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Originally posted by: Swatishubh

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A mesmerizing update i must say Raman di 👏

Journey has started and the couple have reached their home. I loved Nidhi taking a relaxed sleep over her hubby's shoulders, though both did not wish to like it. 😳

Nidhi's inner trauma has over powered her emotions totally and she can't think of a happy married life, even to give it a chance. Liked the flourished well decorated home of Ashu! But the dwellers are two with many a servants to serve! Meeting Maria seems good to her.

It was a good watch of Ashu observing his beautiful wife and Nidhi her handsome husband. The pull is gaining it's pace and they won't be left liking each other at least.😊 I loved Nidhi telling him that she wants to teach as a profession. Loved her confidence high amidst the tensed times.👏

The most brilliant lines comes with the fact that Ashu was cursing his brother for breaking Nidhi's delicate heart. It was solemn beauty of Ashu's heart and his care and concern were shown when he took her to her room. Awesome!!!

Cute fighting talks continued that i enjoyed 😳 😉

Armaan's party! I loved Nidhi dressing up as the most precious living being on the Earth. Soon Ashu will become a dreamy man of dreaming her beauty and her simplicity. ⭐️

The party went right and straight to what it had to be until the entry of mallika. The dance and the stunned audience have seen a lovely couple who are made for each other. But the very moment got snatched away from Ashu's " friend ". Did not like her presence and even Nidhi standing alone to witness the drama.

Will read the next and review. Thanks so much Zannat for this sheer beauty! Luv ya ❤️🤗

You're welcome Swati Di😳...Luv u too🤗❤️

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Part 4 -

Nice progress in the story, loved it Raman di 👏

Mallika tried her best to shake the life of AshNi and got success. But the rage of emotions and fight later on made Nidhi getting closer and formal to Ashu. I liked her bursting out of how she felt over mallika's cheap gestures and attitude. But how Ashu took the charge - it was outstanding, i mean he managed to feel free of every charges with his sense of dominating!

Rohan is liking Nidhi as a deep lover and is well observed by Ashutosh!

My my what a glance he noticed in Rohan's eyes and the jealousy took over him. I loved Nidhi leaving the dinner and went with Ashu. Loved her smiles on talking of her new job and even Ashu liked her face beaming.

The faulty laptop did a good twist for Nidhi once again confronting Ashu. Helping Vicky every time of his life has made him a spoil brat. And Nidhi is right in telling Ashu his faults. But the rounds of accusations have resulted in a hated kiss for both. I feel Ashu was longing this kiss and Nidhi was all through waiting for it too 😳 😉

Beautiful explanations of turmoils and joys going parallel with much sadness hidden is out at some level. This is what happening between Ashu and Nidhi. Loving this story and can't resist reading more 😉

Thanks Zannat for posting many chapters in one go 😃 Will read more and review. Take care, luv ya ❤️ 🤗

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Part three..

Good one.. thanks Raman di... ⭐️👏

I have sensed one thing... The heartsone Ashu can melt if some one force him to.. ! 😉

Yeah he can... 😳

Loved the way both approaching towards the life.. ! Nidhi taking up the teaching career n Ashu reaching heights in his own.. ! Loved to see Nidhi getting the job by her own n Anji all the way helping her as a true supporter.. !

Nidhi has got an invisible support from Ashu in the name of good home,, permission or a nod to try for the job,, and her privacy with Anji... ! She is living a luxury life... but without love,, n companionship.. ! Good life consists of all the issues... but without love the life seems like a dull n a forced one..

Looking like a Goddess... Ashu got bowled over with Nidhi's beauty.. Wow.. ! She is gorgeous... n what a stunning beauty that stunned the man like Ashu... 😉

Party thrown by Armaan was good.. n the glory that Ashu n Nidhi had with their impact upon every one present.. Loved them dancing.. loved them so close like heavenly bliss upon them..

But ye mallu kahaan se aa gayi...

Dont like her here taunting n teasing the " happy couple "... ! Last scene... even i was standing bewildered.. Perfect song in the background.. Teri meri prem kahaani hai mushkil...

More later... thanks dear Zannat... an Awesome job by you sis... ! 👏

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

chapter 4
wonderful update Raman di .really loved it a lot wonderful progress in the story .so Mallika is ashu's ex girlfriend. but I am glad ashu is ignoring her.liked the way nidhi confronted ashu after getting to know that mallu was Ashus girlfriend. so nidhi joined her job loving her bond with her friends.so Rohan likes nidhi .liked the bond between nidhi and Tia .liked the party scene a lot .where nidhi went with ashu .liked the laptop scene a lot first .loved the scene where nidhi gets to know ashu is helping Vicky .loved their confrontation a lot and last the punishing kiss was awesome thanks a lot for this wonderful update Raman di .really love your writing style .I also started to read your other stories on the khm forum. really love your stories. thanks a lot zannat for posting such a wonderful story over here.

