Halloween....OS Final concluding part pg 69

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Sagi97

@Sagi97

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Posted: 11 years ago

Friends, I am trying to write a suspense thriller for the first time. My intention is mainly to scare the living daylights out of my pestering sister. Please let me know your opinion on the following storyline.

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Diksha

@Diksha_1991

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Posted: 11 years ago

Very Nice Suspense story 👏 👏

Liked it..❤️ (I really enjoy suspense stories 😊)

Pls continue, waiting for next update...😉

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

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Posted: 11 years ago

Suspense thriller ... Uee ba !!!!!!!! ,,, good description during deep dead night.. liked the way you have shown the moves at presumed Ashu's room but opening up at the kids ward ,,, I always used to do during suspense stories when i was a kid but now is enjoying it.. keep updating Sagi.. Good starting ! ⭐️

Wud like to see what happens at the masked birthday party ! 😊

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bc123456

@bc123456

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

Very interesting , u write very well , waiting for the next chapter

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gargpoo

@gargpoo

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

omg sagi..its very interesting story👏..i like suspense stories!!

plz continue soon..next update??

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Sagi97

@Sagi97

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Diksha_1991
Me First

Congrats aunty...aur dance kijiye.

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Sagi97

@Sagi97

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: bawaswift
Suspense thriller ... Uee ba !!!!!!!! ,,, good description during deep dead night.. liked the way you have shown the moves at presumed Ashu's room but opening up at the kids ward ,,, I always used to do during suspense stories when i was a kid but now is enjoying it.. keep updating Sagi.. Good starting ! ⭐️
Wud like to see what happens at the masked birthday party ! 😊

Next update hopefully tomorrow night. That is, if my sister lets me have the lappy.