Shadows - Page 3

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Very nice Doc Babs 👏

You have a hidden poetess in you.. n this is an asset for the forum !!! ⭐️⭐️

Very beautiful n emotional lines... shadows .. shadows of past n sadness.. !

Liked it as its written thru your heart.. n you have mentioned that you penned it down in just 10 minutes.. Wow ! Now thats called greatness ! 👏👏

Very emotional thoughts.. plzz keep bringing in more..😃

God has something for you..

A light for every shadow.. A relief for every sorrow.. And a plan for every tomorrow... Means a key to every problem ! 😃

Originally posted by: pansy123

Thank you my dear friend 🤗...this is not at all a small effort, this has made my attempt 😳...Worth it!

👏 So poignantly penned yet with a resolve, moons of memories may drip lovely light, stars above may hum a lullaby to ease the pain but it's not easy to encounter the beautiful images of past...and ultimately what remains are the trials of heart and sight... "Shadows of thoughts are all that survive"...Simply Awesome!

your resolve reminds me of Ghalibs couplet...

Koi din gar zindagaanii aur hai

apne jii mein hamne Thaanii aur hai

If life is for a few more days
In my mind I have resolved something else 🤗 Keep writing.

Originally posted by: sshirley

How did I miss this, SERIOUSLY!!!!!

Dr. Babs, you are really evolving into a fab poetess - unbelievable!!

So, that day is not far, friends, when Dr. Babs will give us all a sweet poetic ff or os. Kyun ji Dr. Babs, kya khayal hai?

so, how r u Dr. Babs, its been a while since we interacted.

Originally posted by: bc123456

Thanks Shirley lovely to have u here , me is just putting thoughts on paper , don't imagine I am a poetess😆, have just written some thoughts

How are u and what are undoing other than relaxing in the break?

Originally posted by: rrdsu

WOW DOC..LOVELY..👏

Originally posted by: sshirley

I am fine ji..

pmed u with the rest of the answers😃

Originally posted by: Veenaper

Hey Doc what fabulous lines - yes after reading our Princess Poet Pansy's Priceless Post you seem to be truly inspired. Brilliant effort by you.

I remembered this divine and heavenly poem by Anne Bronte -

Blessed be Thou for all the joy
My soul has felt today!
O let its memory stay with me
And never pass away!

I was alone, for those I loved
Were far away from me,
The sun shone on the withered grass,
The wind blew fresh and free.

Was it the smile of early spring
That made my bosom glow?
'Twas sweet, but neither sun nor wind
Could raise my spirit so.

Was it some feeling of delight,
All vague and undefined?
No, 'twas a rapture deep and strong,
Expanding in the mind!