AshNi Mini SS: Irresistibly Yours! Part-5/Page-36

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Hey Guys,

On request, I am starting my this On-Going Mini SS here. From original, I am making few changing in the background to keep it close to the environment of KTLK. The characters are fictional and I own all rights of this story.

Irresistibly Yours!

Part 1


"Do you think only Love is enough for the survival of a relationship?" She asked with an utter seriousness in her tone.

Her delicate fingertip was running on the rim of her Coffee Cup, placed in front, keeping her eyes engrossed in the little act of it.

Non-sense Discussion.


He thought while his deep chocolate eyes were fixed on her pale face, wondering what she is up to.

Being back today after handling an important medical case of the MP of Calcutta for which he was away from a week, he was trying to make up for his absence.

He has hoped to have some romantic mooshi mooshi time with his wife tonight before he would get indulged in his hectic schedule of KGH from tomorrow morning. He had planned a romantic dinner outside in a posh Italian restaurant so later he can seduce his wife into the bed but instead of going back home after finishing their dinner, she decided to have a Coffee in the open lawn of the restaurant and here they were sitting here in this all too secluded area in Lucknow, at 11pm, sharing views on Love.

Is this some Joke?

He had to change his position on the leather chair. Damn, he was too aroused to sit straight. All the day dreaming about how he will take her tonight, has made him horny and above that, her purple strapped dress clinging to her body seductively, wasn't making it any easier for him.

The whole time during the dinner, he held himself back from touching her, fearing he might not be able to control. He was feeling that ...Jumpy.

But no, rather than being with him in the warmth of their bed, cuddled up to her hot husband, his lady love wants to share this hot coffee.

How Ironic.


"Nidhi...Seriously, Why are we discussing it now?" Irritation was evident from his tone.

"Just answer me...Is love enough?" She requested.

He got a thoughtful look before a smirk appeared on his lips and he leaned forward.

"No, there are many other things which are important" She missed to see his gorgeous smile now, as she was feeling more fascinated to look at the check pattern of the table.

"Like?"

"Oh! Likeee..." He stretched the word intentionally, trying to catch her eyes and indeed now they were fixed on him.

"Like...?"

He grinned and leaned more close, looking intently in her eyes.

"Like...Sex, Making love till the sun rise up...Cuddling up enjoying the aftermath of it and then..." He whispered huskily.

"Ashutosh..." She turned her beet rooted red face on the other side and try to hide the small smile, appeared on her lips. His deep look made her get all hot and burning that even the cold air of the lawn couldn't turn off.

"Actually, why don't we go home and I will show you a demo?" He winked her way, making her almost too weak to resist but then she gathered up herself.

No Nidhi...Don't get weak...You have to do it today

She knew, if they would have been in the home right now, he, one way or the another would have her convinced by now and would have been marching towards any nearby room holding her up in his arms. He was always too...Impatient. She would have been a putty in his hands.

That's why she had choose to stay out not caring about the time.

And then she looked back at him who was giving her a goofy smile.

"Is that all what a relationship needs? Nothing besides it?" She questioned, making him sigh and lean back on the chair. The smile was gone and now, irritation has started to peep in.

"What else you want me to say? Tell me, I will say it so we can be done with this Loveology and Relationships Q&A session"

She felt hurt but nonetheless, went on to pour out her thoughts.

"What about respect? Feelings? Emotions? Did we only get married only to please eachother in bed?" His flaring nose and dangerously dark eyes were a clear indication that now, she has hit on a sensitive spot.

"What you mean to say by this Nidhi? That I don't care or respect you...Do you mean to say that out act of making love only pleases me and not you" She shook her head violently.

God! Why this had to go so wrong? He had misinterpreted her.

"I didn't mean it that way" She tried to correct her statement.

"Then...Do you mean to say that...That I force myself on you...Is that what you mean?" His voice was scarily low and harsh.

"No Ashutosh...God...I...I just meant that " She tried to gather her words and took a deep breath.

"Ok tell me...When was the last time we actually had a sensible discussion...When was the last time we saw a movie together or went for a picnic?" She desperately looked into his eyes, trying to gauge his expressions, hoping that she, this time, has clearly delivered her point.

