FF:New!! Aise hota hai pyar .. Page 1

Hi gues this is my first FF so please dont mind if I wirte worng. I hope you like it.. 😕 The caractes

Ranbir: 23 years old shall start 2nd year of Collage. Best friends: Jay and Alek.

Kanya: 22ns year will start 1st year of Collage. Best Friends: Prachi and Sadhna.

Alek: 22 year old, stupid and hate school, Love to see girls and invite them to dinner.Bset friend with Ranbir .

Prachi: 22 year Best friend with Kanya and love to support her when she need help. Naughty girl and tease all boys.

Sadhna: 21 year old. Nice and shy. And very good friend with Kanya tell her every truth.

Jay: 23 yeats old. Love girls and love to tease them and more.
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Part 1: Ranbir was waiting for Jay outside of the collage and Jay was waiting for Alek.
Part2: Kanya and Prachi was going home and suddenly Prachi remeber that they forgot Sadhna.
Part3: Kanya ,Prachi and Sadhna was going to fill the paper and Kanya said that they can go she have to drink water.
Part:4 Kanya and Ranbir meets at the waterplace
pART5: Jay see Kanya and Ranbir staying at each other
Part6: Jay teases Ranbir all the way to the classroom
part7:Alek meet Sadhna
Part 8: Kanya,Prachi,Sadhna goes to there classroom
part9: They are going to be a party tommorow
part 10: Jay ask Ranbir if he are comming in the party then he remember Kanya and he says YES
Part 11: Prachi ask Kanya if she are going to the party and then she remember Ranbir and says yes... (L)

Part 12: Comming Soon
part13:Comming Soon and more😛

Hope you like it

sounds interesting!
hey in my ff i have jay n prachi too 😉
cant wait to read! 😛

Originally posted by: rainshine_11

sounds interesting!
hey in my ff i have jay n prachi too 😉
cant wait to read! 😛

Thanks I will post FF 2 times in week or more Well thanks for you love it😳

sounds great i can't wait to read more...=] good luck and have fun =]

it sounds intersting. continue soon

it awesome plz cont soon plz 😆 😛

i can't wait to read it... it sounds interesting... continue soon

that was your first part? 😕 Umm... ok..

its grreat but i think you're writing ur parts divided into mini parts.. and that might not be such a good idea becuase it is confusing... don't subdivide each part like don't put part 1 or part 2 within the first part... if it is a scene change you can indicate that by writing it ..... its great but sort of confusing but i hope you continue soon... sorry if i sound mean=[

hye continua plz