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Posted: 12 years ago
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Raat se khairat na mango

khud se sapne suhane dhundo

rulati rahegi zindagi aksar

hansne ke naye bahane dhundo


nayi bheed se darr jaoge

tanhai me dost purane dhundo

dil machal jaye na samhale

aise matwale nirale gaane dhundo


zakhm par zakhm lage hain agar

zakhm par sadhe nishane dhundo

lehron se aage badh aaye hai jo

unme na ab guzre jamane dhundo


kasmasate dard se bach jaoge agar

ajnabiyon me na jane-pehchane dhundo

Bina chat ke apne ghar me raho 'Divya'

kahin aur na jagmagate thikane dhundo...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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divya 🤗

whole of the poem is nice but i like this part very much 😳


zakhm par zakhm lage hain agar

zakhm par sadhe nishane dhundo

lehron se aage badh aaye hai jo

unme na ab guzre jamane dhundo



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful poem Rabzy just so soulful loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nayi bheed se darr jaoge

tanhai me dost purane dhundo

Beautiful👏👏👏👏

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice Rabzy.. awesome writing.. that's why i wanted peom contest.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: nidhirohan


divya 🤗

whole of the poem is nice but i like this part very much 😳


zakhm par zakhm lage hain agar

zakhm par sadhe nishane dhundo

lehron se aage badh aaye hai jo

unme na ab guzre jamane dhundo





Thanks NR...you are so sweet..🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sonyjknum

nayi bheed se darr jaoge

tanhai me dost purane dhundo

Beautiful👏


Sony you are always encouraging...Thanks..😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: deepa17

Very nice Rabzy.. awesome writing.. that's why i wanted peom contest.


Deepa i wanted Poem contest too..
But anyways Thank you..😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautiful dhundo shayari Rabzy!! 👏👏 😉😉

are


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Posted: 12 years ago
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⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ Beautiful poem Divyaji!! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 Seems like a ghazal with the rhyming and thoughts expressed in it... Loved these lines:

Bina chat ke apne ghar me raho 'Divya'

kahin aur na jagmagate thikane dhundo...






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