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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

Stunner

Posted: 9 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: indu6789
Felt the events occur in front of my eyes...fingers often dont move as fast as the heart..hence will correct the spellings tomorrow!
Bawa dear..update day after.
Love u.laa

Love u too Di 🤗

Sure take your time to edit the parts... i shall update afterwards... !

Just read it... Its really like,, every events occur n such beautiful scenes... !

Review in a while.. !

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

Stunner

Posted: 9 years ago

#102

To be honest with you Indu di... this update needs not much words from the readers... cos we are speechless today... you have so meticulously explained every word n scene that like you i was also watching the scenes n events as per they occured.. ! ⭐️⭐️ 👏👏

let me be honest..intezaar mujhe bhi bahut tha apne pote ya poti ka..per beta asal mei iss ghar ki khushi tu aur nidhi ho..tum sath raho..bachche ho ya na ho..kya farq padta hai..yeh ghar to mudhi ki hansi se aabaad hai..aur rahega..mujhe aur kuch nahi chahiye..

Baba knows what they are missing... but first priority is Nidhi n her smiles.. ! If his kids are happy with each other what else he can long for..

ashu jab main tujhe laaya tha na to teri aankhein tere hont udaas they..honton pe to dheere dheere muskarahat aa gayi..per aankhon me chamak to woh shokh chanchal intern hi layi..kyun dr Hardstone"??and Ashutosh almost laughed

True... very true... 👏

NIDHI..MAIN TUMSE PYAAR KARTA HOON..TUMSE SHAADI KI..POORE SAMAJ SE JHAGAD KE..KYUNKI MAIN JEE NAHI SAKTA TUMHAARE BINA..SAAN BHI NAHI LE SAKTA..HUMAARA RISHTA EK BABY PE NAHI TIKA HAI..MAIN JAANTA HOON TUM SAPNE DEKHTI HO USKE..MAIN BHI BHOOLA NAHI HOON USS TOOTE KHWAAB KO..PER NIDHI WAHI WAJOOD NAHI HAI HUMAARE RISHTE KA..HUMARI ZINDAGI KA..KYA HUM DONO BACHCHE KE BAGAIR KHUSH NAHI REH SAKTE..KYA MAIN TUMHE PYAAR NAHI KARTA..KYA YEH QUAAFI NAHI HAI NIDHI??MERE LIYE ...SACH MEIN..SUBAH UTH KE TUMHE APNI BAGAL MEI DEKHNA..YEH EHSAAS KARNA KI AB TUM HUMESHA MERE KAMRE..MERE GHAR..MERI ZINDAGI ME RAHOGI QUAAFI HAI."!!Nidhi couldn't answer she just held on to her husband's torso..and put her head against his chest..no more words were required...

Me speeechless... Ashu did n said what he meant... a man of few words said so much in these few lines.. ⭐️👏

Dr Nidhi..now his nidhi..was returning to KGH..it was sunshine time at KGH..and dr Ashutosh drove off.recalling how he had met with an accident a few years ago..n met his love of life..

He hummed after a long time..

Zindagi ek safar hai suhana..

Yahaan kal kya ho kisne jaana..

His happiness lies in Nidhi's happiness... praying for that... 🤗

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

Stunner

Posted: 9 years ago

#103

A muddle aged dr stood by the door and watched the scene..it was a sense of deja vu..he knew she was would strike a new relationship of love n warmth with these kids..he knew she would fill the world of kgh with smiles..all he wanted to affirm was that atleast a wisp of those smiles should reach her eyes too...he would do anything to see that twinkle in her eyes again...Dr Ashutosh stood silently..reminiscent of how years ago..this very girl..then a young vivacious intern had taught him..a lonely bitter Dr to smile...now life had indeed come a full circle..he had to bring a smile on thise lips..a colour in those eyes...

And Ashu will definitely keep his words that his heart desires... !

Shtama aunty..who just held ger n said"beta..anji ki baat ka..."nidhi stopped her mid way n said"aunty..chalti hoon...aap chinta nahi kariye..i am ok..."!

Got emotional for Nidhi... but she is strong,,, as far as Ashu is there with her.. !

Shtama stood rooted to the dpot wondering why had the world taken so long to recognise the love of this middle aged man for his bubbly intern...it was not an infatuation. .it was a love as strong as an oak..n as evergreen as a deodar..it was beyond reasons..it was beyond seasons...

👏👏 ⭐️⭐️ 👏👏👏 ⭐️⭐️⭐️ 👏

Perfectly judged... .perfectly recognised., !

."and she got up midway.."bus i am full..."and got up..baba looked at Ashu who signalled that he understood she was hiding her tears...

They both understand her so much,, it was natural n obvious... !

he tenderly dried her long tresses..tresses under which he had felt the flaming of unbridled passion..but tresses which needed his tending tonight..he got a comb...n tried to smoothen them..

He knew how much she needed him tonight... not only physically but mentally... ! lovely,,, !

aur phir mujhse return gift maangogi..."??and nidhi stood still...looking into those deep eyes..calm like the ocean..ready to abdorb all her agony her pain n sorrow...

Ashutosh hugged her n said.."mujhe to mera evershining diamond mil gaya..haan suit khateed dena is gareeb neurosurgeon ko"!!and she laughed "aap aur gareeb"??n he caressed her "haan nidhi tumhare bina..itte baras ek tarah se gareeb..ya mahroom hi tha main..tumne sab diya. .pyaar saath..aur ..aur..bhindi masala"!and they laughed...

