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Posted: 11 years ago
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Good morning , am wishing u goodmorning but writing about the night



Night
As dusk gives away to the darkness,
Shadows lengthen, the world is quiet,
Birds return home to flock
Hasty greeting and cheery byes,
As the shadows lengthen ,
The still is broken by a frogs croak ,
Or a drone of a firefly
Whose glittering wings light up the sky
Night in all her glory casts a spell
The quietness reckons,
The eyes close as sleep beckons,
Dreams drift into pastures
Some sad , some sweet ,
Glimpses of a paradise ,
The moon in her silvery sheen ,
Softly falls on the face ,
And awakens my slumber within a space ,
As I lie in bed memories flood my mind ,
Of another time and place ,
Sounds of distant laughter, of love filled nights ,
I know they are gone forever
Yet can still savour the pleasure ,
They still bring a smile ,
A warmth of love forever,
And slowly I turn and slide into a deep slumber



Sorry folks for making you my guinea pigs 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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U are really creative Doc 👏
Love to read ur short and sweet poems again and again 👏

Love these stanzas a lot 👏

Night in all her glory casts a spell
The quietness reckons,
The eyes close as sleep beckons,
Dreams drift into pastures
Some sad , some sweet ,
Glimpses of a paradise ,
The moon in her silvery sheen ,
Softly falls on the face ,
And awakens my slumber within a space ,
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow Dr. Babs, u r on a creative spree,!!!👏
Wat an apt description of night! superb!😃

Waise i was thinking something... can u contribute a poem to each of my chapters in my upcoming work on AshNi please? It would contribute greatly to the piece.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow Dr. Babs, u r on a creative spree,!!!👏

Wat an apt description of night! superb!😃

Waise i was thinking something... can u contribute a poem to each of my chapters in my upcoming work on AshNi please? It would contribute greatly to the piece.

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Would love to if you think it fits
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: bc123456


Sure, we can do it this way- as soon as I finish writing my chapter (rough draft) I will pm u, u can take a day or two to come up with a few lines befitting the chapter. Would this suit u? I plan to start only after a week or maybe even after I get to India which wud be after 20-25 days

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dr Babs, We love to be your guinea pigs...😛👏
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Originally posted by: ariyadasa

U are really creative Doc 👏

Love to read ur short and sweet poems again and again 👏

Love these stanzas a lot 👏

Night in all her glory casts a spell
The quietness reckons,
The eyes close as sleep beckons,
Dreams drift into pastures
Some sad , some sweet ,
Glimpses of a paradise ,
The moon in her silvery sheen ,
Softly falls on the face ,
And awakens my slumber within a space ,



Thank u Good night graphics
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