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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice chapter Sai... ⭐️👏Enjoyed reading it 😃
It was a nice meeting of the three ... ! Loved Arush and Ashutosh talking and getting familiar ! The likes of bikes gives a good feeling that Nidhi too likes them.. And going back to the memories sharpened... i got a funny scene where Ashu had to run away from the college kids knowing the fact that Nidhi has just spoiled one of the bike by embossing her name... 😆
But what shook me inside is Nidhi before and Now... She was able to do anything she wanna before.. but now things are not that easy for her.. She has to think n rethink 100 times before taking any step..
Nice to know that Arush will be a truck driver... haha... these kids i tell you... 😉😛I loved the ride back home... ⭐️
Hmm... Sumthing got in Ashu's mind with Arush telling abt Rohan... But it was Nidhi's fumbled words that made Ashu more suspect.. ! This was obvious a scene i assumed before 😳
Loved to see Ashu joining n Nidhi preparing the tea... The past memories go again sharpened thru the pics... and the recalling of Nidhi's news in a newspaper... Ashu was getting to know abt her time to time...Good 😃 Learning abt her n feeling proud all alone for her... They have suffered a lot of aloofness...
Her doing sumthing for the special children is a part of a promise she did to him...👍🏼 So we will come to know abt it in the next one... 😃 This has come out very nicely... 👏
Its hard to breathe after that... so its the night they parted and Nidhi promised him ...!!!!!!
This is a brilliance of yours Sai... I loved the way story has taken the shapes.. Loving Ashu's presence and keen to know more abt her... 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
It is v.good, sai. Read all the chapters n really grt going.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: bawaswift



Hi Bawa Bro 😃
Nice chapter Sai... ⭐️👏Enjoyed reading it 😃

Thank you and glad to know that , you enjoyed reading it 😊

It was a nice meeting of the three ... ! Loved Arush and Ashutosh talking and getting familiar ! The likes of bikes gives a good feeling that Nidhi too likes them.. And going back to the memories sharpened... i got a funny scene where Ashu had to run away from the college kids knowing the fact that Nidhi has just spoiled one of the bike by embossing her name... 😆

😆😆

But what shook me inside is Nidhi before and Now... She was able to do anything she wanna before.. but now things are not that easy for her.. She has to think n rethink 100 times before taking any step..

its not only that , it was that rebellious streak when Ashu warned her to let it go which made her to do something as reckless as that ...yes , things has changed now and with each years those rebellious brain cell cooled down a bit 😆😆

This scene is to show how she was once and how she is now ...but she is not as she look from outside , you will learn about this nidhi as you go on 😉

Nice to know that Arush will be a truck driver... haha... these kids i tell you... 😉😛I loved the ride back home... ⭐️

Lol , when i was a kid i so wanted to be rick driver ...i was so fascinated with that dream , my mum still make fun of me telling that ...so this idea is inspired by my own forgotten dream 😆😆

Hmm... Sumthing got in Ashu's mind with Arush telling abt Rohan... But it was Nidhi's fumbled words that made Ashu more suspect.. ! This was obvious a scene i assumed before 😳

yes Ashu doubted but he is unable to voice it out ...Personally , i feel, its not easy to jump up and ask some personal questions just like that ...he could have asked and solved then and there but the huge gap of years where they lost each other , i feel its too deep to get closer so easily ...and it applied to Nidhi too.
Yes , they both will take time but when time comes , i do feel they wil talk...😳


Loved to see Ashu joining n Nidhi preparing the tea... The past memories go again sharpened thru the pics... and the recalling of Nidhi's news in a newspaper... Ashu was getting to know abt her time to time...Good 😃 Learning abt her n feeling proud all alone for her... They have suffered a lot of aloofness...

yes they have but good times are not very away...just around the corner 😉


Her doing sum thing for the special children is a part of a promise she did to him...👍🏼 So we will come to know abt it in the next one... 😃 This has come out very nicely... 👏

Thank you so much Bawa bro 😃

Its hard to breathe after that... so its the night they parted and Nidhi promised him ...!!!!!!
This is a brilliance of yours Sai... I loved the way story has taken the shapes.. Loving Ashu's presence and keen to know more abt her... 😃

Once again , Thanks to you for giving such wonderful reviews ...it makes all my hard work worthy.
But I do hope , story is not getting boring for my readers..😛😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sudhajo

It is v.good, sai. Read all the chapters n really grt going.



Thank you so much Sudha ji ...I am so happy to know that you are liking this story 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago


yes ., updated Anjani..

Please read it and let me know how it came out 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello Sai, 🤗

How are you?

Sorry really very drained up today , will read it 2morrow morning & post my review...😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Felt very sad for Ashu and Nidhi...😭

The kid is so sweet...😊
Feel bad about their past and seperation.. Must be difficult to write also...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Edited by bawaswift - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Diksha_1991

Hello Sai, 🤗

Hello Diksha 🤗


How are you?
Sorry really very drained up today , will read it 2morrow morning & post my review...😛

I am doing good ...but looks like your situation has become juts like mine

too much work ??
Take care and don't worry about review ...it can wait 😊


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Felt very sad for Ashu and Nidhi...😭

The kid is so sweet...😊
Feel bad about their past and seperation.. Must be difficult to write also...


Hi Anjani 😃
Yes , its difficult to write but i whenever i write I keep in mind that ...this pain and suffering is temporary...
It helps 😉
And yes ...Arush is sweet little Darling ...wait till u read next chapter 😉😆
you will love him more 😃

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