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Rabzonedge

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Makhanchor vyakul huye radha khadi yamuna teer

Nidhi se milne ke vaste Aashutosh huye bade adheer

teer-bank adheer-restless makhanchor-Krishna

pushp khile vatika mein champa chameli juhi aur bela

Nidhi se milan na huyi Aashutosh ko lage sab karela

pushp-flower vatika-garden

Jharna gire paththar par,Usse nikle sugam sangeet

Nidhi dekhe Aashutosh ko wo hi uske man ka meet

Aakhon mein sapne,sapne sajaye khub sundar sahej

Aashutosh Nidhi ek huye bina tam-jham awem Dahej

sahej-in a proper way

Ek try hai nayi tarike se kuch likhe ki...hope ki aap sabko pasand aaye...Do give your views..😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Me second...Divya aunty aaj koi patient nahi hai kya?

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: deepa17
Me first

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: deepa17
Very nice innovation Rabzy

thankoo Deepa...😃

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Rabzonedge

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: s_danger
Me second...Divya aunty aaj koi patient nahi hai kya?

nahi sare patient bhaag gaye..😭

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Rabzonedge

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: rrdsu
Sundar Rabzy..👏

thankoo Heena 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: rabzonedge

nahi sare patient bhaag gaye..😭

Kyoun? Aapne unse muh khollar yeh sab kaha aur phir appreciation manga kya?

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Bahot khoob Rabzyyy ⭐️

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: s_danger

Kyoun? Aapne unse muh khollar yeh sab kaha aur phir appreciation manga kya?

Sagi dear.. that was too good..😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: s_danger

Kyoun? Aapne unse muh khollar yeh sab kaha aur phir appreciation manga kya?

nhi galti se aapki profile pic dekh li un logo ne aur bhag gaye 😲

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