Vidi ka chain FF: Introduction - A tearful story

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ashutosh was in tears... he never felt this much pain... he fell down on the first attempt to cycle... Baba just laughed at the whole messup and walked away...


Ashu was in tears... he never felt this much pain in his life... He wrote a poem for his hone-wali-biwi on a page in Komallika's(his high school crush) note book.. but it turned out to be Monika's.. and she laughed openly reading those lines aloud for everybody's benefit... fortunately, nobody could guess about the poet...
Then again, Ashu was in tears... he wrote that poem on the black board of his class... His maths teacher Miss Mudra rubbed the board hurriedly as she couldnot read Hindi...

finally, he wrote the same poem in a library book... alas.. nobody has time to open their own textbooks.. when will they have time to open library stock? (that book remained closed till Ashu visited after 30 years)... Ashu was in tears...

Ashtosh was in tears.. Desperately, he tried to catch Nidhi's attention... but everytime Mallika read those signs and not Nidhi!!!!!

Ashu was in tears when Baba left him...

Ashu was in tears when Baba did not leave him the house!!

Ashu was in tears when he could not express his love to Nidhi...

Ashu was in tears when Nidhi expressed her love!!!!

Ashu was in tears when Mallika left him...

Ashu was in tears when Mallika returned from Jagan!!!!

Ashu was in tears when Mallika cooked Baingan for him...

Ashu was in tears when Mallika cooked poison wali food for Nidhi!!!!!

Ashu was in tears...for this...

Ashu was in tears...for that...

Ashu was in tears...ooffoo.. for EVERYTHING!!!!!


Part-2 keliye hint : Why Ashu was obsessed with BKM?.
Dosto.. aage badhaoo..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ohh... Maths teacher Mudraji too made Ashutosh cry??

Ashutosh was in tears when Nidhi asked him for 2 years for her career... She assured him "Uske baad aap jo chahte hai, jaisa chahte hai waisa hi hoga" but still Ashutosh shut himself from wifey & cried 😭
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Waiting for the Writerjis to give us part-2 of this chain FF
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow Mudra.. what a teary 😭😭😭 story.. fab.. only u can write something like this..
Ashu ka naam toh aanshu hi hona chahiye tha... he used to cry buckets like the bahus of typical saas bahu shows..
I am eagerly waiting for the next part.. vidi.. please take it up.. this is right up ur alley..
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Originally posted by: ttrocks

Ohh... Maths teacher Mudraji too made Ashutosh cry??

Ashutosh was in tears when Nidhi asked him for 2 years for her career... She assured him "Uske baad aap jo chahte hai, jaisa chahte hai waisa hi hoga" but still Ashutosh shut himself from wifey & cried 😭



Ashu practically cried at every everything... pata nahi.. to make story emotional or to generate extra touch of sympathy.. whatever it was... TRP did not melt at his tears as much it would for some bahu's tears!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ttrocks

Waiting for the Writerjis to give us part-2 of this chain FF



anybody can be a writer.. aap try karo😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sshirley

Wow Mudra.. what a teary 😭😭😭 story.. fab.. only u can write something like this..

Ashu ka naam toh aanshu hi hona chahiye tha... he used to cry buckets like the bahus of typical saas bahu shows..
I am eagerly waiting for the next part.. vidi.. please take it up.. this is right up ur alley..



Ashu ka naam Aasu banaya maine..😆

aap next part likhiye.. please.. aur next story keliye hint deejiye😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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What a tearful post Mudraji 👏👏👏 Liked it very much.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mudraswathi



Ashu ka naam Aasu banaya maine..😆

aap next part likhiye.. please.. aur next story keliye hint deejiye😆

who me?😲 Oh plz spare me...😳
ideas .. yeah sure,.. yahin doon ya pm karoon?

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