Halloween....OS Final concluding part pg 69

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Anjani9

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Posted: 11 years ago

#611

Originally posted by: s_danger

Ha, I told her, Bade Kachhe lagte hai, yeh gajar, yeh tamatar, yet beetroot aur sprouts...

This is very good...poor Nikki...😊

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Sagi97

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Posted: 11 years ago

#612

Originally posted by: Anjani9
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Yeh aapki editor kaun hai? someone from the publishing house?

Sagi, Do you know why we never get to meet the EDITOR???

Seriously no idea...why do you ask? Would you like to meet her/him?

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Sagi97

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Posted: 11 years ago

#613

Originally posted by: aardhan
Chapter 5

Oh man! So much planning by the Man in the Car'... So now its time for a fake accident so The Man' can end up a resident of the hospital! What a scheme, with Amnesia added in! And so far it has worked. Does this mean now him and Peter are both admitted in the hospital and both with head injury...i am not clear about where Peter is? ... finally The man' is going for the Heist'! great!
Peter is in custody Aunty. He is not in the hospital.

The plot thickens, well thought of! Sagi, when it comes to mysteries it is very difficult to keep things straight, especially when there are multiple characters and man situations surrounding them, but so far things have been clear...
Actually beech main even I got confused. Then I drew some lines on the paper, connecting different characters, with their attributes..phir theek hogaya.

Sagi, once more the description of Dr. Sudhir, that entire para reminds me of your mother...the language and sentence construction is very similar here.

Thank you aunty.

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Sagi97

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Posted: 11 years ago

#614

Originally posted by: aardhan
Chapter 6

Wah Sagi, so much description of the building and layout. Looks like your KGH is much bigger and more like a college than just a hospital. But nice attempt there and by all accounts this detailed description is sufficient to give an idea that it was very easy to get disoriented in this place!

And once more you shifted gears... another clandestine meeting! Is Dr. Ramani important? I liked the humor with the bug' sequence! And this time it is the doctors! Now what is this?? A masked party? How convenient or is it? So now everyone has been collected in one room, including The Man'... And where are Peter and Nidhi? Both are feeling restless, so now they also arrive in the hospital or what?

Thank you AUnty...