a name soon😳

Characters

Ranbir Nanda

Melaka Nanda

Kanya Thappar

Anand Thappar

Ayan Mittal

Introduction

Kanya Thappar a 22 year old girl daughter of a big industrialist. Have all kinds of luxuries basically living a life of a princess but deep within she is sad as she never got the parental love she deserved. She believes in love and is waiting for her prince charming 😳

Anand Thappar, a business tycoon who has a chain of hotels worldwide. His wife Pammi Thappar sacrificed her life for her child and breathed her last after giving birth to a daughter.

Ranbir Nanda is from a middle class family living with his mom. He like to spend time alone or with his mom. He has a friend Ayan but tries to maintain a distance since he don't believe in lasting relations as he don't want to loose anybody and then suffer because of that , as since his childhood fate had played with his emotions.He don't believe in love

Melaka Nanda Ranbir's mother but also a father since his dad passed away. She is a sweet and kind lady

Do say howz the storyline and should I continue?šŸ˜•

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KC294 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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me first

i like the story line... and i think you should continue... its role reversal... so it'll be interesting to see what u come up with....

Edited by KC294 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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really good start..seems interesting
please continue soon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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KC294@ thanx for the motivation dear,yeah i wanted to do something unique 😳hope i reach to ur expectations 😃
punjabi.princes@thanx for the appriciation dear 😳
if the response is good i will update it quicker 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i love the story line continue soon love the fact u switched around their status standings. good luck
Edited by dilkeroshni - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I like it
Its original and sounds goood
Plzzzzzzz continue with it soooooooooooooon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great introductin.... continue.. interesting ... ran middle class and kan rich it would be fun seeing them fall in love.

plz continue fast can't wait to read more.!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awesome. Ranbir Nanda is not rich!! My world is turned upside down! I want to see how it goes. Awesome idea though!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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dilkeroshni@i am glad u liked it 😃thanx for the wishes 😳

Kiran_1@ i wanted to do something unique and glad u liked it 😃

suganain@thanx for the lovely words 😳

desilife@yeah it would be fun seeing them fall in love,hope u would enjoy till the last😊

Perfangel5655@ hope i didn't give u a major attack šŸ˜† šŸ˜† thanks for the appreciation 😃

u guys seem to be astonished by the change of status or is it cuz nobody till now wrote an ff were ran is from middle class nd kanya from an ultra rich family if so i am really happy cuz i really wanted to do somethig unique 😳

Edited by famy.kn - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART 1
The rays of sun pierced in through the window of a girl's bedroom.The morning light distracts her sleep also putting a halt to the flights of fantasy she soars during her sleep.Kitna acha sapna dekhe rahi thi mein ab hi suraj ko niklna tha she mutters to herself.

Kya hua kanya betia, subah subah thumhari chehra itni utri kyun hai?Kanya luks up to find Raghu Kaka her caretaker who her dad had appointed since she was a child, but for her he was more than that. He was the one who comforted her while she was distressed, guided her between right and wrong, shared her happiness and comforted her while she felt dejected, he encouraged and supported her in her decisions taught her the meaning of life which has both ups and downs…..so she thought of him as a father infact when she was a child she used to call him dad but once she was mature enough to understand things Raghu Kaka disclosed the fact that he was just a caretaker and nothing more than that.It was heartbreaking for her but as time passed she was happy atleast her dad appointed a caring and affectionate person as her guardian.She shakes her head and says app kabhi nahi badlenga referring to the glass of juice he was holding in a tray. She had told him umpteen times not to bring her drink to her room and that they were several servants who could do it.He keeps the tray on the side table and sits besides her on the couch.Apne bath ki dad se. Ji nahi betyia abhi thak tho nahi mauka nahi mila, who naya mall ki project se busy thae.Kab who busy nahi rehta 😔 dad hamesha kam mein dubba rehta hain she says with a sigh.Lekin beta who saab..she leaves the room in frustration leaving Raghu Kaka in mid sentence.

Scuttling through the grand stairs of her mansion,kanya dashes into her dad who was on his way to take a file he had forgotten.Both utter a word of apology and go their own way.The butler who had witnessed the scene thinks out aloud how formal their relation of a father and a daughter is.He feels quite sad šŸ˜” that though they have everything money,fame but not love.A love of a father and a daughter,a love of a husband and a wife.

Kanya sat near the seashore and watched the waves sweeping up in graceful curves.Whenever she felt lonely,she came to the beach.It comforted her weary soul😊.And today was one among those days when she felt that she was the only being left in this world.Life seemed full of loneliness šŸ˜” .She sees some kids splashing about in the water with their parents that's when she remembers her childhood days which were dull and monotonous .The sharp and irritating sound of her cell blaring interrupted her gloomy thoughts.She luked at her caller id and saw an unknow number flashing.She pressed the call button and answered the call.
Caller: hey,any plans of waking up.Hope u remember that we have to go for the rehearsals.
Kanya: H…HELLOOOO
Caller: naya gf šŸ˜•
Kanya: What!i think u rung the wrong number šŸ˜•
Caller: What!why didn't u say this before.Do u know how much time I wasted not only that but also my credit(the amount in the phone),damn 😔
Kanya: Are u out of order?first u dialed the wrong number then u talk like a chatterbox nonstop…she hears an engage tone indicating that the caller at the other had cut the call.Pata nahi kaysa admi hai yai.No manners by the way why am I thinking of that idiot 🤢

It was getting late and the sun was setting making it shimmer with pastel colors on the surface of the water.She gets into her car and drives off.

If there are alot of comments i'll update it faster😳

Edited by famy.kn - 17 years ago

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