Asmanon Par Hai Likha FF...chap 13 page 18 - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
#81
this is to let you know that I have read the last 2 updates on my mobile..so couldn't post anything

liked both of them and the way the story is shaping up
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: swati62

Very nice chapter continue soon

Thank u😃
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Originally posted by: babita68

So, it's clear that Natasha was faking. Liked the chapter Ariya, very well written. 👏👏

Nidhi's tears and her restlessness has confirmed that she too loves Ashu. This scene was quite emotional. ⭐️
Natasha has crossed all the limits to act as a nice person. But Ashu is confidant of his love to Nidhi. I loved the part when Nidhi could not hold her tears and left the cabin. And Ashu comes to know about her love for him. Lovely part when Ashu tries to confirm her love and asks for a gift to Natasha.
Nicely shapen the story dearie. Eagerly, Oh so eagerly waiting for the next part. And want to see Ashu see Nidhi's love for him in her eyes, tears and.. ❤️
Thanks dear for this beautiful FF 🤗

Thank u so much Babita... will try to update soon.
welcome😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vidishaa

this is to let you know that I have read the last 2 updates on my mobile..so couldn't post anything

liked both of them and the way the story is shaping up

Thank u vidisha di glad u liked it😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Recap

When nidhi doesn't respond Anji goes near nidhi and what she saw is that Nidhi is fainted...


Chap 11

At the hospital

Nandini: Doctor kya hua nidhi ko wo theekh toh haina?

Doctor: She is fine bas weakness ki wajah se she fainted.

Nandini: Ye nidhi apna bilkul bhi khayal nahi rakhti.

Anji: Doctor hum nidhi se mil sakte hai kya?

Doctor: Han and you can take her home also but plz make sure she eats properly.

Anji: Yeah sure doctor.

With that Anji and Nandini takes her home.

In Nidhi's room

Nandini: Nidhi tu apna bilkul bi khayal nahi rakhti zara dekh kya halat hogai thi aaj.

Nidhi: Maa mein theekh hoon.

Nandini: Han wo toh dikh raha hai tu kitni theekh hai aaj se tere koi nakhrey nahi challenge samjhi? Anji mein iske liye khana lekar ayi tab tak tu iske paas beith aur isko samjha zara.

Anji: Ok maa mein samjhati hoon.

With that Nandini leaves the room

Anji: Nidhi what is this why are not you taking proper care of yourself?

Nidhi: Ab tu bhi start hogai.

Anji: Nidhi mein kuch dino se dekh rahi hu that something is bothering you bata mujhe kya baat hai?

Nidhi: Anji ye tu kya keh rahi hai aisa kuch nahi hai.

Anji: Don't lie tu mujh se kuch nahi chupa sakti when u were unconscious na I noticed your swallowed eyes plz tell me nidhi why were you crying?

Nidhi: (started crying) wo wo anji mein

Anji: What happened why are you crying plz tell me.

Nidhi: Wo i am in love with Ashutosh ji.

Anji:What ? Yeh tu kya kya keh rahi wo toh Natasha se pyaar karte hai.

Nidhi: Han I know that anji but i thought ab aisa nahi hai because he told me that unka ab Natasha se koi rishta nahi.

Anji: Toh agar aisa hai toh why are you crying?

Nidhi: Anji un dono ke beech ab sab theekh hai wo aaj bhi office ayi thi and Ashutosh ji ne mujhse help mangi thi Natasha ke liye gift choose karne ke liye and meine manah kardia i can't tolerate this anji.

Anji: Stop crying Nidhi be strong.

Nidhi: Mujhse nahi hota anji mein kya karu i can't see them together.

Anji: Nidhi kya wo tujhse pyaar karte hai?

Nidhi: Anji mujhe pehle aisa laga tha but i was wrong aisa kuch nahi hai.

Anji: Wiped nidhi's tears and hugged her chal chup ho ja don't cry be strong.

At the office

Ashutosh: (in his cabin) yeh nidhi aaj office kyun nahi aayi Kahi phirse usne office toh nahi chohr dia yeh meine kya kia. Kya karu ab? Phone karu kya? Kar hi deta hoon.

Ashutosh calls Nidhi but instead of Nidhi Anji picks the call

Ashutosh: Hello nidhi.

