Chain FF/OS- Love knows no reason - update PG 141

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Diksha

@Diksha_1991

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Hi Sujatha,

Sorry but i think, there is some problem. Because chapter is not posted properly i mean i am able to read only half. The last sentence is He had known then that he had to have her, come what may! And the perfect opportunity had presented himself at the Annual Gala Ball in Delhi!...

If you can pls help me is this the last sentence of your chapter or ??????

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rayafan17

@rayafan17

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: Sujatha.rao

Thank you Deepa...and PPW..I was hoping to better that 😳

No doubt but.. that was my first FF interaction so very spl. .. first love..

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Sujatha.rao

@Sujatha.rao

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: Anjani9
Ohh...update is there...

Yes Anjani...and I hope you like it!

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sshirley

@sshirley

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

wow Sujathaji, loved it just absolutely loved it...

loved the characterizations - u know wat?? I am not at all AD, but ur Ashu has absolutely fascinated me as a character...

Even NiHan relationship is portrayed really well..

Most of all, I m speechless at the flawless high language u use

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Sujatha.rao

@Sujatha.rao

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: achdata3
Hi Sujatha,

Sorry but i think, there is some problem. Because chapter is not posted properly i mean i am able to read only half. The last sentence is He had known then that he had to have her, come what may! And the perfect opportunity had presented himself at the Annual Gala Ball in Delhi!...
If you can pls help me is this the last sentence of your chapter or ??????

Yes it is...except that it should have read as itself instead of himself...Sorry about the proofing error..I am half asleep here 😆

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Sujatha.rao

@Sujatha.rao

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: deepa17

No doubt but.. that was my first FF interaction so very spl. .. first love..

Pehla pehla pyaar hai..pehli pehli baar hai...what a lovely song that was 😳

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Sujatha.rao

@Sujatha.rao

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: sshirley
wow Sujathaji, loved it just absolutely loved it...

loved the characterizations - u know wat?? I am not at all AD, but ur Ashu has absolutely fascinated me as a character...

Even NiHan relationship is portrayed really well...and you know what...the idea was to write Nidhi's story...and yet, Ashu is emerging the way he is...uncontrollable love for the man...what do I do..!

Most of all, I m speechless at the flawless high language u use

Shirley, am real glad you liked it...thank you...

But in accordance with current forum tradition, I am going to insist on detailed reviews 😳

Edited by Sujatha.rao - 12 years ago

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rayafan17

@rayafan17

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

I am so looking forward for the next update... Jaldi.. Jaldi.. please..

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Swati Mehta

@swati62

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Posted: 12 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: Suvika.

kya continuation hain Swati...very well done..👏

was hoping to see a different Ashu though...after all, he is someone who has even dated a couple of bollywood actresses...

so who is next??

Thank u. Never done this before😳 but now it's ur turn. We are all waiting.

Edited by swati62 - 12 years ago