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Posted: 11 years ago
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Here's to add on to the small poem I wrote , and inspired by Pansys beautiful writing

As the days go bye , and the shadows lengthen ,
The resolve in me somehow strengthens,
Yes , I do miss you ,
In every deed and thought ,
Your presence is always there ,
Your smile , the quiet serenity of you ,
Am I trapped forever in the shadows,
The sun , the moon , the stars , yes they shine ,
But for me the shadows are where I dwell ,
Waiting eternally for the sound of your swell,
It seems but yesterday that all was well ,
But , now each day is darkness ,
Morning and dusk , mingle with the night ,
Did I wish for that smile ,
To light up the world awhile,
That's not the way of life ,
Shadows of thoughts are all that survive ,



After Pansys fabulous writing this is but a small effort , hope u like it

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Posted: 11 years ago
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GM DOC

Love to read ur morning post DOC

Truly a well written poem Doc

Love this part a lot Doc so creative , meaningful thought DOC 👏

But , now each day is darkness ,
Morning and dusk , mingle with the night ,
Did I wish for that smile ,
To light up the world awhile,
That's not the way of life ,
Shadows of thoughts are all that survive ,


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Posted: 11 years ago
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AWesome! Doc Babs, you are turning into quiet a poetess. Remembering those that are gone with only memories left behind, nicely described. 😛
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Originally posted by: ariyadasa

GM DOC

Love to read ur morning post DOC

Truly a well written poem Doc

Love this part a lot Doc so creative , meaningful thought DOC 👏

But , now each day is darkness ,
Morning and dusk , mingle with the night ,
Did I wish for that smile ,
To light up the world awhile,
That's not the way of life ,
Shadows of thoughts are all that survive ,




Thank u Ariya for liking it , it was penned down in 10 mins when it came to my mind , shadows are maybe what made me think , that how much of our lives we live with them
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Originally posted by: aardhan

AWesome! Doc Babs, you are turning into quiet a poetess. Remembering those that are gone with only memories left behind, nicely described. 😛



Am discovering this side of me always thought of myself as a true blue professional , with only logic in my mind enjoying this side , and making u all my guinea pigs😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fab poem..Dr.Babs..beautifully written..loved it..👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice👏

Please give happy endings please..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nicely written poetry Dr. Babs 👏👏
The shadows of thoughts making each day and night sad. Very emotional words with your heart putting into it. Liked how you have shown the feelings of depressed days overshadowing the good ones. Very touching yet beautiful words. 🤗



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely poem Docji!! 👏 I always find your comments beautifully expressing your thoughts but never overburdened with words. Great to read versification of your thoughts the same way - Simple yet beautiful!! 👏

And you did this in just 10 min time!! 👏 Hats off to new-found "Shighra Kaviyatri" of forum!! 👏

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