Anji: Hello Mr Ashutosh i am not Nidhi I am Anji her sis.

Ashutosh: Hello Anji wo meine yeh jane ke liye phone kiya ki nidhi aaj office kyun nahi ayi?

Anji: Actually wo she is not well so she is sleeping koi zarori kaam hai to mein usse utthati hu?

Ashutosh: Kya huwa nidhi ko? Is she fine? Batao Anji wo theekh toh haina?

Anji: Han she is fine now.

Ashutosh: What happened to her?

Anji: She fainted.

Ashutosh: Fainted but why?

Anji: Because she doesn't eat properly.

Ashutosh: What doctor said?

Anji: Doctor said that she should take proper care of her diet and she should not skip meals. Aapko kuch zarori kaam hai toh usse uthao?

Ashutosh: Nahi anji plz do take care of her.

With that Ashutosh cuts the call

Ashutosh: Yeh nidhi ko kya hogaya meine kya socha tha aur kya hogaya.

At Nidhi's room

Anji: Nidhi Mr ashutosh ka phone aaya tha.

Nidhi: Kya kaha unhune ne?

Anji: Bas pooch rahe the tum office kyun nahi ayi but nidhi meri ek baat samjh nahi ayi?

Nidhi: Kya anji?

Anji: You said wo Natasha se pyaar karte hai but jab aaj meine unko tere bare mein bataya tab wo bahut pareshaan hogai the samjh nahi araha why he was so worried. Kahi wo bhi toh tujhse?

Nidhi: Nahi anji aisa nahi hai.

At Ashutosh's cabin

Ashutosh: Meine tumse kaha na mujhe tumhare saath dinner pe nahi jana chali jao yahan se mein already hi bahut pareshaan hoon.

Natasha: Kya hua tum pareshaan kyun ho?

Ashutosh: Kuch nahi.

Natasha: Chalo na plz plz plz tumne kaha tha na tum mere saath dinner pe awoge?

Ashutosh: Han kaha tha aur jab mein free hoonga tab tumhe bata dunga ab tum jawo.

With that Natasha leaves for her home

In the evening

At nidhi's home

Nandini: Arey ashutosh beta aap. Ayiye na.

Ashutosh: Nidhi kaha hai?

Nandini: Wo apne kamre mein hai.

Ashutosh: Wo meine phone kia tha ki nidhi office kyun nahi ayi toh Anji se pata laga that she is not well. Ab kaisi tabiyat hai uski?

Nandini: Ab wo theekh hai ayiye wo andar apne kamre mein hai.

With that Ashutosh and nandini goes to nidhi's room

Nidhi: Aap yahan?

Ashutosh: Han Nidhi how are you now?

Nidhi: I am fine.

Nandini: Beta aap beitho mein aapke liye chai banake laati hoon.

Anji: Mein bhi maa ki help karti hoon.

Ashutosh: Nidhi tumhari tabiyat kaisi hai ab.

Nidhi: (in anger) theekh hoon achi hoon mujhe kya hona hai.

Ashutosh: Tum itni naraz kyun ho rahi ho? Nidhi meri kal wali baat pe naraaz ho kya?

Nidhi: Nahi.

Ashutosh: (in teasing mood)acha toh nidhi kuch socha kya gift loon Natasha ke liye? Mein Natasha ko kuch special dena chahta hoon i want to make her happy plz batao na nidhi.

Nidhi: Started crying.

Ashutosh: Nidhi kya huwa?


Hope you like it...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#87

Nice update...how will Ashu get rid of Natasha??

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb narration Ariya 👏👏
The plot and the scenes are all nicely written. Nidhi is fainted, and her problem is Ashu's teasings. Ashu got excited on listening about Nidhi's illness. Loved his eagerness to know whether he did something wrong or it was else. 😉 😳
Again liked his teasing her, to know what she feels and how she reacts. Awesome!!! Now waiting eagely to see how Ashu will take care of her tears.
Thanks so much Ariya for the efforts and the wonderful chapter. 🤗It's beautifully progressing towards the love of Ashni. ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nice update Ariya 👏
Very good progress in the story.
Loved Ashutosh's concern about Nidhi's health.
Liked the way Ashu teasing Nidhi.
Thank you for the update Ariya.
Waiting for the next.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nice. Waiting for the next chapter

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