"Oh Come on Nidhi...You know that how demanding my work is...I just can't sit around in the home watching a movie , wasting my time...When you decided to get into this relationship, you already were well aware of my schedule" He defended himself but somewhere, that hurt Nidhi.

Tears blurred her vision as her throat clogged up.

"You...You mean that spending time with me...watching a movie is wastage of time"

"Nidhi...Now you are making an issue out of a mole..." His whole mood was destroyed by her allegations.

She sniffed and looked away that angered him more and he got up quickly. Taking out his wallet, he threw few Rupees on the table carelessly.

"I am in the car...Come when you are done with your coffee" He said not looking down at her and went away.

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Resting his head on the starring, he cursed his stars.

What he had hoped for tonight and now, what has happened?

What has gotten into Nidhi's head? He wondered.

The door of the passenger side opened and closed, making him look up. She was avoiding looking at him, keeping her focus outside in the air

He sighed. He hate to see her sad but nonetheless, started the car and drive towards their home.

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Opening the door, they get in as he moved towards their room. He hoped to talk to her, hear what cause this uncertainty in her mind but rather than following him, she moved towards the next room which used to be the guest room.

He noticed it on reaching the room entrance and quickly questioned her.

"Nidhi...What are you doing?"

She wiped her tears before she turned and looked at him with hollow eyes. His own face was an image of eagerness and irritation.

"You need to figure out Ashutosh...Till the time you won't understand what is happening in our life, I would like to stay in this room..."

He shook his head before looking back at her in anger

"Ok fine...do whatever you want...You know...You don't care...You don't care that your husband just returned after a week...You don't care how much he must have missed you...all you need is this silly argument...then have it...But do remember, it will be you who will come back to me in few days..." Giving her a last look, he entered their room, banging the door hard behind him.

Tremors of sadness and loneliness shook her body and she rushed inside the guest room and fell on the bed. The warmth of the bed engulfed her in a cold embrace, making her burst out in tears.

Part-2-----Page-10

Part-3-------Page-19

Part-4-------Page-27

Part-5--------Page-36

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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow wow wowie...so Ashu is busy..and Nidz needs time...they have a rocking sex life but a defunct romantic life...Both Ashu and Nidz are justified in their stand...want to see if Ashu wins his challenge
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Thank you very much

Awesome story Nidhi feeling neglected ashutosh busy in his profession..

Feel for Nidhi

Waiting for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome ! understand how Nidhi feels and why? I think most of us go through this phase in our life and after some time we accept it and live with it.😆 Better get involved in our own career and hobbies.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajanigandha26

Awesome ! understand how Nidhi feels and why? I think most of us go through this phase in our life and after some time we accept it and live with it.😆 Better get involved in our own career and hobbies.



Totally agree.


Don't know what the reasons are for Ashutosh's behavior. Too early to tell I guess. But for most people, the attitude comes from taking the partner and the relationship for granted.


A very very interesting start Ana. Both their thoughts.. the parallel feelings have come across very well.

When is the next update?? Will be waiting for it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome start... so different...loved it.
Am so eager to know what happens next.
Please do continue soon.
Thank you very much Anaji.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nice update Ana. This is a very nice theme that you have taken up. The way you have put up Nidhi's POV is really appreciable.👍🏼 Waiting for your further updates. Do update sooonnn... Waiting for it
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Nice..cant wait to read further :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved it Ana,
V v interesting concept and story..
so true.. this is what happens in many love marriages. For men, esp. busy men, its a quick gratification of desires that prelude other feelings, not that they do not have those feelings or that they don't like to spend time with their wife/love, but for them, everything needs to be tangible first and foremost.
For women it is more about feelings and spending time talking n sharing ideas n even mundane thots...
v b'fully written Ana .. u brought out both their perspectives too well
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Originally posted by: Vidishaa

wow wow wowie...so Ashu is busy..and Nidz needs time...they have a rocking sex life but a defunct romantic life...Both Ashu and Nidz are justified in their stand...want to see if Ashu wins his challenge


what do u think Vidi Will he?😉


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