Three Shot:Love you bhai ke dost (Moh-moh ke dhaage) Part:3*COMPLETED*

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 10 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: shobha21
Very lovely ending Aazeen ❤️👏

Loved the way Ashutosh proposed Nidhi on his knees in a beautifully decorated canopy.😃

Thank you so much for this TS Aazeen.

Will be waiting for another AshNi story...please come with one soon.

Thank u so much Shobha di for such lovely words...😃

I shall write more soon...😃

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: Veni-Vidi-Vici
Thanks for writing...enjoyed reading it..very well written👏

Thank u Vidi di...😃

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 10 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: sss97
Beautiful ending azeen. Don't they have any age gap???
Par loved Ashu's suspense. Achaa tha.
Thanks for updating.

Thanks Swathi...😃

Na-na... not much age gap.. 4-5 years...😃

Hahahahaha... Ashutosh ne mast rulaaya Nidhi ko...😆

Thanks for reading 😃

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 10 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: Anjani9
Aazeen, Excellent...👏

Thank u Anjani di... But I want more...😛

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 10 years ago

#85

Babita, I can see ur likes on every post...

Where are u dear?

I have been waiting for ur comments...

Kaisa raha?

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Babita

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Posted: 10 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: Aazeen02
Babita, I can see ur likes on every post...
Where are u dear?
I have been waiting for ur comments...
Kaisa raha?

U caught me 😉 😆

Hi Aazeen 🤗 I was reading the last part and like many here, can't resist myself from giving a review. Just got curious to see what you have written to the last reply and i find myself here. 😆

Well, very beautiful story. Maine aisi love story kabhi nahi padhi 😳

Just gimme some time, and U will get the comments 😃

Are U there ??

Edited by babita68 - 10 years ago

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Babita

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Posted: 10 years ago

#87

Here I shoot for part two :

The summary to the start or i would say-- the realization of love is very beautiful and well knitted. 👏👏The two ends met to meet again, with all their hearts melting for each other every time. This is quite a romantic part becos the hesitations lead to more of them. But I loved the initiative Nidhi has taken, and what a take. 👏👏

The mesmerizing love letter.❤️ OMG! What a love written in few words and confessed with all her heart shown. Her simple words told so much and took Ashu into the dreams and made him sitting on cloud 9. Awesome !!!😃

The Ashu we know has all the hesitations till the end. But here even the confession is lovely and Ashu is much more happiest of all. Much loved is his said even to the letter so close to his heart. Well the lover is amazed to see how his beloved has been so intelligent of date. 😛😉 But then his tears made all his tensions out, and the love accepted. ⭐️

main kya kahun Aazu. It's such a lovely shot that a few tears came from mine too. 😳😆

All your written fabulous. Thanks, loves 🤗

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Babita

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Posted: 10 years ago

#88

Do Dil mil rahe hain !!!

Nidhi's heart said that Ashu will come, and he came with all naughtiness in his eyes and mind.😛 Poor our Nidhi - made her cry and teased her till his own confession. This is even more beautiful. 👏👏I could imagine the Ashu with his tongue in his cheek and smiling even to see his Nidhi in tears. But he made up for it, and the bending upon his knees with all that lovely ambience gives an equal solace to her heart. ⭐️⭐️

I loved Nidhi asking for his harshness with tears ans smiles in one go. And Ashu's going to her parents and asking for her hand is the icing on the cake. Every thing happened in one evening and they are happily married now. The last scene after kanyadaan was good. Loved reading them saying the three words with Nidhi not changing her track of calling him bhai ke dost.😳😉

Very well equipped and a blossomed love story given a very nice ending.👍🏼 Thanks Aazu for this special treatment. Like Swati bhabhi said that her homesickness got relieved for a moment. I would also like to say that i felt so moved inside after reading the whole story. We face so much in the day to day life and in the end of day the fab write of yours has given me solace to have it as a balm for many days for now. Thanks for your love for your readers. Take my bow. 🤗

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 10 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: babita68

U caught me 😉 😆
Hi Aazeen 🤗 I was reading the last part and like many here, can't resist myself from giving a review. Just got curious to see what you have written to the last reply and i find myself here. 😆
Well, very beautiful story. Maine aisi love story kabhi nahi padhi 😳
Just gimme some time, and U will get the comments 😃
Are U there ??

Yup! Arre I went to the other forum... Toh isliye dekhe nahi tumhare replies... now m back...😃

Thank u so much dear for being so nice with my story... I'm glad u found the love story novel...😃

Yup... will read ur comments in sometime...

Hey! btw, what do u do?