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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: bc123456

What a brilliant chapter , it had everything ,teasing , romance and passion , Suvi you have really grown and grown as a writer , your every new work is better than the last , really loved it , this story is reaching its blissful conclusion , but hope u will give us some post marriage chapters too


@bold me too want ditto ditto😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Sorry Anjani, suddenly some work had cum up so had to rush..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Guys... I am logging out now. I will respond to the rest of the reviews and comments tomorrow morning.

Please have a look at this thread that I have just opened.




Goodnight.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -deepali17-

Yes.. anjani.. too much pressure .. deadline on deadline.. never ending

Deepa, You work on Finance???
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Posted: 11 years ago
The problem with your updates...if you give an update, we need more...feel it is too short and desperate for next update... peace is robbed from mind...😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Super cute can't wait for the next chapter.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Doubts got cleared... Confession is done... Friends have met... And the odd one has got the idea that she is only a guest in Ashu's life.. ! Brilliant and a wondrous update Suvi di ⭐️👏


Thank you Bhavit. And the funny thing is she didn't mind being Ashu's guest. It was Nidhi being the host that she had issues with. Typical female 😉😆

Ashu and CV's meeting at home was very crucial one... And Ashu won the battle of opening his heart out... Thats the need of the hour... What a fab heart he has... He wanted to talk to CV first.. abt the relationship he has with Nidhi.. abt what happened of late.. n abt his wish that a father gets back his daughter !👍🏼

Yes. And he wanted to do that without Nidhi beside him. She faced all this alone all those years back now it is his time. He wants Nidhi to have her family back and he would do it alone. 👍🏼

The three things that CV mentioned... Nidhi is sure abt her feelings n wont change them.. !
Second.. he always wanted Nidhi to be independent n a self confidant woman... n he has to learn to respect her decisions now.. ! And... Liking the idea of Ashu coming to meet him first..👏... he recalled his own time of standing in front of his FIL... !
I loved how CV asked what if Ashu wud have fail again n leave Nidhi... AND Ashu's answer was more than love.. A life without Nidhi is unbearable for him.. ! Wow Ashu ! 👏 Ashu had to tell him much more.. right ?

Yes. He has shared another thing with CV. You will know in the next chapter. But you can always try guessing what it is 😉

It was quite relevant to listen doc Nidhi abt what happened years back.. n how a mother donated the important organs of her son.. ! And it was great to see Ashu taking away his interns... n not Nidhi... a doc she is after all 😳😃

True. He was in the dean mode at that time and his retort attested to that. Only now everyone in KGH knows about these two and hence the snickering of interns.

"You two are getting married?" Armaan's eyes lit up.
Koi jalaa.. aur bhun gayaa bharwa baingan ki tarah... 😆😆

🤣

Just loved the convo at Ashu'scabin.. it said many unsaid things.. which later Mallu cud follow.. 😉😉😆

"You don't need an invitation to walk into your own house Nidhi."
Lovely.. ❤️

Yes. And Mallika actually thought he didn't invite Nidhi. No strike that. I don't think she thought through anything. She just assumed. 😉

Nice n lovely ambience that Nidhi created at Ashu's study room... ! She looked awesome in that attire with his shirt on... And the scene later... Cute n lovely.. !Nice song ! ⭐️ And beautiful watch on her wrist.. ! Kya baat hai

I wanted something better. But didn't find in google images. So settled for this. Since it was a professional achievement for her.. I didn't chose Jewelry. 😊

And the song that Nidhi has saved as the personal ring tone of Ashu's number.. 😉 Loved his laughter n retribution towards her gesture n the lyrics.. !😉 😃
Armaan .,.,. meri jaan has arrived... ab darr kahe ka,... ! 😆🥳

😆

Mallika's smile evaporated as if it had never been. "Nidhi is here too?"

Ashutosh frowned as if he found the question really weird. "Of course." And walked towards the kitchen.

