AshNi Mini SS: Irresistibly Yours! Part-5/Page-36

Suvika.

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Lovely second part Ana...

You brought out his thoughts very well. His conflict. His pain Vs his anger, His love Vs his ego.

Loved his parting shot as he left for work. Typical man!!

And as ever Armaan comes to the rescue!!

Hope your Eid was good.

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rayafan17

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Ana.. Like said earlier.. I cheated read the story in a different version..

LOved the portrayal of Ashu's feelings.. pain anger..

Waiting to see Nidhi's wishes being fullfilled..

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sshirley

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Posted: 10 years ago

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me 3rd..

beautiful ana... will come back later to review, probably 2morow

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rayafan17

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Oh miss SHirley aap me second kaise hui.. zaara bata na..

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sshirley

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: -deepali17-
Oh miss SHirley aap me second kaise hui.. zaara bata na..

kya ajeeb log hain.. ek number pe kitna rote hain..

edited meri maaa... happy now?😛

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Ana

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Suvika.
me first

Lovely second part Ana...

You brought out his thoughts very well. His conflict. His pain Vs his anger, His love Vs his ego.

Loved his parting shot as he left for work. Typical man!!

And as ever Armaan comes to the rescue!!

Hope your Eid was good.

Thank you so much di ;)
Glad that u liked this part...
As first part was more about Nidhi, I want to clarify Ashu side...He is not that mean...
haha..yup...that sure he is...A typical male with an ego but here he wants to assure her that she is more than a maid or a body for her...

yes, Eid was good. First day though was too boring...but 2nd and 3rd made up for it :D

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Ana

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: -deepali17-
Ana.. Like said earlier.. I cheated read the story in a different version..
LOved the portrayal of Ashu's feelings.. pain anger..

Waiting to see Nidhi's wishes being fullfilled..

Now I will make sure that you wont b able to cheat deepali :P
Oh nidhi's wishes will gonna make another differebt story ;) haha
hope the story will be liked further on too

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Ana

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Posted: 10 years ago

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