Asmanon par hai likha FF CHAP:5 (PG:33)

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Good starting Anisha ! 👏 I liked the way you have put in the dowry issue and how Nidhi is not happy with this marriage, where her groom is interested more in the car n others " gifts " ,, ⭐️

Loved to see Ashu in the picture from the very starting.. ! So, one thing is clear that Ashu gonna rescue Nidhi and if Nidhi disagrees to the marriage.. some options have to be open for her.

Ashu in love with Natasha, makes me feel a triangle here. Hope to see this social issue lose over the decision of the bride.

Nice chapter.. will be waiting to see Ashu n Nidhi's first talk as strangers.. ! 😊

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syedzoya

@syedzoya

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Anisha22

kyun bataon

Ok na batao

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shreya

@shreya98

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Hey di u first cool down and do wat I m saing first as sagi said increase font make it catchy and then send PM to all members so they get to know about ff then u can see people reading it ok ?