Armaan turned another page of the newspaper as he imparted the juicy details. "She has been here for a very long time Mallika. It's high time you realized that.

It said a lot to Malllu that she has got to learn by now... 😳😳 What she did thought... Ashu wud throw a party without Nidhi ? After all that has happened past few weeks... She must be knowing the truth... But she doesnt wanna face the reality... a reality that wud bite only her !

Yes. She is like an ostrich with her head buried in the sand. 😆

I just loved the atmosphere ... Anji n Nidhi taking over Kaka's kitchen... And everyone including Ashu is in an aura of Nidhi's presence.. ! Mallika is the one who wants to make things upside down.. But the love n realization of Ashu has made it impossible for her to go on ! The plans for the next day long drive clearly shown how things have already changed.. and so has Ashu !!! 👏👏

Exactly. Now both know that they are different. Their tastes and preferences don't match. They don't gel in a lot of aspects. But they are totally OK with that. They are comfortable and mature enough to look beyond those things. Their love has gained confidence and each trusts the other implicitly. So even when Mallika mentions the past experience of clubbing, Ashutosh is not bothered and NIdhi is not worried. They know that they have a solid middle ground where they can meet. And the physical proximity in the last few days has helped too. In Armaan's words.. "don't underestimate the power of physical intimacy Combine that with the kind of love that these two share.." you all are seeing the net result of that.

"Just like that?" Her tone was a mixture of hurt, confusion, anger and perplexity.

She knows that Ashu has stopped listening to her ... And now he is ready to announce sumthing that our She Devil will let us know by Sunday 😳😛

😆 yes although lots have come to the conclusion that he is going to apologize and propose. Do you think the same?? 😉

Thanks a lot Suvi di for the fab update... So much so .. i loved Ashu's new attitude towards his life.. live .. N Nidhi ! And more so.. he is determined to see his home as Nidhi's,,,, !🥳🤗
Awesome !!!! Waiting eagerly to hear the announcement.. !!! Huhoooh !!!

Thank you so much for this review Bhavit. I could explain a lot of my POVs through your review. Feels so good. 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Chitrathan

Mallu's shock of the life. And surprise for Nidhi. Armaan has the best dialogues here



yes Chitra. In this FF.. Armaan and Ranganath have stolen the show.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Everything is clear to Cv and i loved Ashu disclosing every bit of his relationship with Nidhi. A father who knows not much about his daughter, gets to know from Ashu. And he is more clear to so many things that he has looked into past three years. His daughter is in love with a 15 year elder to her. She will not back now, cos she is determined to her decision. As a father, he has always wanted to see her strong and a confidant woman making her own decisions, and now as she is, he must respect them. And he loved to see Ashu coming to him first.😃

Yes. He is still not comfortable with the age gap but he is going to be man enough to accept it if in turn that would give him his daughter back.

He is happy that Ashu wants to see back with her father and bua. But talking to Bua about this issue, it's a great subject getting a nod from her. But Cv has approved Ashu, which is a big thing. Cv himself has faced his father in law, and he knows how exactly it feels. And now convincing DB is a big task.

Yes. DB might not be so easy to agree and accept.

Even my eyes got moist over learning about the patient from Nidhi. Docs are so soft by nature, though they are taken as very hard ones who have to deal with lives and ailments.

It actually happened recently in Chennai. I so wanted to somehow bring it into this story. Tried to do it in different scenes until finally i got this one.