Originally posted by: babita..

Part 4 :

Raman di, this as an amazing update, loved it 👏👏

First thing i liked was how Ashu reacted to Mallika, but did not like to know that they were once " friends ". Mallika's bad intentions makes her ugly in every term. I have faith in Ashu who will stand to his words and won't be having any relation with mallika anymore. Btw, a very embarrassing situation for Armaan and Neha.

Nidhi's anger was obvious and it came out so well ! But hats off to Ashu who denied any charges and went freely from being accused of cheap 😳 He has never seen any one raising voice against him and he has proved his domination here too !

Liked to read Anji and Nidhi convo -- the friends talked of their life and Ashu obliging himself to give full regards to Nidhi's friend. He is indeed a man of substance. But alas, love is not in his book of values.

I liked Nidhi's students calling her Nidhi as she is their age. Rohan's liking Nidhi and Ashu taking a deep look over the meeting they all had together. This gives the feeling that somewhere in the heart, a jealous husband lives and he can see what and how his wife living her life with.

Her laptop a problematic one, gave one more chance for our couple to fight. Though Ashu thinks that he is not after Vicky becoming a spoil brat, but the reality bites and his mistakes are listed. Nidhi has suffered so much that one glance of vicky made her so angry and the result is how they have crossed the limits of words.

When he did not manage to stop her with anything, he punished her with a kiss. A kiss that was not a perfect one, not needed to stop a wife.

I liked the progression in the story and will be reviewing more. Thanks Zannat for posting dearie 🤗

Was busy with my exams, i was not able to read the long chapters and review. Sorry for being so late. Loves ❤️

Originally posted by: babita..

Part 5 :

Struggle and cries. Felt very bad for Nidhi She, and her fault ?? Raman di, the first para made me felt very bad for our Nidhi. She herself is going through all with much brave heart, yet her dignity is lying with the heart of a heartsone.

Oh no. Now Nidhi is raising a voice against her own hubby's demolition plans. Never thought in their dreams that Ashu and Nidhi might fall in this pit. I liked Rohan's views and Nidhi supporting the issue. But what will happen to this couple confronting again within the range of no limits ??

Landing in the home with Sweetoo 😳 Nidhi you are in a mess i confirm. She loves the pets and the helpless animal so cutely makes the appearance before her and the poor puppy is with her at her home. God save it and our Nidhi. 😒

The call from the police station !!!! The worst for Nidhi and the outburst for Ashu. Today again it's proved that for his wife he will do anything of any sorts. But not going without Tia proves that he wanted his wife to be out from that place anyhow. I loved it 😊

Now the wait for the anger turning into the fumes. I will be reading the last chapter, and will review.

Thanks for the emotional and action packed flow Raman di 👏👏

Loves Zannat ❤️

Originally posted by: babita..

Part 6A :

Raman di, this was fabulous 👏👏 I loved the way Nidhi got scared of Ashu 😛 and Ashu made it happen to her that his anger is above her childlike behaviors 😉

The talks lead to nothing but a passionate kiss that they both wanted to have ❤️ Loved the scene

The reality again made them come out of the lovely oblivion to realize that they don't even share a single bond with each other. But the inner thoughts of both makes them a good heart couple 😳

I loved the way Nidhi again barged into an Ashu all wet with pool drops 😉 and the way they both taunt omggee, what a contrast in the words and what an infatuation. Isn't it ??

Sweetoo should not be caught by Ashu i wish. And more loved what Nidhi thought of Ashu keeping away from her room. Ashu staring Nidhi and then giving a hand to her back gives a lovely couple feeling -- but is it for real ?? 😳

Loved Mr. Sinha saying the best words for Ashu. Like Nidhi i would also love to hear what and how Ashu has been so helpful to people and yet termed as a heart of a hard man !!!

Mallika again in the party. Will wait to know the impact of her being there and what happens to Ashni over the tantrums she will throw. Impact upon Ashni -- good or bad, loving or ...

Thanks Zannat for posting the chapters so far. Haaah ! I'm done. 😃 Loves to you dearie 🤗

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

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Raman di, the chapter itself is a fuming one from the very beginning. I cud feel the pull of Ashu towards Nidhi and his keenness to stop her blaming him. The couples do react like this, but breaking the deal was not his will. This is a pull, an attraction to the beautiful wife and the charm he feels with the aura he ignites in himself. Very well written the natural behavior of any human being 👏👏

Though Nidhi cried and she was right with the accusations, yet she herself is pulling towards the man of her life whom she thought is a man of rocks. Love and lust are two words that go much parallel.

