Chain FP--- Ashu ban gaya gentleman- Addition by shirley 23/12/2014 - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: sshirley

not at all likely😳


haan kya?.. 😲..teekh hai..tab tak wait karte hai...😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Next part - co-written by me n Vidi

Just then Nidhi joins in "Dr. Ashutosh, aap kahan reh gaye?

The villager looks at her and says, "Acha ee hai tohar bhagyawan?"

Nidhi is surprised, "Bhagwan? maana ki yeh mere ghulam he..mere bina operation bhi nahi kar sakte hai aaj kal..par mein inke liye bhagwaan nahi hoon...inka bhagwaan toh glass mein rehtha hai "


"Gilaas mein toh..." Kaka smiles knowingly


"Glass me hi yeh usse pina pasand karte hai"..Kaka smiles even more..but Nidhi adds


"Yeh chahe kitne bhi bade aadmi kyun na bann gaye ho..chai toh yeh glass mein hi peete hai"..The smile on Kaka's face vanishes.



It was only after talking this much that the chatterbox realizes that Ashu hasn't introduced him to her...what if this man was another of his old professors...she then looks at Ashu questioningly, as if to ask him who is this man.

Ashu hastily tries to pull her away from the man, "nothing. You know how it is! Celebrity dekha nahi aur gher lete hain!...jab se mein TV pe aaya hoon yehi ho raha hai..Chai wala bhi paise ki jagah autograph maang raha hai"


"Parr..main toh usse chai ke paise ke saath saath vehicle-parking fees bhi dekar aayi hoon"


Ashutosh keeps quiet


The old man pulls his shawl more closely as a cold wind brought new chills.

Ashutosh smirks "Chai ke dukaan pe baitne se thand nahi bhaagthi...uske liye kuch aur karna padta hai...chalo Nidhi...

... gaadi ka heater on karte hain"


They sit in the car and he switches on the car heating, but the rather smart heating system in the car which was never used before (Remember? Ashu's a miser) malfunctioned instantly and emitted smoke, so they had to come out of the car lest they die due to smoke inhalation..there was also the danger of Ashu's salmon pink shirt becoming smoked salmon.


The chaiwala says- "arrey shahab aapka car dhuaan chod raha hai..usko yeh aadat kab se hai?..kahin aap ne toh nahi sikhayi?"


"Main..main .. maine kya sikhaya??"


"Humse math chupaiye sirjee...hum sab jaanthe hai"..The chaiwala smiled...Ashu was shocked


"Kya jaanthe ho tum?"


"Wohi..ki apki badaulat hi KTLK forum ha chulha jalta hai... aur agar chulha jalega toh dhuan toh niklega hi na... shayad apke car ne bhi wohi seekh liya hoga"


Nidhi got a call n move away. The villager again got a chance and accosted Ashutosh, "Kaa hua babua? gaadi mein kya pakaa rahe the?"


"Viewers ko" Ashutosh added acidly.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
u deserve the 'wow' equally at leats, if not more😳😆😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: syedzoya

Very good shirley di 😃

Thank you zoya
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: syedzoya

Very good shirley di 😃


😃..thank god she chipped in..ek aur part mill gaya iss FP ko
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: sshirley

u deserve the 'wow' equally at leats, if not more😆


that wow is for chipping in and proving the frame ..I was clueless as to how to take this forward..you gave a nice storyline and dialogues.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: Vidishaa


that wow is for chipping in and proving the frame ..I was clueless as to how to take this forward..you gave a nice storyline and dialogues.

ohk.. Thank u but the pleasure is mine😃
I do often get wicked ideas for humor but cant write on my own
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very good shirley di 😃
😃..thank god she chipped in..ek aur part mill gaya iss FP ko
kisi aur ko b try karna chahye to continue this chain
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: syedzoya

Very good shirley di 😃


😃..thank god she chipped in..ek aur part mill gaya iss FP ko
kisi aur ko b try karna chahye to continue this chain
how about a girl called Zoya?...😉



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Posted: 10 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: sshirley

ohk.. Thank u but the pleasure is mine😃
I do often get wicked ideas for humor but cant write on my own


i love the word wicked😈

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