It was a lovely question by Ashu to her - She is not an intern.😉 Now a naughty mind of hers thought something, i wud loke to hear it Suvi di, if there is any 😉😛

You already hear it Swati... her ringtone. Kabhi neem neem kabhi shehed shehed.. kabhi naram naram kabhi sakht sakht... mora piya...😆


On knowing upon the meeting at Ashu's cabin is not official - I loved how Armaan reacted. Are they getting married? Mallika was gone the second later. 😆
It was a lovely banter, and quite amusing scene in the cabin. All are invited to Ashu's home now. And it was lovely of Nidhi asking about her invite. Ashu's words were everything - You don't need any invitation to walk into your own house. ❤️🤗

I knew that dialogue would be a hit. Patting myself now 😆

Time to celebrate. After meeting with Cv, Ashu has said this. This is a good sign and very pleasant.
It was so beautiful to see Nidhi coming closer to him and then stopped. And Ashu stuffed his hands in his pocket not to misbehave. But his eyes were doing the passionate mischief.❤️❤️
The scene at Ashu's home. It's like Nidhi coming her home. She is at his room, looking at his things, touching at his lips from the pic, his shirt that she wore, the song that her heart sung and the dance she did with Ashu around her. Beautifully narrated scene.👏👏👏 "My house! he said this is my house" The song played looked so perfect here.👏👏

Thank you.

It was so lovely of Kaka pointing Ashu to the study room. His life has come to home! After drinking in her radiance and rapture for a few moments - this sentence is so softly wrote Suvi di - gave so many butterflies inside. 🤗What a stunning Nidhi and the hunk is so full of showering his love! A very passionate scene followed by a Rolex watch on her wrist. This is what Ashu hurried for, to buy it for his Nidhi! Wow!!! 👍🏼

Yes. You got that absolutely right. 😃

Time to celebrate her topping in her batch. And the whole party was for this only. I loved Ashu's excuse to throw the party and inviting all his friends, but later admit the reason. Still, the good reason is yet to be told. 😃
The laughter and banters continued and Armaan noticed. I just loved his entry with the song completion. Has he interrupted and disturbed them? I hope so. 😉😆

Yes he did. But his song was not intentional. He always is humming something or the other and this song at that time was just a coincidence.

Ashu s talking to Armaan but his mind goes to the scene watching Nidhi wearing his shirt. Ahem ahem! He is gone. Your siggy justifies this chapter Suvi di. His heart is singing the apt song - Tu hi toh jannat mari ti hi dil ka sukoon. ⭐️ ⭐️

you forgot the "tu hi mera junoon" and she is that too.😉

Mallika's entry not much troubled his mind and heart. And for him, she is only a guest with bharwa baingan.😛😛 Mallika looked shocked that Nidhi is also there. She has other ways for the party? Strange. Next day programme is made and they will leave for a long drive. Mallika is in full shock and can't stand this Ashu at all. She is rightly told by Armaan - they are man and woman in love! And that Ashu has sto 🤗pped listening to her. Biggest jolt in her life. She has to accept that.

yes. and its high time she does.

Ashu has to share something. The party is to celebrate Nidhi's success and their love? Hoping for it. Actually craving for it.

😆 is that what you think??
Waiting eagerly now Suvi di. Thanks for this incredible and outstanding update. Hats Off! 👏

Thank you so much Swati. Last night my mind was all disturbed. so could not read and reply.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sss97

😊 AWESOME UPDATE. Just waiting for the party to take off from here.

It will. It will. On Sunday.😉

Wow loving this version of Ashutosh.
Thank you Swathi.😃

Col Verma inti jaldi maan gaye, I am so happy. Loved the way Ashu had put it across to him.

Well... he had 2 years to think about all the possibilities and 2 years that he had been away from his only daughter. His priorities and thought processes have undergone a lot of change during that time.

The shirt scene was mindblowing and wah kya gane ka selection hain. Excellent.

You must know by now that I am partial to shirt scenes.😉😆

Waise waiting for Ashu's announcement. Please dont end the FF here. Do show some post marriage part too... Noke jhok pyaar ke pal and Ashu n Nidhi vs Mallika with Ranga n Armaan dancing with juicy details😆😆. Do add KGH reaction to it too. Agar hosaka toh chapter jaldi post karne ki koshish karo na.😃😃

Chapter will be posted on Sunday morning. Around 8-8.30. And it is the last chapter. Before you ask, no... there is not going to be an epilogue either. This story doesn't have a prologue. Hence no epilogue.

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