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Posted: 11 years ago
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First , Congrats on this very different style of writing 👍🏼.

The characters r from the world of modelling,so wud deal wd runways, fashion designers and glitzy parties n this world seems as glamorous and beautiful as ever. But the fact is it is not all it's wrapped up to be - and that its dark, distinctly ugly underbelly is kept well hidden.

As much as being part of the industry may be the dream of many a youngsters , much of its image is an intricately woven illusion.
In today's world, a model is not just one-dimensional entity. She needs to adorn a three-dimensional image for her audience to like her. She is antipathetic to marriage!!

N Rohan...y did he purposely scare Nidhi? Was it a prank he was playing or did insecurity regarding his relationship wd Nidhi creep in?

Ashu seems to b an interesting character. Interested in Nidhi!!
Indeed an interesting plot!!
What makes it more pleasurable is ur new incredible distictive style of writing U excel at capturing the fluidity of thought n building on cornerstones of ordinary things that makes d story real.
Waiting for the next episode!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: shobha21


Awesome siggie Deepaliji.👏

Beautiful creation. You did a great job.👏


Thank u so much for appreciating d siggy😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Great and unique start Shirley!! But then didn't expect anything else from you. 👏 👍🏼

Loved your commercial breaks esp. Gave the feel of authenticity to the whole serial style of writing.

And before you ask, no questions regarding the story line or characters and I won't speculate either. Too early. So i'll just wait out for the next episode.

It is going to be telecast on weekdays or weekends?? What are the timings??

Nice siggy Deepali.

thank u Suvika for appreciating d siggy!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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[QUOTE=ariyadasa Love the story it seems like watching a Film to me👍🏼 .U had nicely brought forward each and every incident , as a Viewer it was really interesting to read again and again👏 . it's a New Concept specially Ashu to be a Model .
Never Expect Nidhi to be Engaged with Rohan , but hope it's works well for ur story 😉
Bitter confused🤪 , but after reading this sentence i thought u will make all our dreams come True 😉

" I think he looks equally good with any model - Nidhi or any other "


Hi Ariya, thank you for the review.
@green - exactly that's my aim.. that it shud look like a teleserial or a movie.
@Red - I m glad that I could make he narration interesting...how many times u read?😛
yes its a new concept - hope u like it moving further.
@blue - NiHan engagement is good for you na?😉 You might get Ashu na?
why confused?
@lilac - why? what dreams?😆 😆😆😆 are u a model?😉
@Word Art - thank you so much Ariya 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: ADO864

hats off to the writer 👏love the new concept keep up the good work

Thank you.. I take a bow.😃
I am glad that you liked the concept.
You are new here, right? what can I call u? I am Shirley😊
The biggest compliment for me is that this is your first comment here. 😃 Thank you so much.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Ashutosh is after Nidhi...good for a change...😛

yes..😉😛
Tired to see Nidhi going to his house and impressing him...😃

no comments to that because those beg. epis were my personal favourites😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mudraswathi



and his constipated expressions at that.. me too got tired😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
Go ahead - speculate as much as u please😛 .
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Posted: 11 years ago
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😆😆😆 it amazes me the way u all strike convos 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Great and unique start Shirley!! But then didn't expect anything else from you. 👏 👍🏼

Thanks a lot Suvika
Loved your commercial breaks esp. Gave the feel of authenticity to the whole serial style of writing.

I am glad 😃

And before you ask, no questions regarding the story line or characters and I won't speculate either. Too early. So i'll just wait out for the next episode.

did I ask?😛

ok u wait for the next episode - wise decision😆😆😆

It is going to be telecast on weekdays or weekends?? What are the timings??

not decided yet

Nice siggy Deepali.

agree 100000%😃

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