FF- Destiny's Play (2) Chap 7 Pg 76 Siggy pg 105 - Page 82

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Re-posting. I don't want Rajani and Anjani to miss this comment of mine. 😆

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Your words mean a lot to me. truly.

Thanks a ton for giving us yet another beautiful story, you seem to have mastered the craft of weaving ASHNi stories in different fabrics.

First of all I would like to stay thank you to Shari for the basic story line, I used to love reading it too. I think she is quite generous to hand over this baby of hers, thank you Shari. Yes no doubt you have given it to the best foster mother that can happen to the baby and no doubt this new mother is nurturing it to newer heights. So thanks to both of you once again.

My review is late, have been travelling quite a bit. So sorry for not giving back the energy to you Suvika which you deserve from your reader.

I loved the way Ranganath and Aarman's characters are potrayed, even in the serial I used to love Aarman's character. I enjoy reading the inner conflicts of Nidhi, You have able to show both side the lover and the strong woman in her beautifully. Austosh's character though seemed to be weak in the forest two chapters, I think it is becoming better in the last coule of chapters.

And I can't say enough to appreciate the subtle romance that you are trying to being in between. I know all your young readers are dying to see / read some hot romantic scene but I am a lover of subtle romantic plays I feel they are far more difficult to write and far more sweeter to read. So thank you .

I like all your other readers thoroughly enjoy reading Nidhi and Aushutoh's doctor avatar in this story. The CV od the serial surely needed some lesson from you Suvika, I used to watch Grey's anatomy during the same time and would wish why could not KTLK also have atleast 30 % time dedicated to the doctor's life? I hope you will wrtier another FF purely highlighting that aspect . But for now I am happy with what you are giving us.

In the 7^th chapter I love the way you have visualized both their dresses, the flash back on how Ashu would shrug whenever Nidhi ask him to for his opinion and the dialogue thereafter seemed so natural and yet very romantic,

Suvika, not only I enjoy your writing, I also enjoy all the other readers comments on your thread, I guess you have not only turned yourself into a writer, but with your love and encouragement you have facilitated most of your reader to good critiques.

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Oh god are going to bring Mallu in siggi😡

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Bhavit.

The clouds are not completely dark though. 😳

Originally posted by: moushu

Thanks a ton for giving us yet another beautiful story, you seem to have mastered the craft of weaving ASHNi stories in different fabrics.

You are very welcome Ishani. Glad to see you here. How are you??

First of all I would like to stay thank you to Shari for the basic story line, I used to love reading it too. I think she is quite generous to hand over this baby of hers, thank you Shari. Yes no doubt you have given it to the best foster mother that can happen to the baby and no doubt this new mother is nurturing it to newer heights.

So really glad you feel that way. I had hesitated a lot initially before approaching Shari. and told her time and again that i would completely OK even if she doesn't want me to take this one up. But she trusted me enough to agree and I would always be grateful for that.

My review is late, have been travelling quite a bit. So sorry for not giving back the energy to you Suvika which you deserve from your reader.

Not a problem. I see your like clicks so i know you are reading. That is more important for me. But when you do review...its like icing on a tasty cake.

I loved the way Ranganath and Aarman's characters are potrayed, even in the serial I used to love Aarman's character. I enjoy reading the inner conflicts of Nidhi, You have able to show both side the lover and the strong woman in her beautifully. Austosh's character though seemed to be weak in the forest two chapters, I think it is becoming better in the last coule of chapters.

Well..yes..initially he seemed that way. but I think by the end of this FF he will emerge as strong..if not more..as Nidhi.

And I can't say enough to appreciate the subtle romance that you are trying to being in between. I know all your young readers are dying to see / read some hot romantic scene but I am a lover of subtle romantic plays I feel they are far more difficult to write and far more sweeter to read. So thank you .

you are very welcome. Romance in this story needs subtlety more than exuberance. The characters that Shari has made are such. Of course, I'm molding them slowly with my own She Devil tadka as my readers call it. 😆

I like all your other readers thoroughly enjoy reading Nidhi and Aushutoh's doctor avatar in this story. The CV od the serial surely needed some lesson from you Suvika, I used to watch Grey's anatomy during the same time and would wish why could not KTLK also have atleast 30 % time dedicated to the doctor's life? I hope you will wrtier another FF purely highlighting that aspect . But for now I am happy with what you are giving us.

I used to wonder the same. They don't need any additional budget for that. A laptop with internet would be enough to gather all the material needed and then it would be a matter of making that as factual as possible.

In the 7^th chapter I love the way you have visualized both their dresses, the flash back on how Ashu would shrug whenever Nidhi ask him to for his opinion and the dialogue thereafter seemed so natural and yet very romantic,

😃 Thank you.

Suvika, not only I enjoy your writing, I also enjoy all the other readers comments on your thread, I guess you have not only turned yourself into a writer, but with your love and encouragement you have facilitated most of your reader to good critiques.

Yeah. I guess so. I lost the number of times my readers have helped me through a tough scene. Songs, scenes..you name it, they have had a hand in it. Love the way they contribute and never hesitate to come forward. All I had to do was come to my thread and call.

Although I don't inter act on the thread, I am taking this opportunity to know that your spamming and teasing and reviews are a pleasure to read. Have enjoyed reading Vidisha, suku, rajani, anjani, ruch, swati, bawa and every one eles's comment. Love you all, Suvikans, thanks to you Suvika for making your thread the way it is. Hope to use this as an example in my classes on cross border relationships.

Oh WOW! Awesome!! And thank you. A big big hug to you and all my readers / critics / spammers. 🤗 ❤️

Originally posted by: vshenoy

Yes. I searched and searched and finally found the perfect picture of her. 👍🏼

Originally posted by: oaz30

Arey Siggy is good but when is next post