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Aardhan

@aardhan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Hi Sagi. How are you? 😃 More importantly, where are you?

I must say intriguing start. And seems a tad bit horrific too 😳 So is Ashutosh is the scar faced guy and all this mysterious talk about Nidhi has whetted my appetite now. SO do continue, by the looks of it, this seems another horror-comic creation from you 😃

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Sagi97

@Sagi97

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Anjani9
Sagi, Waiting for the update...😊

Don't tell me Ashutosh's job is store keeper etc...😆

I am also there to protect you from ADs...😃

How is Nikki???

Everything is fine. BTW, you have missed on Ashutosh's profession. He is NOT a storekeeper.

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Sagi97

@Sagi97

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: suku_07
Haila... another horror story coming up 😆 I should better prepare myself for some sleepless nights 😉

Anyways starting is gripping...eagerly waiting for some more...😳 BTW how r u and whats up these days..

Hi SUku AUnty

No this is not a horror. But a thriller. And no comedy. at least I have tried to keep it that way.

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Sagi97

@Sagi97

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: aardhan
Hi Sagi. How are you? 😃 More importantly, where are you?

I must say intriguing start. And seems a tad bit horrific too 😳 So is Ashutosh is the scar faced guy and all this mysterious talk about Nidhi has whetted my appetite now. SO do continue, by the looks of it, this seems another horror-comic creation from you 😃

Aunty..GRRR. Ashutosh is not a scar faced guy. His master is.

And this is not Horror, nor is it comic. It is a thriller.

Polishing the prologue, hope you people like it.

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Sagi97

@Sagi97

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Hi friends, posting the prologue in 10 mins.

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suku_07

@suku_07

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: s_danger

Hi SUku AUnty
No this is not a horror. But a thriller. And no comedy. at least I have tried to keep it that way.

YEah no horror but deffo a thriller... BTw after this one try Comedy...you are very good at that also.. 😊

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Prologue seems very interesting Sagi ! So its online sickness ?

Whatever has happened to Nidhi is when she is online at Facebook.. and now she has to be examined ...And she has nobody in her life except a good friend Anji.. strange move.. !

Liked Anji's tensions so obvious.. n yet to onow ant Nidhi here.. Good move Sagi. keep going dear 👏 😃

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Sagi97

@Sagi97

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: suku_07

YEah no horror but deffo a thriller... BTw after this one try Comedy...you are very good at that also.. 😊

No scope for humour in this OS.

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Sagi97

@Sagi97

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: bawaswift
Prologue seems very interesting Sagi ! So its online sickness ?
Whatever has happened to Nidhi is when she is online at Facebook.. and now she has to be examined ...And she has nobody in her life except a good friend Anji.. strange move.. !
Liked Anji's tensions so obvious.. n yet to onow ant Nidhi here.. Good move Sagi. keep going dear 👏 😃

Wait and watch. Waise my OS are a bit hatke, usme this one takes the cake.