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Zannat Akter

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Next update on next page😳

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Zannat Akter

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Tasha1994

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Posted: 9 years ago

#133

sorry zannat could not comment on the last update. was really very busy with studies. I promise will give my review till Sunday

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Bhavit Kapoor

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Posted: 9 years ago

#134

Thanks for the update Zannat... ! Will read n review sooner.. ! 😊

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Anjani9

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Posted: 9 years ago

#135

Just read Part 1...it is Great...👏

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Babita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#136

Amazing as always 👏👏

Will review by tomorrow, thanks Zannat and Raman di 🤗

Once again a very happy b'day Zannat dearie 🤗

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Babita

@babita..

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Posted: 9 years ago

#137

Blush, blush, blush during the Ashni moment, ummm ❤️☺️

Lovely and very action packed update, thanks to sweetoo 😆

Raman di, loved it to the core 👏👏 Zannat, thanks for the presentation ⭐️⭐️

Sweetoo, sweetoo and sweetoo 😛 i wish he plays cupid here in this story, anyhow 😳😃

Loved the convos of fights between the couple and Maria and Reena amazingly amazed to know what exactly was happening between the couple, specially the Sir 😳😉

She had to be in tears, and she was laughing but the glass piece in Nidhi's foot took Ashu's heart out !!!!! I seee 😳

I loved him taking Nidhi in his arms he spoke softly to Nidhi during her pains. What a contrast that even the maids took time to swallow 😉

The drenched Nidhi and the scene afterwards 🤗

I still find them finding space for the breath, still not in love, still had to go miles.

Intense feeling while reading the chapter and laughed accordingly at times too 😃 Loved it and waiting to know more of the other side of this couple when they will meet with their eyes after the ☺️

Loves to Raman di and Zannat ❤️

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Swati Kapoor

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Posted: 9 years ago

#138

This was sheer balance of fun and love going on between AshNi and how their life is smoothing towards a couple's life! Charm felt and i loved the progress in the story Raman di, luv ya ❤️🤗

Sweetooo is indeed going to play the shipper here cos Nidhi loves sweetoo and i don't think Ashu can see tears in her eyes anymore 😉

Beautiful and hilarious part in every scene, with the exception to the one sizzling 😳

I loved how Ashu's mind wanted to kill his wife 😆 and that to the extent thinking of his own life in jail 😛😆

Awesome explanations of Ashu's changed mind that Maria noticed and tried to understand. The fighting was cutest and the words used were the bestest 😳😉

Glass with blood in her foot. I cud see the hurt Ashu there. and the one so still was Ashu's concern. His caring attitude made him forget all the anger and soon her foot was on his.

I'm telling you, this man loves her and she is not away from the feelings. The attraction has started, the need is there and the love is following, am sure 😳❤️

Later on i loved to see Ashu alerting Nidhi of mallika's presence at the party, but at the same time felt how Nidhi responded and felt as the same as Nidhi over Ashu's lost appetite.

Armaan played the wicked today 😆 But what a sizzling scene it was with Ashu zipping off and off 😉

Lovely and very glorious scene, cud view it from the love angle 👏❤️

I'm waiting eagerly to see the love and blushes that Nidhi has for Ashu, cos it's there and can be felt through her crimson face. Really speechless sometimes, when it comes to the verbals of AshNi and even the silence of them!!!👏

Thanks Zannat for posting this awesome story for us, luv ya too ❤️🤗

For both of you - hugs tightest

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Bhavit Kapoor

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Stunner

Posted: 9 years ago

#139

Extremely enjoyable n loved by everyone... Thanks Zannat n Raman di... for this special treat every time during this story... ⭐️👏

What to say abt sweetooo... 😛 I just love him jumping none other than to the raged Ashu 😆 n that with muddy paws,, leaving Nidhi into laughter n again... 😆😆

I cud understand his anger... his anger of a puppy in his house n that for past 4 days.. n all his staff is with the hidden mission along with his wife.. 😆 Nothing serious.. just that the master of the house is in doubts today... 😆

Lovely to see the Ashni into talks... where now Nidhi with full forceful voice can reply to his raised voices ,,, leaving the servants into a dilemma if their master is okay.. 😉

Caring the hurt Nidhi... his wife... his attraction... his love... must say his love cos according to Maria's thoughts.. he wud have never done this for mallu.. ever.. 😳⭐️

Now the sensual part... very well written n making the readers sticking to the story n its progress next..

Well deserved applauds to the writer.. n Zannat you are doing a fab job posting it for all of us dear.. ⭐️👏

The more we read.. the eagerness increases to read more... cos this Ashni have been so in attraction yet confused n still as a part of each other.. !

Loving scenes one by one... well narrated update... n well nurtured the plot.. !

Just one thing... why sweetoo chose to climb upon Ashu.. ??/ 😲 😕 😆 😉 😛

Raman di... any answers.. ??/ 😆

will be waiting for the next.. thanks once again both.. !

Zannat once again a very happy Birthday dear cute sis.. 😃🥳

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Zannat Akter

@Zannat18

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#140

I m sorry for discontinuing this story

Bawabro,Babita, Tasha, Swati Di , Jahanara...I am extremely sorry for doing this to u Guys...Please forgive me

Reason: By seeing the less likes and Comments ...Its not encouraging me to updates the Further parts😒 ( I feel like its not doing justice to Raman Di)

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