He has admitted it once again... n so right he is.. ! His life means Nidhi around him... Thode badal hain,,, thoda pani hai,,, yahi Raja aur Titli ki kahani hai,,, !

yes he admired her..was attracted to her vivaciousness,had no shame in admitting he desired her...but more than that he wanted to protect her..to cocoon her from all or any barb that could hit her..he could give away all that he possessed to bring a smile on that face..

She was his student..his intern..his responsibility. .n most of all his love n his life..

In love with Ashu... 😳🤗

looking at her pic by his side...only to feel her arms around him ...n he turned n she settled as always upon his chest...her haven of refuge from all travails...of life n time..their live would heal all wounds...sooner or later.

I wish for the same... ! cos when Ashu is there for n with her no bites can bite her,, be it Anji or her own pains,,, !

Indu di,,, love you for your written fab... thankuuu from your Fan,,... 🤗🤗

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

Stunner

Posted: 9 years ago

#104

This FF is a Writer's delight... ⭐️👏

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Tinku2015

@Tinku2015

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#105

😛 beautiful update...loved the caring baba ashu n though not much of armaan is seen but just cant get anji...she who was always more worried for nidhi than anybody here its just a self centered girl...looking forward for the blooming life of ashni...

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Sakhi

@sakha_sakhi

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: bawaswift
This FF is a Writer's delight... ⭐️👏

This ff is very very close to Reader's heart...

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ArshAriya

@ArshAriya

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: sakha_sakhi

This ff is very very close to Reader's heart...

So true it is indeed close very very very close every scene every emotion that u portrait indu mam they cleary touch the heart of the reader's

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indu6789

@indu6789

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: arsh4heaven

So true it is indeed close very very very close every scene every emotion that u portrait indu mam they cleary touch the heart of the reader's

THANK YOU DEAR

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indu6789

@indu6789

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: sakha_sakhi
Induji once again such a nice update...
As usual Baba is the big banyan tree on which Ashni has made their nest and Baba is always there with his words of wisdom to guide them and protect them... Very rightly he said the following...
intezaar mujhe bhi bahut tha apne pote ya poti ka..per beta asal mei iss ghar ki khushi tu aur nidhi ho..tum sath raho..bachche ho ya na ho..kya farq padta hai..yeh ghar to mudhi ki hansi se aabaad hai..aur rahega

So Ashu have started his efforts to make Nidhi release that she is much more capable then anything... I just loved his way of expressing his love for Nidhi in this manner and making her release that she is just everything to him and nothing else is required... In particular these are very good lines...

PER NIDHI WAHI WAJOOD NAHI HAI HUMAARE RISHTE KA..HUMARI ZINDAGI KA..KYA HUM DONO BACHCHE KE BAGAIR KHUSH NAHI REH SAKTE..KYA MAIN TUMHE PYAAR NAHI KARTA..KYA YEH QUAAFI NAHI HAI NIDHI??MERE LIYE ...SACH MEIN..SUBAH UTH KE TUMHE APNI BAGAL MEI DEKHNA..YEH EHSAAS KARNA KI AB TUM HUMESHA MERE KAMRE..MERE GHAR..MERI ZINDAGI ME RAHOGI QUAAFI HAI

Or the following...
haan nidhi tumhare bina..itte baras ek tarah se gareeb..ya mahroom hi tha main..tumne sab diya. .pyaar saath...aur..bhindi masala

This will also give strength to Nidhi to come out of her pains... Ashu is always with her...

As usual Nidhi is good with children... I suppose children wards will help for healing of her wounds... just as it happened on the first day of KGH where she forgot all her negative thoughts for couple of hours... But again Anji seems to be spoil sport here...

It seems is Anji is getting jealous of Nidhi and the way Ashu loves Nidhi... So knowingly or unknowingly she is hurting Nidhi so much...Her this words convey this...
jhoot to bol mat..jeejaji ek dum queen ki tarah rakhte hain tujhe..aur best part hai ki teri saas nahi hai..how lucky nidhi...

Shyama Aunty is correct that the elders in the family will have to make sure that the bonding of Nidhi and Anji does not get loose because of the foolishness of Anji... or I would call it as the jealousy of Anji...May be no one is releasing about it at this point of time... Probably Ashu or Rohan should be the first one to release this...Ashu has such a big heart as Nidhi... Both of them don't have any complain regarding Anji's behaviour...

I liked this statement... woh free hue "??the sister smiled"dr Ashutosh aur free??na re..aaj to 3 surgery..8 bajenge..

How sincerely our Dr. Hardstone works is known to every one... Can anyone love the way Ashu loves Nidhi?... Probably it will be not be possible to find such an example existing on earth...

I am falling more and more in love with this Ashni with every update... THANK YOU SO MUCH INDUJI FOR GIVING SUCH A NICE LOVE STORY AND SUCH A LOVELY UPDATE...

Thank u dear..i loved ur review n yes its tough to gind people who love the way Ashu loves nidhi..complete devotion..n protection..without jealousy or possessiveness

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indu6789

@indu6789

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: arsh4heaven
Wow...
Its so beautifull update i loved it
This updates touched my heart throughoutly
Awesome indu mam
This story is close to my heart
I myself don't know ki mene kitni baar read ki he ye story
Its simply amazing
This ashu nidhi they seems real
Every feelings each lines of this ff is beautifully portrayed
From starting to end it seems like this feelings,this pain,this agony,this emotions,this understanding, this love all are not only ashni's but everyone who are in love ever
Wonderful updates
Thanku indu mam for this lovely ff
I am always emotionally attach to this piece of urs
Do continue soon
Will be waiting
Love u indu mam <3