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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sujatha.rao


Let me give you some food for thought... to chew on while you go feed your guests 😆

She had known love. It was this tender, warm feeling that was as soft as the Pashmina shawl that enveloped her in its warmth on cold, winter nights. It was the gentle breeze that ruffled her hair at the end of sultry days! It was the hot jalebis that Dadi Bua made for her on rainy evenings. It made her feel good. It made her feel like the world was a good place to be in. It made her feel like taking her sweetheart into her arms, protecting him from the world and himself! Love was giving!

She had known love!

What then was this emotion? That made her burn so fiercely that she thought she would be consumed by its heat. That was this storm that uprooted her from her moorings? That was this giant wave that swept away all her ingrained values, all her inhibitions and all her reservations and pushed her to abandon herself to its force. Nothing soft or gentle about it. It made her run scared from it one moment and rush to envelop it another. It made her a whole new person, someone she was not sure she recognised or was comfortable with! She shared a love hate relationship with the person it turned her into! And what of the man who roused this emotion? The man whose arms alternated between feeling like the bliss of heaven and the fires of hell! The man who was himself the greatest threat to her peace of mind and whom she needed protecting from! The man she alternated between wanting to give her all to and digging a dagger into his heart!

What then was this emotion?


aahh..thanks for this...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Edited by mudraswathi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Mudraji...no other words...please continue...i loved every word...truly. I am not just saying. Hope you realize that. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely mudra ji... what a way to pen Rohan's emotional roller coaster...please continue...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you Mudra...that I pushed Mudra to write serious stuff...instead of her usual satire,,,I am going to take all the credit for this momentous event😆

I really loved the two incidents that you used to highlight what they had been to each other. When she had stood by his side and helped him cope with loss, how was she to inflict a loss on him herself...how did she tell him that she felt strongly for another man...and Yes, he had held her hand and nursed her through a crisis,,,And now she was to plunge him into a crisis herself..


KTLK could have been all this and more,,,it could have been a painful journey...as characters grapple with their emotions, with their sense of right and wrong and so on...instead, it ended up a puerile and cliche ridden exercise...

I am also reminded of the film Dil To Pagal Hai...that could have been such an intense film exploring human emotions...instead it ended up as just another designer romantic flick...

It pains me to see good ideas wasted thus
Edited by Sujatha.rao - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Teasers making us restless...when is next update coming?????
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Posted: 12 years ago
Mudraj you took up Rohan's pov...great job...pl continue
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Awesome Mudraji...no other words...please continue...i loved every word...truly. I am not just saying. Hope you realize that. 😊



Thank you Suvika.

This is not my forte...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pansy123

Lovely mudra ji... what a way to pen Rohan's emotional roller coaster...please continue...



Thank you Pansy. A comment from you is a great achievement for me😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mudraswathi



Thank you Pansy. A comment from you is a great achievement for me😃



😳 😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳 OMG! Mudra Ji...please...Subah se koyi nahi mila
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