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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pansy123

Awesome 👏 romantic chapter Alka JI...loved it. Love emanating from each line.

Thank you pansy.Ashni's romatic nature
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Veenaper

Alka, extremely sorry for coming in so late here. Read the last 4 chapters at one go. No sorry business please.Thank you for reading all the chap



You have carried on the relationships so beautifully. Armaan and Mallika on a firm footing and Ashu and Nidhi going very strong. Ashni's convos - both of them opening up so freely and understanding each other perfectly. Yes they are poles apart but they have fallen head over heels in love - so true opposite poles attract.
That is what we called it true love.They both had strong relation like mallika and Armaan.They both are backbone for their relation

You have portrayed their characters so well - simple souls just pining fervently for each other - Nidhi seems to be more strong but as the day for their departure is nearing, she is fighting back tears of separation and Ashu in anguish feeling the pangs himself. Loved the first feel of romance between Ashni during the camel ride. You added that lovely spark to this update.Thank you for liking this Veena


Nidhi and Anji's convos - both the girls are so sweet as always and shouldering the responsibility of taking forward their Didi's love life like true sisters. Alka, your narrations really make for some wonderful reading. All I can say is brilliant.A👍🏼nji and Nidhi relation i liked in real ktlk too

Thank you Veena for your lovely feedbcak
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Alkaji, Lovely...very nice...👏

Thank you Anjani
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kritika4ever

Sorry for late reply AlkaJi, read the updates. Beautiful story! 👏

Thank you Kritika4ever.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: deepaligupta197

Friends Alkaji has been having some net problems for the past two days , hence she has not been able to come to come to the forum.

Hopefully things wud b taken care of today n she wud b back in full swing.
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Thank you Deepali.warna aaj mera warrant nikalta
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: deepaligupta197

A very endearing chapter👏...from the very first word till the last conveys everything abt love. Very beautifully written !!

Pyaar har rang se rangeela hai

Pyaar har gum khushi ka nichod hai

Jise hum kahe hum khuda ki rehmat

Woh dil me basa pyaar hi toh hai?

Beautiful wordings Alka❤️...The best and most beautiful things in this world cannot be seen or even heard, but must be felt with the heart⭐️ Thank you Deepali and yes,it is true

Aur usne back hug le liye dono haath aage kiye aur fir Nidhi se puchha,"may i hug you?"

Nidhi sharma gai aur kuchh nahi boli sirf najare zuka li usne.

Ashu ne use peechese hug kiya yeh sparsh aaj kuchh aur hi tha.Nidhi had mixed feeling.Use khushi ho rahi thi,use sharam bhi aa rahi thi aur use darr bhi lag raha tha.

Love is not determined by actions. It's origin hides deep down behind the thick walls of one's feelings.Love is all about feelings, the more you respect someone's feelings the greater you fall for love...love the way Nidhi n Ashu r bonding together.That is ashu's cuteness.Firstly he was afraid of that love relationship and now he wanted to do anything for Nidhi but for that he need sometime.But Nidhi knew his confusion so she is inspiring him

Nidhi ne ashu ke dono hatho ko dekhkar gana sunaya,"tumhe haq hai.Muzko bahome uthao tumhe haq hai.muze zindagi bhar ko chaho muze bhi haq hai."and she started staring at ashu.

Ashutohs was surprised to see nidhi's attitude and love in her eyes.

He just stopped Nidhi and said,"bus Nidhi,tumhari aankho se ab aasoo aa jayenge.Tumhari aankhe bolti hai Nidhi.In aankhome itna pyaar?Nidhi tum bhi muze bahoot chahne lagi na?

Nidhi: major,muze pata hi nahi chala ki main aapko kabse aur kaise chahne lagi?muze pata nahi tha ki mere jaisee ladki ke liye pyaar kya maine rakhta hai?muze Anji ne kahaa tha ki nidhi jis din tumhe pyaar ho jayega fir tum bahoot toot ke pyaar karogi.

Ashutosh was lost in her eyes for some time and Nidhi too.

Nidhi: major aap muze phone karenge na?yaad karenge na muze?ya bhul jayenge?

This part of the story has been expressed so beautifully . Their feeling have been shaped up brilliantly!! love is that strong feeling you have in your heart when you've fallen for someone, it feels like something needing to burst out of your chest because it's so uncontrollable, being apart from them even for a matter of hours is tough,every time you see them smile it makes you light up inside, whenever they tell you they love you it makes you feel like the luckiest person in the world, just knowing someone feels the same way about you as you do for them, is the most amazing feeling!!!Jahaa Pyaar hota hai wahaa kahi na kahi dar bhi hota hai kyonki zindagi me har cheej predictable nahi hoti.Though woh dono ek dusreko bahoot chahte hai lekin fir bhi jaise jaise unke judai ki ghadi najdeek aa rahi hai woh dar strong hone laga hai.

Ashutosh: Nidhi,aapko janane ke liye mera dil aur aankhe hi bahoot hai.Aap mere liye duniya ki sabse pyaari ladki hai.Ha thodi zagadalu hai.thodi pagal hai.lekin dil bahoot khubsurat aur i am crazy at you.I love you more than anything in the world.

Love doesn't have eyes, it doesn't go by race or gender. Love goes by how the person makes you feel inside and sees the person for who they are on the inside.

Loved the bond that is shaping up between Mallika n Ashu n the way she understands him.

Armaan Mallika convo very sweet n conveys their beautiful relationship.Deepali,woh ekdusreko bahoot achhi tarah se janate hai toh unke liye yeh love kuchh jyada mushkil nahi hai lekin fir bhi unke beech me ek jajbaat ki kadi hai.Aur ashu aur nidhi toh anjaane se jane pahechane bane hai lekin unki bonding bahoot strong hogi.

A magnificent chapter⭐️Thank you dear

Thank you deepali for beautiful feedback
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: parmarA

Thank you Deepali.warna aaj mera warrant nikalta

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: parmarA

Thank you Bawa for your awosme feedback.Hope my reccoemnt satisfied you

Thanks for the recomment Alka di.. ! Now waiting for the next one, eagerly 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: parmarA

Thank you Deepali.warna aaj mera warrant nikalta



Most welcome🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: parmarA

Thank you Suku.Ret me camel ki bahoot khubsurat lagti hai suku


Meine kabhi dekha nahi 😕

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