AshNi TS: Tumse hi meri pehchaan; Last Part on Pg 8 - Page 5

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Posted: 7 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: nishi05

Beautiful narration of Nidhi's inner turmoil...👏👏The way she took charge of the situation and handled it very well is commendable...👏Glad that Nidhi's family is with her now...but without Ashu, her happiness, her life is incomplete...and at this moment her love is lying there all injured and unconscious...waiting to see why Ashu is in this situation...

Thanks for karwa chauth part...wanted to see it in serial...but didn't...now visualizing it through your story...

Thanks a lot for the update dear...and your efforts to keep forum active...
Love you...Stay blessed forever !!! ❤️🤗


Thanks a lot Di for liking this😊
This karva chauth part apparently came to my mind while writing it on Sunday😊
Regarding the reason why Ashu was injured...I'll soon be updating...I just try to keep forum alive from my side...Thanks for appreciating this😊🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: babita..

Di, U know i have a very bad net. i will come back later

cholly 🤗
lovees ❤️


Its ok dear...no issues...take your own time shona😊🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Anjani9


When did I say that...short and nice update...appreciate how Nidhi handled the situation...😳


Thanks Anjani...I could narrate her handling the situation bcoz of myself being into this field😛
I'm glad you liked it...Ashu and the reason of being in this condition will be updated soon😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
#44
First of all... many thanks Manisha dear for gifting the chappy to Swati... loved this gesture..🤗
She is not well n will come here in a day or two.. !😊

The continuation is very sweet,, emotional,, n beautifully handled...⭐️👏
Loved the way you have shown the turmoil Nidhi is living with... All without Ashu,,, remembering their sweet times together with the festival maintained n their lovely moments.. so well narrated the part,, n very well told what Nidh is going thru... 👏
Here,, you have shown Nidhi's Mom alive... n there is no Dadi bua in the picture... And,,, in your story,, Nidhi calls her father as Papa n not Baba...
Nidhi n Ashu always called their respective fathers as Baba,,, but even this is so much liked .. !!!
Loved to see her mother with her for the first time ,,, a girl who needs her mother at this time of the crisis.. here you have shown a lovely bond of them... n one handling the other..
Plus.,, loved how her parents cud not stop themselves in this crisis to go to their daughter.. whom they left when she married Ashu.
One after the other,, the links are nicely woven... !!!
Now... the bad news... Ashu injured n unconscious,,, will wait to know what happened to him... n what lies ahead to know for Nidhi n us.. !
Thanks dear... for this lovely update... though a tough time for Nidhi.. but as a doc she has excelled.. as always.. 😳 ⭐️
Looking forward for the next... thanks..
N God bless.. !!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: bawaswift

First of all... many thanks Manisha dear for gifting the chappy to Swati... loved this gesture..🤗
She is not well n will come here in a day or two.. !😊

The continuation is very sweet,, emotional,, n beautifully handled...⭐️👏
Loved the way you have shown the turmoil Nidhi is living with... All without Ashu,,, remembering their sweet times together with the festival maintained n their lovely moments.. so well narrated the part,, n very well told what Nidh is going thru... 👏
Here,, you have shown Nidhi's Mom alive... n there is no Dadi bua in the picture... And,,, in your story,, Nidhi calls her father as Papa n not Baba...
Nidhi n Ashu always called their respective fathers as Baba,,, but even this is so much liked .. !!!
Loved to see her mother with her for the first time ,,, a girl who needs her mother at this time of the crisis.. here you have shown a lovely bond of them... n one handling the other..
Plus.,, loved how her parents cud not stop themselves in this crisis to go to their daughter.. whom they left when she married Ashu.
One after the other,, the links are nicely woven... !!!
Now... the bad news... Ashu injured n unconscious,,, will wait to know what happened to him... n what lies ahead to know for Nidhi n us.. !
Thanks dear... for this lovely update... though a tough time for Nidhi.. but as a doc she has excelled.. as always.. 😳 ⭐️
Looking forward for the next... thanks..
N God bless.. !!!


@red...I'm really sorry for the glitches😛
You know I haven't seen the show...this I didn't know...I just made an imaginary story and situations in my mind😳...itna to expected tha...😆

Thanks for telling me...in my next and final part, I'll correct the way she addresses her parents...but regarding her Mom...sorry I can't change it now😳...
Thanks a lot Bro for reading and commenting...really means a lot😃🤗
Edited by braveheartdoc - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#46
Bhabhi what happened to you?😭
please get well soon...take very good rest and meds on time...Diwali is coming...I want to see you fit and fine very soon...God bless you Bhabhi...jaldi se theek ho jaao please❤️🤗


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Posted: 7 years ago
#47

Very nice update Manisha di👏👏

I loved Nidhi's recalling her moments of karwachauth with Ashu and how the mements were so loving❤️

I liked to see Ashu gets fine immediately and he is not injured much. Her condition is so poignant, I wish all goes will with them.

A doc is a dutiful being who leaves his or her own tensions aside and keeps on looking up to the patients and their well being. Nidhi as a doting doc, did what she could have done as a doc and as a Dean's wife.⭐️⭐️

I loved the changes you have made di !

Calling CV Papa and the mother she has always longed to see alive ! What a pleasant change di

Looking forward to see Ashu in good health and spirits, wishing the couple good luck !!!

Thanks for the awesome update di, will be waiting for the next, with eyes upon the inseparable love and bond of our own Ashni 🤗


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Posted: 7 years ago
#48
Hope Bawa bro and Swati bhabhi had a loving festival of Karwachauth 🤗
Bhabhi hope you are fine today, get well soon 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
#49
Narrative part is so awesome and brilliant di 👏👏
Enjoyed reading the way you writes 👍🏼
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Posted: 7 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

@red...I'm really sorry for the glitches😛
You know I haven't seen the show...this I didn't know...I just made an imaginary story and situations in my mind😳...itna to expected tha...😆

Thanks for telling me...in my next and final part, I'll correct the way she addresses her parents...but regarding her Mom...sorry I can't change it now😳...
Thanks a lot Bro for reading and commenting...really means a lot😃🤗


Hey don't be sorry my dear... these changes are always Welcome... !

I liked the way you have changed the scenario... Nothing is there for sorry... we must have new things n characters changed time to time... take it easy..

You have been so great... efforts are superb... n parents were needed to be there for Nidhi... !

Thanks a lott... !!!⭐️👏

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