Nidhi joining the rally to stop the demolition of the center hall, and did not confirm who the developer is. I find it's very natural. To support a social cause can be from the heart!

Coming back with Rohan and finding poor Sweetoo, this is an extra bonus to see the new wed couple fighting in the coming times. But i liked Nidhi's decision of her tender heart. Her love for the puppy and her decision are too scary, for me 😳 Loved Nidhi hinting of a pet to Ashu, just making a way for sweetoo to home.

I loved to read Armaan and Ashutosh's convo relating the building to be demolished. He is very caring and concerned over the demolition, cos the building is about to collapse in the near future. That's why i sensed Nidhi and her friends thinking from the heart and not mind.

The arrest made it quite a scene. For Ashu, he was going to a police station - a shame. And for Nidhi, she was going to have arrest the developer. Loved to have The Ashutosh readying himself to release Nidhi and even her friend. Though it was a tough time, i sensed a wonderful husband who after a hectic day of facing protests, is fighting within for his wife's reputation and grill.

Loving the story and the way things are getting deep in feelings and actions. Luv ya Zannat for this one too ❤️🤗

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Part 6A -

Raman di, I loved this chapter, a step forward in the life of AshNi i wud say 👏

The fear and Nidhi stammered. The dread fear and Nidhi almost hide behind the maid. The nice behavior with Maria and cold fierce looks to Nidhi. Am in love with this love-hating couple, who have no idea how much they are pulled towards each other!!!!

Cuteness binds. And her cute, innocent talks made him mad for her. He was concerned. He was worried for her. He did not want her to slip in this mess anymore. The fighting tones got collapsed and both went into a lovely kiss, felt for the first time. Wow, what a narration. I cud see the couple in front of me. Intense and sizzling, awesome and full of passion!!!!!❤️

Realization separate them, and they both had no words left to utter. I liked them both struggling within and Ashu not able to stand what he is up to. The real feelings are already shown i feel 😳

I loved the next morning scene. Both are at their best to talk. Both have good words to defend. And both have time " not to live separate lives " 😳

Beautiful Nidhi and handsome hunk Ashutosh! They don't have to do much as they both look elegant and both looks like a beautiful couple. Though Ashu cud see her from any of the angles, yet the appeal appeals to Nidhi in the same way 😉 The downstairs scene was much much liked 😉😉

Mr. Sinha tells Ashu's high points and his being a kind heart person. I loved him talking of his life but for Nidhi this all came as a news. I wud like to know more of Ashu's life in Mumbai until now, cos with that we and Nidhi wud be able to find out why this stonic heart like that 😳

Now mallika is there in the party. I feel more arguments to go, but sense a feeling that this time again Ashu will favor Nidhi and save her from being left alone and hurt. Love makes one responsible and even more sensible - let's see if Ashu loves Nidhi

Zannat ❤️🤗 thanks sweetie for these fabulous updates, loving the track in the beautiful story!

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Part four...

Hell... mallu from nowhere.. n what a situation for the hosts n the Ashni couple.. ! Though Nidhi knows nothing.. but what was happening in front of her was a disaster.. Hard time for Ashu to take Nidhi home by car... i watched it.. 😳

Her confronting Ashu makes her brave inside... makes her standing for her own deserving respect.. ! As Ashu never wanted to explain over his deeds... he was okay with the fact that he was not at any fault.. ! But Nidhi had her plans out... Wow... what a thoughtful convo n what an impact over them.. ! Loved the way he wanted to tell her what his name was.. 😉

The later days... liked how both are going in life... and living without each other as they say.. But things matter to the persons living in one home... !

Liked to see Nidhi getting job n Anji always as her supporter there to grace her in her days to cheer.. !

Rohan ... attracted to Nidhi ... same in the show... cud see a good looking Rohan with Nidhi n others at the restaurant... But the moment Ashu saw them... rest of it resulted in doubt but never told.. ! Thinking of the " hot, bad boy " at once occur to him that jealousy was picking him up...BUT,, Liked him giving space to Nidhi.. n not indulging in her life.. !

Decent gesture when Nidhi decides to go with Ashu n left the friends though she thought that Armaan was accompanying them..

The laptop faulty by default i guess.. ! 😳Things got worsened.. n did not like them fighting ,,blaming him with vicky's shortcomings n hating him instead... n then Ashu ending the convo with a punishing kiss..

I wonder how this couple are looking their life as.. 😳 but one thing is there... Whatever one does,, the other gets affected..

Raman di n Zannat... thanks for this brilliant story well narrated thoughts of the conflicts of a couple with many things in common... yet many things to be accepted... 👏