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rayafan17

@rayafan17

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Posted: 10 years ago

#781

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Then why no like click??

How are you feeling now??🤗 Mood better?? Health??

no more like clicks from me... sorry but cannot take any more aggravation of any kind.. enrages me so much when people dont have that little courtsey of clicking that button in my posts/threads so in keeping in mind my health no more likes no more aggravation..

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Anjani9

@Anjani9

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Posted: 10 years ago

#782

Deepa, which thread??? Did I also contributed to that???

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Veenaper

@Veenaper

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Posted: 10 years ago

#783

Brilliant chapter Sujatha. Ashu's deep remorse for his every action during those harrowing days portrayed very well by you. It was mental abuse day in and day out but Nidhi never complained and instead swallowing the injustice meted out to her she patiently bore all the pain. Ashu broke the marriage vow without any hesitation just to please his dear friend. And now the guilt is stabbing and suffocating him and the fact that he knows his misdeeds cannot be forgiven - that point you have brought out beautifully.

The house saga was such a farce in the show and you have brought it to its logical end with Ashu handing over the papers to Nidhi. That house always belonged to her and one can never forget how the brother sister duo left no stone unturned to confiscate the house from a distraught Nidhi. Ashu's fears of receiving the divorce papers everytime the bell rang is the perfect punishment for his misdeeds.

Nidhi's feelings have been wonderfully portrayed by you - so true. Rightly said - as if their marriage was a game and Ashu were some prize. I always remember that scene where she breaks down and confides to Ashu that she cannot understand whom to believe and whom not to and says so innocently that she does not want to lose him. Really her sufferings were all that were dished out to us as the other three inmates went about their lives as if nothing has happened.

Ashu noticing the pain in her eyes while remembering those days, the guilt is eating him up and he wants to go the distant lengths to bring back the smile on her face. He is willing to do anything to bring her back into his life. His parting words leaving her shocked but also instilling a glimmer of hope. The convo on whatsup had me truly stumped - from initial hesitation to forging a friendship and Nidhi for the first time calling him by name - the romance slowly thawing back - the emoticons were excellently used and added that extra zing to the convos. Loved the way he notices her attire from the corridor and acknowledges it - this man is surely weaving his charm on her and she is feeling the warmth in her heart.

The results are out and Ashu wasting no time in informing her - her giggles are back and their convo sparking fresh doubts among the room mates. Their comments are so hilarious and yes indeed another exciting affair is on the cards. Now eagerly waiting for the grand finale.

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Vidisha

@Veni-Vidi-Vici

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#784

baat raat ki...raat ki baat...

May Tirupathi Timappa reform She devil and remove the L in Devil🤣

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shobha21

@shobha21

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Posted: 10 years ago

#785

Originally posted by: Vidishaa
baat raat ki...raat ki baat...
May Tirupathi Timappa reform She devil and remove the L in Devil🤣

😆😆

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moushu

@moushu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#786

Suvika

Have come to the forum after a long time. It was a delight to read this story, when i began it felt like what more can you add to that incident, but i have to say it was real surprise to read it. I love the way both of you collaborated on this OS. Congrats to both of you.

ishani

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mudraswathi

@mudraswathi

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#787

Originally posted by: Vidishaa
baat raat ki...raat ki baat...
May Tirupathi Timappa reform She devil and remove the L in Devil🤣

you mean, after reformation shoud she write, baat din ki... ek din ki baat???😳

zara socho vidi ... what you are asking for...😉🤣

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Vidisha

@Veni-Vidi-Vici

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#788

Originally posted by: mudraswathi

you mean, after reformation shoud she write, baat din ki... ek din ki baat???😳

zara socho vidi ... what you are asking for...😉🤣

God will decide what is best for all of us...😆